Comment from terry drake

Good

5-9-5 syllable count verse format submission to comply with a 5-7-5 syllable count verse format challenge that failed to comply. Your word Blos-som-ing flow-ers ev-er-y-where (9)The other way this can be read is Blos-som-ing flow-ers eve-ry-where (8)

 Comment Written 30-Sep-2012

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reply by the author on 01-Oct-2012

Thanks for your comments. Just wanted to know/clarify if every-where has two syllables?

reply by terry drake on 01-Oct-2012

every-where is at least three syllables

Comment from ernesto escarro

Excellent

Joys of Nature


When life appears, there birds to sing, flowers blooming for romantic affair with the bees and butterflies.
Simulated in the life of mankind.

 Comment Written 30-Sep-2012

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reply by the author on 01-Oct-2012

Very true indeed. Its the nature that makes us feel fresh and happy.

reply by ernesto escarro on 01-Oct-2012

Thanks for sharing.

Comment from Dodey

Excellent

Beautiful Haiku describing the joys of Spring..Your great choice of words bring clear imagery of the wonderful gifts nature bestows upon us..Not sure if 'Spring' should be with a capitol 'S' in this form, so I am taking nothing from the 5 stars awarded....Much enjoyed...Bravo...Dee.

 Comment Written 30-Sep-2012

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reply by the author on 01-Oct-2012

Thank you for the appreciation.