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Rapt

Remembering moment of intensely shared love

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Comment from kiwisteveh
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Good sense of place (or rather, event) in your 5-7-5
Strong verbs in each line (rapt, enfolded, merge) give power to the poem.
Good luck i9n the contest.

Steve

 Comment Written 19-Jan-2013

reply by the author on 22-Jan-2013
    Thanks, glad you enjoyed it.
Comment from hollyinvesuvianite
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You really have these 5-7-5's down to a tee. Great verbs used here- 'enfolded,' 'rapt, and 'merge.' fantastic visual created with the simplicity and brevity of this piece of writing. Great work! Holly

 Comment Written 19-Jan-2013

reply by the author on 22-Jan-2013
    Thanks, I'm happy you appreciated it.
Comment from Glasstruth
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Poetic as the rainfall itself. Each drop of these syllables merge into my conscious being. Love how you compared rain to music. Superb 5-7-5. Good luck with the contest. Les

 Comment Written 19-Jan-2013

reply by the author on 22-Jan-2013
    Thank you, I'm glad you found it enjoyable.
Comment from fairy77
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haha loved it's a true story.This is lovely presentation and simply marvellous.You said a lot in very small words.Liked bodies merge as one.Nice piece!beth fairy77.

 Comment Written 18-Jan-2013

reply by the author on 19-Jan-2013
    Thanks, glad you enjoyed it
Comment from Pili Pubul
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What a cozy feeling you inspire with your well word choice.
I love very much this poem , the imagery
and feeling. Thank you for sharing.

 Comment Written 18-Jan-2013

reply by the author on 19-Jan-2013
    Thank you, I'm happy it struck a chord with you.
Comment from mrsmajor
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Romantic poem, short and sweet...keeping with the 5-7-5 syllable count...I enjoyed this very much, and thank you for sharing!
Warmly,
Victoria

 Comment Written 18-Jan-2013

reply by the author on 19-Jan-2013
    Thank you, glad you found it enjoyable.
Comment from RedGryffyn
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Interesting poem. The syllable count is accurate. But what really makes this poem great is the grammar. The word choice make it a great read for anybody. The flow and progression make it most excellent along with the pace.

 Comment Written 18-Jan-2013

reply by the author on 19-Jan-2013
    Thank you, I appreciate your review.
Comment from Joannforsberg
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Nice entry for the 5-7-5 entry. And congratulations on the ALL TIME BEST STATUS. You know then others have enjoyed it also. LIke the use of enfolded and then merge. Blessings, JO

 Comment Written 18-Jan-2013

reply by the author on 19-Jan-2013
    Thanks, I'm happy you found it enjoyable.
Comment from Tonulak
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A very effective 5/7/5 capturing a mood and tying the elements with sensuality. Beautiful symbolic language and metaphor. I enjoyed it--Ted

 Comment Written 18-Jan-2013

reply by the author on 19-Jan-2013
    My thanks, glad you enjoyed it.
Comment from BLACKDYKE
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I love sexual poetry apacheman, and
that doesn't mean I am a pervert of
any kind! I read into this little
ditti al that it means. A picture might
just enhance it, but don't take notice
of an old codger past his prime!. Eric

 Comment Written 18-Jan-2013

reply by the author on 19-Jan-2013
    Thank you, I couldn't find a picture that quite fit. Glad you enjoyed it.
reply by BLACKDYKE on 19-Jan-2013
    My pleasure