Along the Jericho Road
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Comment from Misrael
These crime and mystery stories are interesting but I don't like the foul language. Sometimes they don't say if there is foul language and this is one of them. Even though it wasn't a lot of foul language it was still more than I like.Good story except for the foul language.
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reply by the author on 23-Jul-2012
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These crime and mystery stories are interesting but I don't like the foul language. Sometimes they don't say if there is foul language and this is one of them. Even though it wasn't a lot of foul language it was still more than I like.Good story except for the foul language.
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Comment Written 23-Jul-2012
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2012
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I'm a bit puzzled why you bothered to continue to read when you found it offensive? Next time, please just pass by.
Comment from dejohnsrld (Debbie)
Very well written, interesting and enjoyable to read. I like how you build suspense at the end enticing the reader to want to read the next chapter`Excellent~Debbie
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2012
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Very well written, interesting and enjoyable to read. I like how you build suspense at the end enticing the reader to want to read the next chapter`Excellent~Debbie
Comment Written 23-Jul-2012
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2012
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Thank you so much, debbie. You are very kind to offer this generous and supportive review. Kind regards, Bev
Comment from Gungalo
Oh oh, when Father Brian has a feeling everybody listens. He thinks the killer is going to strike again soon and that time will make no difference. Now the Sheriff is worried.
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reply by the author on 23-Jul-2012
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Oh oh, when Father Brian has a feeling everybody listens. He thinks the killer is going to strike again soon and that time will make no difference. Now the Sheriff is worried.
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Comment Written 23-Jul-2012
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2012
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Yes, as well he should be! Thanks for reading and reviewing, Gungalo. Warm regards, Bev
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