The Almighty
A set of Cinquain-For Peter@Poole22 total reviews
Comment from hollyinvesuvianite
Kamran, this is really a wondrous piece about the profound effects of faith and, you are so right, how can anyone deny His Supreme existence. Great work! God bless, Holly P.S. Are you moving again?
reply by the author on 10-Sep-2012
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Kamran, this is really a wondrous piece about the profound effects of faith and, you are so right, how can anyone deny His Supreme existence. Great work! God bless, Holly P.S. Are you moving again?
Comment Written 10-Sep-2012
reply by the author on 10-Sep-2012
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Ever since I retired in 2008, I am not settled...I want to go back to India and live there but wife doesn't want to leave our children/grandchildren, she wants to be with and around them, so basically, I am in transit my friend, a vagabond, here today and not sure of tomorrow, sorry, got carried away. As always, I am grateful to you for your kind words/review, God bless you.
Comment from rashi kumar
Even the blind have an insight. So very beautifully crafted!
Yesterday one reviewer said a very nice thing to my poem on faith in God- "They struggle to prove that God does not exist, never realizing that if a thing or person does not exist there is no reason to discuss or even think about them"
These are such beautiful and insightful cinquains.
The second stanza is very powerful.
Pleasure to read! Take care
Namaste
reply by the author on 10-Sep-2012
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Even the blind have an insight. So very beautifully crafted!
Yesterday one reviewer said a very nice thing to my poem on faith in God- "They struggle to prove that God does not exist, never realizing that if a thing or person does not exist there is no reason to discuss or even think about them"
These are such beautiful and insightful cinquains.
The second stanza is very powerful.
Pleasure to read! Take care
Namaste
Comment Written 10-Sep-2012
reply by the author on 10-Sep-2012
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Thank you beti, I am pleased to read your wonderful comments and happy that you like the write, thank you and take care, namaste.
Comment from artemis53
Thank you. ameen for putting down these very lovely and pure words. You've breached a question that many avoid. "Even the blind have an insight." Excellent phrase!!!!!
reply by the author on 10-Sep-2012
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Thank you. ameen for putting down these very lovely and pure words. You've breached a question that many avoid. "Even the blind have an insight." Excellent phrase!!!!!
Comment Written 10-Sep-2012
reply by the author on 10-Sep-2012
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Diane my friend, I thank you for the encouraging comments and wonderful review, God bless you.
Comment from Meta~Mark
This is original and genius my freind and so spot on, BRAVO, 6 :)
He Who
Nourishes and
Sustains life within and
Even without a male's sperm, ask
Jesus!
reply by the author on 10-Sep-2012
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This is original and genius my freind and so spot on, BRAVO, 6 :)
He Who
Nourishes and
Sustains life within and
Even without a male's sperm, ask
Jesus!
Comment Written 10-Sep-2012
reply by the author on 10-Sep-2012
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Hello again my friend, so kind of you to stop by and I am grateful to you for the wonderful and generous review, thank you very much, God bless you.
Comment from Titanx9
When folks say they don't believe in the Divine Creator, I refer them to Romans 1:19-25. Paul says we have an innate sense of His existence, whether or not we accept it. You provide some of the most convincing evidence of His existence, and I agree with what you've written in this beautiful poem. The flow, rhythm and word choice are all excellent!
reply by the author on 10-Sep-2012
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When folks say they don't believe in the Divine Creator, I refer them to Romans 1:19-25. Paul says we have an innate sense of His existence, whether or not we accept it. You provide some of the most convincing evidence of His existence, and I agree with what you've written in this beautiful poem. The flow, rhythm and word choice are all excellent!
Comment Written 09-Sep-2012
reply by the author on 10-Sep-2012
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Hello again Dossie, my friend I thank you for the beautiful comments and the kind/generous review, God bless you.
Comment from Gungalo
Ameen, this is wonderful and so very beautiful. It says a lot about the Lord and His ways. Don't ever lose you faith guy for it's what you base you life on. Gorgeous.
reply by the author on 09-Sep-2012
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Ameen, this is wonderful and so very beautiful. It says a lot about the Lord and His ways. Don't ever lose you faith guy for it's what you base you life on. Gorgeous.
Comment Written 09-Sep-2012
reply by the author on 09-Sep-2012
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I thank you my friend, pleased that you like the write, thank you very much, God bless you.
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Always Ameen, always.
Comment from vfbryant
That's a 6 star for sure. Wonderful description of some of the amazing attributes of God, and I loved your "Just ask..." lines. The picture is great because your poem expresses the same unwavering faith that the child exhibits. I wouldn't have cared a twit whether you wrote this in a Cinquain or not, but I'm very impressed that you did. Great piece. Valerie
reply by the author on 09-Sep-2012
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That's a 6 star for sure. Wonderful description of some of the amazing attributes of God, and I loved your "Just ask..." lines. The picture is great because your poem expresses the same unwavering faith that the child exhibits. I wouldn't have cared a twit whether you wrote this in a Cinquain or not, but I'm very impressed that you did. Great piece. Valerie
Comment Written 09-Sep-2012
reply by the author on 09-Sep-2012
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Hello Valerie, my friend, I am delighted that you like the write, I am honored by your visit and the wonderful, generous review, thank you very much, God bless you.
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Sent you a message. :)
Comment from sweetwoodjax
this is very well written, ameen, you did a great job writing this cinquain series about the omnipotence of God and He is the creator of all. i enjoyed reading it.
reply by the author on 09-Sep-2012
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this is very well written, ameen, you did a great job writing this cinquain series about the omnipotence of God and He is the creator of all. i enjoyed reading it.
Comment Written 09-Sep-2012
reply by the author on 09-Sep-2012
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swj my friend, I am pleased that you like the write, appreciate your time and the wonderful review, thank you very much.
Comment from dmt1967
This is a very good poem I like the picture of a little boy praying it enhances the poem and gives it body thank you for sharing well done
reply by the author on 09-Sep-2012
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This is a very good poem I like the picture of a little boy praying it enhances the poem and gives it body thank you for sharing well done
Comment Written 09-Sep-2012
reply by the author on 09-Sep-2012
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Hello dmt1967, my friend, I am glad you stopped by and that you like the write, thank you very much.
Comment from Joan E.
I admired your prayerful cinquain series and your creative two syllable final lines. "Even the blind have insight" is a memorable line as well. Happy Sunday- Joan
reply by the author on 09-Sep-2012
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I admired your prayerful cinquain series and your creative two syllable final lines. "Even the blind have insight" is a memorable line as well. Happy Sunday- Joan
Comment Written 09-Sep-2012
reply by the author on 09-Sep-2012
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Joan my friend, I am grateful to you for your time and the lovely review, thank you very much, have a wonderful evening.
