Dodgy Desiderata
A hoodlum's rules for life72 total reviews
Comment from Selestia
Certainly colorful and certainly clever use of the ABC format. Very well done. I really like this advice: "Wear a balaclava when a public place you rob." Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 08-Sep-2012
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Certainly colorful and certainly clever use of the ABC format. Very well done. I really like this advice: "Wear a balaclava when a public place you rob." Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 07-Sep-2012
reply by the author on 08-Sep-2012
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Thanks for the nice review and generous stars.
PS Black stockings work just as well!
Comment from Thesis
That's quite a list for hoodlums. I like the slant - "Some people don't deserve their wealth." It's a fun way to look at crime and punisment, lol.
God post. Good luck with the contest.
reply by the author on 08-Sep-2012
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That's quite a list for hoodlums. I like the slant - "Some people don't deserve their wealth." It's a fun way to look at crime and punisment, lol.
God post. Good luck with the contest.
Comment Written 07-Sep-2012
reply by the author on 08-Sep-2012
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Thanks for the nice review and generous stars.
Comment from Heaven Bound
What a creative way of applying the A-B-Cs. You did quite well in the writing. You might want to think about using a different font or background color.
reply by the author on 08-Sep-2012
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What a creative way of applying the A-B-Cs. You did quite well in the writing. You might want to think about using a different font or background color.
Comment Written 07-Sep-2012
reply by the author on 08-Sep-2012
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Thanks for the nice review and generous stars.
Comment from gazzagodbod
had a couple from this contest pop up and im loving it yours is cleverly written and entertaining and the pictures perfect thank you gazza
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had a couple from this contest pop up and im loving it yours is cleverly written and entertaining and the pictures perfect thank you gazza
Comment Written 07-Sep-2012
reply by the author on 08-Sep-2012
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Thanks for the nice review and generous stars.
Comment from Spitfire
A great subject matter. Each line is a gem. And end rhyme too.
What more can a reader ask. Favorite lines:
Help out a mate who's locked away by visiting his wife.
Just a little sweetener can make a cop go blind.
Muscly men with baseball bats deserve your best respecting.
Never mess with Mr Big; kneecaps are worth protecting.
reply by the author on 08-Sep-2012
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A great subject matter. Each line is a gem. And end rhyme too.
What more can a reader ask. Favorite lines:
Help out a mate who's locked away by visiting his wife.
Just a little sweetener can make a cop go blind.
Muscly men with baseball bats deserve your best respecting.
Never mess with Mr Big; kneecaps are worth protecting.
Comment Written 07-Sep-2012
reply by the author on 08-Sep-2012
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Thanks for the nice review and generous stars. Glad you enjoyed my 'crim's rules for life.'
Comment from MumEsGirl
This was brilliant. Well written, flowing well and full of excellent advice for those of intending to take up a dubious career.
Look forward to more of your work
hugs
kate
reply by the author on 08-Sep-2012
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This was brilliant. Well written, flowing well and full of excellent advice for those of intending to take up a dubious career.
Look forward to more of your work
hugs
kate
Comment Written 07-Sep-2012
reply by the author on 08-Sep-2012
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Thanks so much, Kate, for th enthusiastic review and the six stars.
Comment from Rembrandt
This is really great! Clever, creative, imaginative, and... wait a minute... How come you know so much about all this? Are you on the prison library computer again?
WELL DONE! Now I'll vote!
reply by the author on 08-Sep-2012
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This is really great! Clever, creative, imaginative, and... wait a minute... How come you know so much about all this? Are you on the prison library computer again?
WELL DONE! Now I'll vote!
Comment Written 07-Sep-2012
reply by the author on 08-Sep-2012
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Yeah, they give me extra time on the computers if I show the guards how to download pirated movies like The Shawshank Redemption and The Great Escape.
Thanks!!
Comment from janalma
This is really good. You managed to have wonderful rhymes all the way thru, yet none of them sound forced and the piece retains it's logic (burglar wise, haha). You also incorporated the tips into more than one line so that the words flow from one to the next quite naturally. Well done.
reply by the author on 08-Sep-2012
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This is really good. You managed to have wonderful rhymes all the way thru, yet none of them sound forced and the piece retains it's logic (burglar wise, haha). You also incorporated the tips into more than one line so that the words flow from one to the next quite naturally. Well done.
Comment Written 07-Sep-2012
reply by the author on 08-Sep-2012
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Thank you - glad you enjoyed.
Comment from visionary1234
oh yeah! what a fun interpretation of the ABC's of life!! loved it! very different from the usual boring ones detailing ad infinitum all our desirable higher values (yawn!!!) Way cool entry my friend!
:) Sharyn
reply by the author on 08-Sep-2012
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oh yeah! what a fun interpretation of the ABC's of life!! loved it! very different from the usual boring ones detailing ad infinitum all our desirable higher values (yawn!!!) Way cool entry my friend!
:) Sharyn
Comment Written 07-Sep-2012
reply by the author on 08-Sep-2012
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Thnk you my aussie friend. 'different from the usual boring ones' was indeed my aim.
Comment from barkingdog
This is the best piece of poetry that I've read that doesn't need translation. I like metaphors, etc. but sometimes it's just nice to have is plainly stated.
I can't imagine anyone else winning the contest, mystery writer.
reply by the author on 08-Sep-2012
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This is the best piece of poetry that I've read that doesn't need translation. I like metaphors, etc. but sometimes it's just nice to have is plainly stated.
I can't imagine anyone else winning the contest, mystery writer.
Comment Written 07-Sep-2012
reply by the author on 08-Sep-2012
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Thanks for the nice review and generous stars.
