Beautiful Son
A mothers look at her son27 total reviews
Comment from Jim Lorson Sr
Happi, you have done a splendid job of writing about your feelings about your son. It is easy, through your words, to see how much you love him and just how proud you are. Excellent piece of writing that I am glad you shared with us,,,,,,,,,Jim
reply by the author on 30-Jul-2012
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Happi, you have done a splendid job of writing about your feelings about your son. It is easy, through your words, to see how much you love him and just how proud you are. Excellent piece of writing that I am glad you shared with us,,,,,,,,,Jim
Comment Written 30-Jul-2012
reply by the author on 30-Jul-2012
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Thank you Jim, I did try.. I am proud that he is such a loving man now or young man. I feel I have achieved that. lol Happi
Comment from Bina1
You describe it so well, they grow up in a heartbeat. My oldest grandson is 19! How did that happen? A lovely poem, thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 30-Jul-2012
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You describe it so well, they grow up in a heartbeat. My oldest grandson is 19! How did that happen? A lovely poem, thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 30-Jul-2012
reply by the author on 30-Jul-2012
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I do not know how time flies so fast. It does.. He has the biggest feet now.. He will sit with me on the couch and I remember his little feet and they are so big! haha Thank you for the review! Happi
Comment from Gungalo
Well I'd say you did just that Happi! You have immortalized your son with only 12 words. That is good and you'll have it forever.
reply by the author on 30-Jul-2012
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Well I'd say you did just that Happi! You have immortalized your son with only 12 words. That is good and you'll have it forever.
Comment Written 30-Jul-2012
reply by the author on 30-Jul-2012
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Thank you for the review.. have a great night! Happi
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You too.
Comment from Allison78
I think this is such a very lovely poem you have written! You have clearly portrayed how much you love your son. I have given you four stars because in a haiku there ate only five syllables in the first and third lines and seven in the second which is correct. Otherwise well done!
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reply by the author on 30-Jul-2012
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I think this is such a very lovely poem you have written! You have clearly portrayed how much you love your son. I have given you four stars because in a haiku there ate only five syllables in the first and third lines and seven in the second which is correct. Otherwise well done!
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Comment Written 30-Jul-2012
reply by the author on 30-Jul-2012
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I just cought that and I made changes.. My dyslexia got the best of me with the numbers and I apologize. I would not have noticed until you reviewed this! Happi
Comment from AJCosto
I really like this. There is something really special between a mother and son bond. There's a pride there in watching them grow into men. I can tell you are really proud of yours. This is genuine and heartfelt.
reply by the author on 30-Jul-2012
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I really like this. There is something really special between a mother and son bond. There's a pride there in watching them grow into men. I can tell you are really proud of yours. This is genuine and heartfelt.
Comment Written 30-Jul-2012
reply by the author on 30-Jul-2012
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Thank you, Happi
Comment from Meta~Mark
nice job on this lovely poem here..Humble, loving, kind, my son..words worked well with the flow and the theme...
excellent job - little papoose..my wife is cherokee and called her boy that :)
reply by the author on 30-Jul-2012
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nice job on this lovely poem here..Humble, loving, kind, my son..words worked well with the flow and the theme...
excellent job - little papoose..my wife is cherokee and called her boy that :)
Comment Written 30-Jul-2012
reply by the author on 30-Jul-2012
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Osiyo,(Hello) in Cherokee! I do love my little papoose! Thank you for the review.. Happi
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you should check out my Wife's profile TammyGail she is Cherokee and wrote a few native poems :) ..I wrote one called Cherokee Pride..depicts stereotypes and the injustice done liek a holocaust
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I will check it out..I will also read the poems you suggested..
Comment from WilliamDeen
What a lovely poem again about Your Son. I have 3 sons and my wife has 1. Now I have a grandson too. I have to say one thing for sure- The early years do go by way too fast! GREAT Haiku!!!
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What a lovely poem again about Your Son. I have 3 sons and my wife has 1. Now I have a grandson too. I have to say one thing for sure- The early years do go by way too fast! GREAT Haiku!!!
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Comment Written 30-Jul-2012
reply by the author on 30-Jul-2012
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Thank you so much.. I do wish the time did not go so fast.. I love my time with them but cannot wait to have some little grand baby's!Happi
