Waltzing Through The Moonlight
just an unmetered poem26 total reviews
Comment from MikoAmaya
I really love this poem. It is very well written with a great flow and rhyme scheme. Also, a good choice for the accompanying artwork. Great job and thank you so much for sharing. :)
reply by the author on 17-Aug-2012
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I really love this poem. It is very well written with a great flow and rhyme scheme. Also, a good choice for the accompanying artwork. Great job and thank you so much for sharing. :)
Comment Written 16-Aug-2012
reply by the author on 17-Aug-2012
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thank you for this great review,,,,jim
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Thank you for this great review,,,,Jim
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Thank you for this great review,,,,Jim
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Thank you for this great review,,,,Jim
Comment from fictionwriter
To have a reoccuring dream that is wonderful would be awesome. I have nightmares that reoccur, but the good ones are few and far between. Loved the emotion in this. Well done.
reply by the author on 17-Aug-2012
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To have a reoccuring dream that is wonderful would be awesome. I have nightmares that reoccur, but the good ones are few and far between. Loved the emotion in this. Well done.
Comment Written 16-Aug-2012
reply by the author on 17-Aug-2012
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i get this one about 2 to 3 times a month. the woman has been the one i would love to share my life with, but, it will never be. thank you for this review,,,,,,jim
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I get this one about 2 to 3 times a month. The woman has been the one I would love to share my life with, but, it will never be. Thank you for this review,,,,,,Jim
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I get this one about 2 to 3 times a month. The woman has been the one I would love to share my life with, but, it will never be. Thank you for this review,,,,,,Jim
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I get this one about 2 to 3 times a month. The woman has been the one I would love to share my life with, but, it will never be. Thank you for this review,,,,,,Jim
Comment from HKZSquared
That was breathtaking & just beautiful. Write on! If you write more like this, OMG that would be amazing. The imagery & scene setting in this blew me away. Amazing job!
reply by the author on 17-Aug-2012
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That was breathtaking & just beautiful. Write on! If you write more like this, OMG that would be amazing. The imagery & scene setting in this blew me away. Amazing job!
Comment Written 16-Aug-2012
reply by the author on 17-Aug-2012
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thank you for the great review and comments,,,,,,jim
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Thank you for the great review and comments,,,,,,Jim
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Thank you for the great review and comments,,,,,,Jim
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Thank you for the great review and comments,,,,,,Jim
Comment from Gungalo
Beautiful quatrains Jim and the are unmetered. Great for that is a form of the quatrain. Your dream is as good as it gets, eh? Well it sounds pretty wonderful to me. Especially this:
The feel of her body causes my heart to race.
I know holding her puts me in another place.
I crave everything about her so very much
especially her tender and sensual touch.
reply by the author on 17-Aug-2012
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Beautiful quatrains Jim and the are unmetered. Great for that is a form of the quatrain. Your dream is as good as it gets, eh? Well it sounds pretty wonderful to me. Especially this:
The feel of her body causes my heart to race.
I know holding her puts me in another place.
I crave everything about her so very much
especially her tender and sensual touch.
Comment Written 15-Aug-2012
reply by the author on 17-Aug-2012
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it would be great if Robin and i cpuld be together. not meant to be. these four verses are my favorites. thank you for this great review and comments,,,,,,jim
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It would be great if Robin and I could be together. Not meant to be. These four verses are my favorites. Thank you for this great review and comments,,,,,,Jim
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It would be great if Robin and I could be together. Not meant to be. These four verses are my favorites. Thank you for this great review and comments,,,,,,Jim
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It would be great if Robin and I could be together. Not meant to be. These four verses are my favorites. Thank you for this great review and comments,,,,,,Jim
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Ohhhh sigh.
Comment from Kiwi Storywriter
This is a wonderful poem. Such a pleasure to read. I really like the painting of the setting in the beginning. Then the thrill of the dance and sadly the dreams end. Reoccuring dreams are fascinating things. Great material for this poem. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 17-Aug-2012
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This is a wonderful poem. Such a pleasure to read. I really like the painting of the setting in the beginning. Then the thrill of the dance and sadly the dreams end. Reoccuring dreams are fascinating things. Great material for this poem. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 15-Aug-2012
reply by the author on 17-Aug-2012
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Thank you for this excellent review and great comments,,,,,,Jim
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thank you for this excellent review and great comments,,,,,,jim
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Thank you for this excellent review and great comments,,,,,,Jim
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Thank you for this excellent review and great comments,,,,,,Jim
Comment from Janet Foor
A romantic and charming love poem. The lovely picture you chose enhance the story of dreaming and dancing under the moon. Very nice rhyme and presentation. I enjoyed it.
reply by the author on 17-Aug-2012
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A romantic and charming love poem. The lovely picture you chose enhance the story of dreaming and dancing under the moon. Very nice rhyme and presentation. I enjoyed it.
Comment Written 15-Aug-2012
reply by the author on 17-Aug-2012
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Thank you for reading and this great review,,,,,Jim
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thank you for reading and this great review,,,,,jim
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Thank you for reading and this great review,,,,,Jim
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Thank you for reading and this great review,,,,,Jim
Comment from S.Yocom
I don't usually enjoy unmetered poetry, but I did like this one, which tells a nice story with a surprise ending. Nicely done. In your notes you say that you don't like meter because "poetry should come from the poet's heart." But I find that although I write in meter and rhyme, it still comes from the heart. It just requires a bit of nourishing. (I hope that you will read some of my metered work so that you will understand what I mean.) Anyway, your poem is a fine piece of work.
Sally
reply by the author on 17-Aug-2012
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I don't usually enjoy unmetered poetry, but I did like this one, which tells a nice story with a surprise ending. Nicely done. In your notes you say that you don't like meter because "poetry should come from the poet's heart." But I find that although I write in meter and rhyme, it still comes from the heart. It just requires a bit of nourishing. (I hope that you will read some of my metered work so that you will understand what I mean.) Anyway, your poem is a fine piece of work.
Sally
Comment Written 15-Aug-2012
reply by the author on 17-Aug-2012
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Sally, thank you for this great review. You actually expressed how I should have about metering. It is the 'nourishing' that I do not care for. How I think and speak it, is how I compose my poetry. I will take a look at your portfolio for sure,,,,,Jim
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Sally, thank you for this great review. You actually expressed how I should have about metering. It is the 'nourishing' that I do not care for. How I think and speak it, is how I compose my poetry. I will take a look at your portfolio for sure,,,,,Jim
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Sally, thank you for this great review. You actually expressed how I should have about metering. It is the 'nourishing' that I do not care for. How I think and speak it, is how I compose my poetry. I will take a look at your portfolio for sure,,,,,Jim
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sally, thank you for this great review. you actually expressed how i should have about metering. it is the 'nourishing' that i do not care for. how i think and speak it, is how i compose my poetry. i will take a look at your portfolio for sure,,,,,jim
Comment from Mrs Happy Poet
Yes this reads very well telling your story of a recurring dream you bring the poem life so well I enjoyed well done regards Jill
reply by the author on 17-Aug-2012
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Yes this reads very well telling your story of a recurring dream you bring the poem life so well I enjoyed well done regards Jill
Comment Written 15-Aug-2012
reply by the author on 17-Aug-2012
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Jill, thank you for this review and comments,,,,,,Jim
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Jill, thank you for this review and comments,,,,,,Jim
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jill, thank you for this review and comments,,,,,,jim
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Jill, thank you for this review and comments,,,,,,Jim
Comment from Maustin
"The feel of her body causes my heart to race.
I know holding her puts me in another place.
I crave everything about her so very much
especially her tender and sensual touch."
What a lovely work you created here. Wow, I love the lines above. The imagery is so strong. Beautiful presentation.
reply by the author on 17-Aug-2012
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"The feel of her body causes my heart to race.
I know holding her puts me in another place.
I crave everything about her so very much
especially her tender and sensual touch."
What a lovely work you created here. Wow, I love the lines above. The imagery is so strong. Beautiful presentation.
Comment Written 14-Aug-2012
reply by the author on 17-Aug-2012
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Thank you for this excellent review and the great comments,,,,,,Jim
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Thank you for this excellent review and the great comments,,,,,,Jim
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thank you for this excellent review and the great comments,,,,,,jim
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Thank you for this excellent review and the great comments,,,,,,Jim
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So welcome Jim
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Welcome :)
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Comment from Starlit Ink
I like this unmetered and free flowing poem, which goes with the dance theme nicely. The poem is a romantic dance outside, under the stars. What a nice dream that would be, especially if it is a recurring dream that is an escape. Nice work.
reply by the author on 17-Aug-2012
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I like this unmetered and free flowing poem, which goes with the dance theme nicely. The poem is a romantic dance outside, under the stars. What a nice dream that would be, especially if it is a recurring dream that is an escape. Nice work.
Comment Written 14-Aug-2012
reply by the author on 17-Aug-2012
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I have absolutely no use for meter. Seems to force the emotion of a poem when it should come easily and most of all freely. Thank you for this excellent review and comments,,,,,Jim
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I have absolutely no use for meter. Seems to force the emotion of a poem when it should come easily and most of all freely. Thank you for this excellent review and comments,,,,,Jim
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i have absolutely no use for meter. seems to force the emotion of a poem when it should come easily and most of all freely. thank you for this excellent review and comments,,,,,jim
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I have absolutely no use for meter. Seems to force the emotion of a poem when it should come easily and most of all freely. Thank you for this excellent review and comments,,,,,Jim
