Along the Jericho Road
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Comment from Realist101
I should have waited til Sat. so I could give a six. This is exceptionally well written Bev ... Wow. I love how tense this is. Very riveting. And did you say this will be in print? I hope so. I want a copy. Hugs! Susan
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reply by the author on 22-Sep-2012
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I should have waited til Sat. so I could give a six. This is exceptionally well written Bev ... Wow. I love how tense this is. Very riveting. And did you say this will be in print? I hope so. I want a copy. Hugs! Susan
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Comment Written 22-Sep-2012
reply by the author on 22-Sep-2012
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Hi, Susan. Thank you so much for taking time to read my chapter, generous lady. Your support is so very much appreciated! Hugs, Bev
Comment from Maustin
"The staff had become a writhing, spitting nest of snakes. She tried to scramble backwards, but her body would not respond."
First of all, your characters are so believable. The dialogue is like I am watching a great movie on the television. Good character development you continue to mold in each chapter. Furthermore, your descriptive adjectives and metaphor, just a above is simply so visual and brilliant!! I could just see the staff in front of me, as you depicted in your work. Great story that keeps moving on. Good suspense you are building too. Great write!!!! A 10**** Enjoyed.
reply by the author on 22-Sep-2012
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"The staff had become a writhing, spitting nest of snakes. She tried to scramble backwards, but her body would not respond."
First of all, your characters are so believable. The dialogue is like I am watching a great movie on the television. Good character development you continue to mold in each chapter. Furthermore, your descriptive adjectives and metaphor, just a above is simply so visual and brilliant!! I could just see the staff in front of me, as you depicted in your work. Great story that keeps moving on. Good suspense you are building too. Great write!!!! A 10**** Enjoyed.
Comment Written 22-Sep-2012
reply by the author on 22-Sep-2012
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Hi, Miracle. Thanks for your gracious and generous review. Your words have me over the moon!! I can't thank you enough for your support, my friend. Love you ... Bev
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You are so welcome Bev!!!
Love and Blessings to you always,
Miracle *;)~
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You, too, sweetheart.
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*;)~ thank you, Bev....
Comment from TammyGail
Bev this was excellent really
i hate i can't give you a six star
still stifled ... you indeed deserve
one I'll make sure mark reads it
your closing was intense
thanks for sharing always enjoy your writing
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reply by the author on 22-Sep-2012
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Bev this was excellent really
i hate i can't give you a six star
still stifled ... you indeed deserve
one I'll make sure mark reads it
your closing was intense
thanks for sharing always enjoy your writing
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Comment Written 22-Sep-2012
reply by the author on 22-Sep-2012
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Tammy, I am thrilled with your review. I'm glad you liked the ending. I broke one of those writing rules that says dream sequences are amateur. In this case, I felt it added to the story. So, I really especially appreciate your confirmation. Love ya, Bev
