The Door to the Elders
Rejection by those who judge49 total reviews
Comment from Meta~Mark
Falling to the Underworld of Rejection, The Door to the Elders looms before me. This is some doom and gloom my friend like a darkened cauldrun.
Scorched earth policy indeed, way to go!
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2012
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Falling to the Underworld of Rejection, The Door to the Elders looms before me. This is some doom and gloom my friend like a darkened cauldrun.
Scorched earth policy indeed, way to go!
Comment Written 22-Sep-2012
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2012
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thank you very much...dark lord
Comment from sweetwoodjax
this is very well written, dklrdmcches, you did an excelent job wirting this free verse poem about one who was denied entrance to the room the elders had, i enjoyed reading it
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2012
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this is very well written, dklrdmcches, you did an excelent job wirting this free verse poem about one who was denied entrance to the room the elders had, i enjoyed reading it
Comment Written 22-Sep-2012
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2012
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thank you very much...dark lord
Comment from chasdflynn
Great story and you certainly took me with you. I enjoyed it and found it easy to follow. My only thought is we all fail when it comes to be judged. Hopefully we get a pass for trying.
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2012
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Great story and you certainly took me with you. I enjoyed it and found it easy to follow. My only thought is we all fail when it comes to be judged. Hopefully we get a pass for trying.
Comment Written 22-Sep-2012
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2012
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thank you very much...dark lord
Comment from Giddy Nielsen-Sweep
Maybe it's time the doors were smashed down and the elders faced up to. The great struggle is going on with the inner mind, a struggle for freedom. Take heart, my friend, the struggl is only withi you. Your poem has a very passionate cry for help. Giddy
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2012
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Maybe it's time the doors were smashed down and the elders faced up to. The great struggle is going on with the inner mind, a struggle for freedom. Take heart, my friend, the struggl is only withi you. Your poem has a very passionate cry for help. Giddy
Comment Written 22-Sep-2012
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2012
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Thank you so very much...dark lord
Comment from kra-z-ka-z
I read your "introduction" and yes, this is quite haunting! I had no trouble visualizing the scenario and could almost feel myself waiting; longing at the door...
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2012
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I read your "introduction" and yes, this is quite haunting! I had no trouble visualizing the scenario and could almost feel myself waiting; longing at the door...
Comment Written 22-Sep-2012
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2012
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Thank you so very much...dark lord
Comment from Crystal Carey
Very nice poem, I enjoyed the flow and the rhythm. It is the perfect time for some darkness being so close to Halloween and all. I did not see any obvious spelling errors.
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2012
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Very nice poem, I enjoyed the flow and the rhythm. It is the perfect time for some darkness being so close to Halloween and all. I did not see any obvious spelling errors.
Comment Written 22-Sep-2012
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2012
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thank you so very much....dark lord
Comment from Khione Lock
I love how you incorporate most of the senses....the smell of sulfur...the texture of the door. The picture helps tell the story...you did a really good job with this.
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2012
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I love how you incorporate most of the senses....the smell of sulfur...the texture of the door. The picture helps tell the story...you did a really good job with this.
Comment Written 21-Sep-2012
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2012
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thank you very much....dark lord
Comment from donaldww
The poet has found the door to the Elders and is on the brink of finding wisdom. The Elders thrive on the insanity of those who have called before.
Thunder claps are heard as the moment of judgement approaches.
Cheers,
DW
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2012
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The poet has found the door to the Elders and is on the brink of finding wisdom. The Elders thrive on the insanity of those who have called before.
Thunder claps are heard as the moment of judgement approaches.
Cheers,
DW
Comment Written 21-Sep-2012
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2012
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thank you very much...dark lord
Comment from Oldsteamer
Ask and you will be given.
Seek and you will find.
Sounds like a pack of crappy prima Donna elders to me if they aren't willing to impart knowledge to some hapless soul.
Of course there is the part about casting pearls to swine.
You choose.
Regards,
- R -
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2012
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Ask and you will be given.
Seek and you will find.
Sounds like a pack of crappy prima Donna elders to me if they aren't willing to impart knowledge to some hapless soul.
Of course there is the part about casting pearls to swine.
You choose.
Regards,
- R -
Comment Written 21-Sep-2012
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2012
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thank you so very much...dark lord
Comment from Dawn Munro
Again this is a poem that has my mind twisting to understand it - just when I think all becomes clear, you somersault - my example? This: "As I am struck down by the Gargoyles of Denial, I catch a glimpse of success." (You have not succeeded.) "Falling to the Underworld of Rejection, The Door to the Elders looms before me." Are you about to begin your quest again? Again I can rate it no lower than a five on mastery of language and drama alone.
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2012
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Again this is a poem that has my mind twisting to understand it - just when I think all becomes clear, you somersault - my example? This: "As I am struck down by the Gargoyles of Denial, I catch a glimpse of success." (You have not succeeded.) "Falling to the Underworld of Rejection, The Door to the Elders looms before me." Are you about to begin your quest again? Again I can rate it no lower than a five on mastery of language and drama alone.
Comment Written 21-Sep-2012
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2012
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thank you so very much...dark lord
