Classic Love
For the love of a car20 total reviews
Comment from OLA THOMAS
Love is a deep affection for someone or something that is dear. So I peaked with you in this. The love shows deeply in your expression of abandonment that it suffered and you glowingly celebrate its revival. I love the strong personification here refering to a car as 'She' and the engine (the heart. Good work.
ola thomas
reply by the author on 05-Sep-2012
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Love is a deep affection for someone or something that is dear. So I peaked with you in this. The love shows deeply in your expression of abandonment that it suffered and you glowingly celebrate its revival. I love the strong personification here refering to a car as 'She' and the engine (the heart. Good work.
ola thomas
Comment Written 04-Sep-2012
reply by the author on 05-Sep-2012
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G'day Ola, Thanks so much for reading; wanted to write a different love story. Blessings, Kace.
Comment from Carole Rosa
Kace, I Loved it! I had a 57 Chevy to drive when I was a teenager. It was my Dad's and he never knew that I could drag race and beat any guy on the road!! This extremely well written poem gave my heart a flip and my memory a smile. Excellent. Carole
reply by the author on 05-Sep-2012
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Kace, I Loved it! I had a 57 Chevy to drive when I was a teenager. It was my Dad's and he never knew that I could drag race and beat any guy on the road!! This extremely well written poem gave my heart a flip and my memory a smile. Excellent. Carole
Comment Written 03-Sep-2012
reply by the author on 05-Sep-2012
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G'day Carole, I'm pleased that it made your heart flip! I wanted to write a love story that was different! Blessings, Kace.
Comment from pixie74
I like this poem very much. Its very interesting, and it has a lot of character. Writing poems can be hard. I like this one because it flows very smoothly. Very good poem. I enjoyed it.
reply by the author on 05-Sep-2012
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I like this poem very much. Its very interesting, and it has a lot of character. Writing poems can be hard. I like this one because it flows very smoothly. Very good poem. I enjoyed it.
Comment Written 03-Sep-2012
reply by the author on 05-Sep-2012
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G'day Pixie, Thank you for reading, glad you liked the poem; wanted to write something very different. Blessings, K.
Comment from artemis53
LOL. I DO understand, Kace. I had a '65 Mustang that my ex and I restored when the boys were little. It was a red screamer. I finally gave it to my eldest son who is restoring it again telling his daughter stories about the car when he was about her age.
reply by the author on 05-Sep-2012
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LOL. I DO understand, Kace. I had a '65 Mustang that my ex and I restored when the boys were little. It was a red screamer. I finally gave it to my eldest son who is restoring it again telling his daughter stories about the car when he was about her age.
Comment Written 03-Sep-2012
reply by the author on 05-Sep-2012
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G'day little fairy child. Thanks for reading and glad you liked the subject, bringing back memories of real cars! Love, Kace.
Comment from mumsyone
A great poem about a subject many can relate to - our first car - always hard to let go of, but the memory is always there. Good luck in the contest!
reply by the author on 05-Sep-2012
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A great poem about a subject many can relate to - our first car - always hard to let go of, but the memory is always there. Good luck in the contest!
Comment Written 03-Sep-2012
reply by the author on 05-Sep-2012
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G'day mumsyone, So glad you like a different twist on a love poem. Thanks for the good wishes. Blessings, Kace.
Comment from TammyGail
:) yes I know this love I would think plenty would understand this love - gotta love that first car for sure if its the one that was wanted - thanks for sharing it was a pleasure to read and review
reply by the author on 05-Sep-2012
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:) yes I know this love I would think plenty would understand this love - gotta love that first car for sure if its the one that was wanted - thanks for sharing it was a pleasure to read and review
Comment Written 03-Sep-2012
reply by the author on 05-Sep-2012
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G'day Tammy, Thanks for reading, I wanted a different spin on a love story. LOL - blessings, Kace.
Comment from Katherine2
This car can sure talk. It is interesting to see the world through eyes of a car. Inanimate objects, yes, but I can't help but think they may have feelings,lol. The car taking care of the woman until she died was a wonderful way to come to a close. I'm just so sorry the car was crushed. I share your love for Australia. I wish you well. I love the picture of your cat! Katherine.
reply by the author on 05-Sep-2012
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This car can sure talk. It is interesting to see the world through eyes of a car. Inanimate objects, yes, but I can't help but think they may have feelings,lol. The car taking care of the woman until she died was a wonderful way to come to a close. I'm just so sorry the car was crushed. I share your love for Australia. I wish you well. I love the picture of your cat! Katherine.
Comment Written 03-Sep-2012
reply by the author on 05-Sep-2012
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Katherine, Firstly, the picture of me holding Toby...I think you are referring to? Toby is a dog! LOL. Thanks for reading, glad you enjoyed. Blessings, Kace.
Comment from Gungalo
Some passions never die, do they? Very good Aussie and very telling. THis is really good:
He carried her until the day she died
Humans don't last - Buick cried
He became a compressed block
Scrap heap junk - recycled clock
reply by the author on 05-Sep-2012
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Some passions never die, do they? Very good Aussie and very telling. THis is really good:
He carried her until the day she died
Humans don't last - Buick cried
He became a compressed block
Scrap heap junk - recycled clock
Comment Written 03-Sep-2012
reply by the author on 05-Sep-2012
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Sigh, So glad you like the different spin on a love poem. Thanks for reading my friend ZZZZzzzzz love, Kace.
Comment from Bina1
My husband still drones on about his first car...almost fifty years later! I myself, like the smell of a NEW car. A fine poem you offer here, a fine art selection to drive your words home!
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reply by the author on 05-Sep-2012
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My husband still drones on about his first car...almost fifty years later! I myself, like the smell of a NEW car. A fine poem you offer here, a fine art selection to drive your words home!
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Comment Written 03-Sep-2012
reply by the author on 05-Sep-2012
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G'day Bina 1, Greetings from Australia. They don't make cars like the old days. Blessings, Kace.
Comment from Phyllis Stewart
Great bit of personification. A car is good for this sort of thing since it's so universal. LOve the line where he carried her till the day she died. Nicely done.
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reply by the author on 05-Sep-2012
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Great bit of personification. A car is good for this sort of thing since it's so universal. LOve the line where he carried her till the day she died. Nicely done.
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Comment Written 03-Sep-2012
reply by the author on 05-Sep-2012
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G'day Phyllis, Glad you enjoyed the different spin on a love poem. Blessings, Kace.
