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Hedgerow Tales

Viewing comments for Chapter 1 "Our Posh New Den"
Book 3 in the Hedgerow Series

30 total reviews 
Comment from mumsyone
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Another cute story that children should enjoy. Rhyme and meter are good, and it's a fun read.

"We've thought and we've thought," Vicky said with (a) sigh,


 Comment Written 17-Aug-2012

reply by the author on 17-Aug-2012
    Thank you so much, mumsyone, for the lovely review, and thank you for picking up that missing (a) I will put that in straight away! I am really pleased you enjoyed the story! Thank you. xsx
Comment from fictionwriter
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This is such a cute story. It sure would make children think about how they view others they don't know. I loved it, and saw no room for improvements. Well done.

 Comment Written 16-Aug-2012

reply by the author on 17-Aug-2012
    Thank you for this lovely review, fictionwriter, I am so pleased you enjoyed my little friends story! Thank you. xsx
Comment from kashmayank
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I havent read the initial part so would not be nice to comment on it but this was good although in my opinion the length could have been shortened

 Comment Written 16-Aug-2012

reply by the author on 16-Aug-2012
    Thank you for reviewing my story/poem, kashmayank. The length of this one was short compared to some of the stories, and as this is the 3rd book in the series and the first will be in the shops next month having been snapped up by the publishers, I don't think I will shorten them. I am pleased that you thought it was good though! Thank you.
Comment from Chris Tee
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Sandra This children's poem titled "Our Posh New Den" is an absolutely delightful read and My grandchildren will be hearing this one on Saturday. Your rhyming couplets are excellent and made the poem polished. Great job!

 Comment Written 16-Aug-2012

reply by the author on 16-Aug-2012
    Thank you so very much, Chris, for this absolutely wonderful review! I do appreciate your comments and I am pleased you enjoyed the read! xsx
Comment from MikoAmaya
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lol How delightful! Not only is it a fun poem that could entertain children, it also has a lesson about friendship in it! Great job and thanks for sharing! :)

 Comment Written 16-Aug-2012

reply by the author on 16-Aug-2012
    Thank you MikoAmaya for your wonderful review, I am so pleased you enjoyed my story! xsx
Comment from Zombie's Woof
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Sorry, not very good at fixing Spag.
If you need that, you should hire an editor.
I enjoyed reading your poem... sure
all the kids will love it!

Excellent! ZW

 Comment Written 15-Aug-2012

reply by the author on 16-Aug-2012
    Thank you, ZW, for your lovely review! I'm so pleased you enjoyed it. xsx
Comment from J. Dark
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I am a huge fan of story poems for children and I really liked this. It is the sort of thing I would have liked my children to have read when they were slightly younger and would certainly have enjoyed reading it to them. The language is perfect for children and easily understandable to them without being patronising - not always easy when you are writing for children as it limits your dialogue! Hope you do really well with this.

 Comment Written 15-Aug-2012

reply by the author on 16-Aug-2012
    Thank you so much for your wonderful review, Mrs Dark, I am so pleased you enjoyed this story poem, thank you! xsx
Comment from Deejharrington
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I did not see anything that needed editing. It reads easily and keeps the interest. The message or lesson is there but doesn't "hit" the reader in the face:) You should never make quick judgments about people. There might be a very good reason for their actions.
deb

 Comment Written 15-Aug-2012

reply by the author on 15-Aug-2012
    Thank you for your lovely review, I am so pleased you enjoyed the story. I have a lesson in all the stories, but not so the children would realize it. Thank you again, I appreciate your comments a lot! xsx
reply by Deejharrington on 15-Aug-2012
    you're welcome
    deb
Comment from dmt1967
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I love this poem I wanted to give you a six but I can't do that as I have given you 2 in the last thirty days and they wont let me give you a third one thank you for sharing

 Comment Written 15-Aug-2012

reply by the author on 15-Aug-2012
    The fact that you liked it that much is worth more than a 6 to me. Thank you so very much for this lovely review! Sandra xsx
Comment from pickthorn
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What a delightful and amusing poem about the life and times of Whiffy the Weasel as he searches for a new home. This is so well written and the rhyming quality is excellent. Just a great piece of work.

 Comment Written 15-Aug-2012

reply by the author on 15-Aug-2012
    Thank you so very for your wonderful review, I am really pleased you enjoyed it, thank you! xsx Sandra