I know how it feel
this is a piece about how some people feel.4 total reviews
Comment from Curtis Hatch
It is sad the thought of someone in our world going to bed hungry at night. It is terrible the thought that one must steal to survive. With enough food in the world, how do we overcome the Geo-political problems to make it happen?
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It is sad the thought of someone in our world going to bed hungry at night. It is terrible the thought that one must steal to survive. With enough food in the world, how do we overcome the Geo-political problems to make it happen?
Comment Written 08-Aug-2012
Comment from Selestia
Beautiful message. It's true that our own experiences can help us understand other people's experiences. Perhaps that's why God doesn't always deliver us from uncomfortable situations . . . so we can know how it feels. Good thoughts.
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Beautiful message. It's true that our own experiences can help us understand other people's experiences. Perhaps that's why God doesn't always deliver us from uncomfortable situations . . . so we can know how it feels. Good thoughts.
Comment Written 08-Aug-2012
Comment from MizKat
poemlady - This is a very nice poem, even though it's in the wrong contest. I enjoyed the read very much and am sorry you ever had to be in this situation. Kat
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poemlady - This is a very nice poem, even though it's in the wrong contest. I enjoyed the read very much and am sorry you ever had to be in this situation. Kat
Comment Written 08-Aug-2012
Comment from uniqueauthor
This is not a 5-7-5 Haiku.
In three lines and seventeen syllables write a complete thought.
5 syllables
7 syllables
5 syllables
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17 syllables
No capitals unless the word is a Proper noun.
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This is not a 5-7-5 Haiku.
In three lines and seventeen syllables write a complete thought.
5 syllables
7 syllables
5 syllables
_____________
17 syllables
No capitals unless the word is a Proper noun.
Comment Written 08-Aug-2012
