My Character Studies ... ! (Vol. 1)
Viewing comments for Chapter 3 "The Priest"Metre ... Freeverse & Acrostic
11 total reviews
Comment from Possummagic
This poem is really difficult to read due to the font you've used. I also felt it quite disrespectful and vulgar. Why tar every man with the same brush? I don't think it's appropriate.PM
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2019
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This poem is really difficult to read due to the font you've used. I also felt it quite disrespectful and vulgar. Why tar every man with the same brush? I don't think it's appropriate.PM
Comment Written 22-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2019
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Excellent ... well it happens to be a perfect free verse, so there you go, and its actually a satire poem so why not tar them all with the same brush ...
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Ok
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Excellent ... !
Comment from Lance S. Loria
All I can say, it's shameful and a violation of trust. Priests cannot function if not trustworthy. A daring piece of work. No edits or adjustments necessary.
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2019
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All I can say, it's shameful and a violation of trust. Priests cannot function if not trustworthy. A daring piece of work. No edits or adjustments necessary.
Comment Written 22-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2019
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Excellent ... thank you much appreciated.
Comment from tfawcus
An interesting character study here, particularly in the context of modern times and the many scandals that have been besetting the churches and their priests for abuses that keep rearing up their ugly heads.
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2019
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An interesting character study here, particularly in the context of modern times and the many scandals that have been besetting the churches and their priests for abuses that keep rearing up their ugly heads.
Comment Written 22-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2019
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Thank you ... much appreciated.
Comment from Gungalo
Yes Bic and I have always questioned why we need to be so elaborate. Your write make it easy to see you are free. Now, how about the next guy>
Neither
are
indulgences--
cry louder no justification
yet you expect
reputation
reply by the author on 03-Sep-2012
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Yes Bic and I have always questioned why we need to be so elaborate. Your write make it easy to see you are free. Now, how about the next guy>
Neither
are
indulgences--
cry louder no justification
yet you expect
reputation
Comment Written 03-Sep-2012
reply by the author on 03-Sep-2012
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I hav'nt thought about the next guy...
Comment from Poetic Friend
Your poem sets the scenery of the catholic church and its priests (the imagery is superb).
Your poem covers a topic that is controversial right now (this poem is reminder of the controversy).
Thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 03-Sep-2012
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Your poem sets the scenery of the catholic church and its priests (the imagery is superb).
Your poem covers a topic that is controversial right now (this poem is reminder of the controversy).
Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 03-Sep-2012
reply by the author on 03-Sep-2012
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Anytime...
Comment from Tina McKala
Seems to me as a very clever raised finger towards some things happening within religion, hypocrisy, crime...and as an appeal for people to think about it.
reply by the author on 03-Sep-2012
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Seems to me as a very clever raised finger towards some things happening within religion, hypocrisy, crime...and as an appeal for people to think about it.
Comment Written 03-Sep-2012
reply by the author on 03-Sep-2012
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Thank you.
Comment from TammyGail
yes you are sweetie - B...
I love it
you know I don't care much for religious
verse - but you weave a passion into yours that
is simply amazing - it demands the reads att
so wish this stinking system would let me give you
a six - thanks for sharing always a pleasure
reply by the author on 03-Sep-2012
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yes you are sweetie - B...
I love it
you know I don't care much for religious
verse - but you weave a passion into yours that
is simply amazing - it demands the reads att
so wish this stinking system would let me give you
a six - thanks for sharing always a pleasure
Comment Written 03-Sep-2012
reply by the author on 03-Sep-2012
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Any time T...
Comment from dmt1967
Very nice written poem very uplifting not sure what its about but that could be because its a bit to high brow for me thank you for sharing
reply by the author on 03-Sep-2012
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Very nice written poem very uplifting not sure what its about but that could be because its a bit to high brow for me thank you for sharing
Comment Written 03-Sep-2012
reply by the author on 03-Sep-2012
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Maybe you should read it again and see if you can understand it better...just a helpful hint...much appreciated.
Comment from c_lucas
It is a sad thing when one who has given himself to God, violates the youth's trust. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words.
reply by the author on 03-Sep-2012
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It is a sad thing when one who has given himself to God, violates the youth's trust. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words.
Comment Written 03-Sep-2012
reply by the author on 03-Sep-2012
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Thanks Charlie.
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You're welcome, George.
Comment from Jumbo J
Hi bicpen, well said, well written, it had a good flow and a great message. Maybe not every one will agree but I liked it, good job.regards jumbo j.
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reply by the author on 03-Sep-2012
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Hi bicpen, well said, well written, it had a good flow and a great message. Maybe not every one will agree but I liked it, good job.regards jumbo j.
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Comment Written 03-Sep-2012
reply by the author on 03-Sep-2012
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Excellent many thanks.