Hopeful Child
Its about hopes of a child in a struggling broken family3 total reviews
Comment from rtoddwatts22
A very touching message of hope from child to mother. Your syllable count and structure are in fine shape for the contest. Only one correction with the first line- "wont" should be "won't" for will not. Excellent 5-7-5 Poem!
Best Wishes, Todd
reply by the author on 10-Sep-2012
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A very touching message of hope from child to mother. Your syllable count and structure are in fine shape for the contest. Only one correction with the first line- "wont" should be "won't" for will not. Excellent 5-7-5 Poem!
Best Wishes, Todd
Comment Written 09-Sep-2012
reply by the author on 10-Sep-2012
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Thank you very much for the comment and correction.
Comment from dmt1967
This is a sad poem about I would say sorrow a mum and daughter has maybe the dad and husband have died very sad good luck in the contest and thank you for sharing
reply by the author on 10-Sep-2012
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This is a sad poem about I would say sorrow a mum and daughter has maybe the dad and husband have died very sad good luck in the contest and thank you for sharing
Comment Written 09-Sep-2012
reply by the author on 10-Sep-2012
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Thank you very much.
Comment from petervs
This was a very touching poem, one many poeple will relate to!! My friend would absolutely love your poem!!!! Thanks for sharing!! I wish you nothing ut the best in the contest!!!!!!!!!! =))))))
reply by the author on 10-Sep-2012
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This was a very touching poem, one many poeple will relate to!! My friend would absolutely love your poem!!!! Thanks for sharing!! I wish you nothing ut the best in the contest!!!!!!!!!! =))))))
Comment Written 09-Sep-2012
reply by the author on 10-Sep-2012
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Thank you very much for your comment.
