Comment from Joy Graham

Excellent

I am so happy to see that you posted another chapter. Yippee! I came to read it immediately. I am so sad to hear that you are almost finished this story. This is a great story and I am anxious to read all the other stories that this group are in.

 Comment Written 23-Sep-2012

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reply by the author on 23-Sep-2012

Hey Joy,

It's like parting ... it's always such sweet sorrow. Ending books are always the best of times and the worst of times. I'm at, like 16 now. It's still a blast and I hope it never ends. What would I do after this?

Hugs and big thanks,
Gayle

Comment from shelley kaye

Excellent

burried <-- buried has only one 'r'

other than that, this was a great chapter
lenny's gonna freak when he can't find terry though LOL!
can't wait to see who finds ella first - i think it'll be amy, she'll start barking when they get close and ella will hear her :)

good work - thanx for sharing! :)

 Comment Written 23-Sep-2012

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reply by the author on 23-Sep-2012

Got that "R", for sure. Danged Eddie. Yep, I think Lenny will have a cow for sure. Don't think anyone's going to do well in this one.

Thanks for the great comments,

Hugs,
Gayle

Comment from c_lucas

Excellent

The calvary is about to arrive by means of a pissed off twin sister and a highly trained dog. This has very strong tension and held the reader's attention. Good job.

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 Comment Written 23-Sep-2012

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reply by the author on 23-Sep-2012

Indeed it is, Charlie. Now if we can just get Amy into the house without her becoming a snack!

Thanks so much for the great review and comments,
Hugs,
Gayle

reply by c_lucas on 23-Sep-2012

You're welcome.

Comment from barbara.wilkey

Excellent

I wonder why they kidnapped Ella. Did I miss something? Is it going to come out later. I bet Amy and Terry can find Ella. I enjoyed reading.

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 Comment Written 23-Sep-2012

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reply by the author on 23-Sep-2012

Hi Barbara,

In the beginning, Darius wanted to kidnap Ella and Terry so he could start his own 'pack' as it were. He settled for Ella alone and when he went back to the Retreat that last time, Amy got him and then the 'gator really got him. Oy!

This book is just about done and then I go for the first 'real' edit, wherein many new things will happen!

Thanks so much for the great support all along!

Hugs,
Gayle