~ Theatre Nine ~
Batman Tragedy.... Aurora Colorado July 20, 201228 total reviews
Comment from arman khan
The poet has immortalized the event of theatre nine.wel , it must be forgotten not to remember, but bitter realities can not be denied.Actually the theatre became the the house of the devil,Batman.The picture was actually shown by the poet,images are also clear to create the picture.Language is simple and appropriate.
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2012
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The poet has immortalized the event of theatre nine.wel , it must be forgotten not to remember, but bitter realities can not be denied.Actually the theatre became the the house of the devil,Batman.The picture was actually shown by the poet,images are also clear to create the picture.Language is simple and appropriate.
Comment Written 11-Aug-2012
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2012
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Thank you so much for the awesome comment and rating!! I really appreciate such a strong comment that made me smile too. This was indeed an act of the devil, such a sad day to remember.
Comment from adewpearl
Strong acrostic for Theatre Nine
good use of rhyme
compelling image of the devil wearing a gas mask
good alliteration in clear that killing
good proximate rhyme of flight and alike
A moving tribute to the victims of this horrific tragedy :-) Brooke
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2012
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Strong acrostic for Theatre Nine
good use of rhyme
compelling image of the devil wearing a gas mask
good alliteration in clear that killing
good proximate rhyme of flight and alike
A moving tribute to the victims of this horrific tragedy :-) Brooke
Comment Written 11-Aug-2012
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2012
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First of all, I am truly sorry for the huge delay in getting back to you. Thank you so very much for the amazing comment and amount of stars you gave me. Such a sad tragedy but felt this might help some heal.....xoxo
Comment from hollyinvesuvianite
So you are from Colorado as well. I grew up in Cortez, CO, but am in Hawaii now. I have written other tragedies of Colorado- Donner Pass, Sandcreek Indian Massacre, Columbine High School Massacre, Jon Benet Ramsey. My beloved state has such a bloody history- breaks my heart. Where do you live now?
Great acrostic that gave just enough detail of the incident without being overly graphic. Very intelligent and heartfelt piece. Thank you for such a memorable tribute. Holly
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2012
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So you are from Colorado as well. I grew up in Cortez, CO, but am in Hawaii now. I have written other tragedies of Colorado- Donner Pass, Sandcreek Indian Massacre, Columbine High School Massacre, Jon Benet Ramsey. My beloved state has such a bloody history- breaks my heart. Where do you live now?
Great acrostic that gave just enough detail of the incident without being overly graphic. Very intelligent and heartfelt piece. Thank you for such a memorable tribute. Holly
Comment Written 11-Aug-2012
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2012
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Thank you so very much for the amazing comment and rating!! I truly apologize for the delay in response. I really would like to go read some of your work actually. I still live in Colorado, Denver native!! Look forward to chatting with you again sometime. Thank you again....Heidixoxo
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I look forward to it. Holly
Comment from Jina Sarma
Just amazing to read on. I enjoyed the theme and rhymes. Easy to feel and flow in such magical words. As a poet you have touched my heart.
reply by the author on 10-Aug-2012
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Just amazing to read on. I enjoyed the theme and rhymes. Easy to feel and flow in such magical words. As a poet you have touched my heart.
Comment Written 25-Jul-2012
reply by the author on 10-Aug-2012
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So sorry for the delay in response. Thank you sooo very much for the amazing rating on my poem. For such a tragedy, I truly appreciate it....xoxo
Comment from BLACKDYKE
Not surprising that this has achieved
recognized status. As a memorial it does
what it is meant to do, draw attention.
Bless them all.
reply by the author on 10-Aug-2012
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Not surprising that this has achieved
recognized status. As a memorial it does
what it is meant to do, draw attention.
Bless them all.
Comment Written 25-Jul-2012
reply by the author on 10-Aug-2012
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Thank you so very much for the wonderful review. This was such a sad and tragic event and I truly appreciate you reading this....xoxo
Comment from Irene D. Garces
What a sad story (real story) to remember. This poem of yours is a tribute so that the story will remain forever in the hearts of those affected and even those not affected. prayers really helped.
The artwork is real appropriate to the message. And the Acrostic style is very well done. It is one of my favorite kind of poetry. The other one is the rhymes poetry. This poem of yours captures both.
Excellent job.
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2012
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What a sad story (real story) to remember. This poem of yours is a tribute so that the story will remain forever in the hearts of those affected and even those not affected. prayers really helped.
The artwork is real appropriate to the message. And the Acrostic style is very well done. It is one of my favorite kind of poetry. The other one is the rhymes poetry. This poem of yours captures both.
Excellent job.
Comment Written 25-Jul-2012
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2012
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Thank you so much for honoring me & my poem with 6 stars!! I appreciate it deeply....xoxo
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Thank you so much for honoring me & my poem with 6 stars!! I appreciate it deeply....xoxo
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You're very much welcome, Friend. Just keep on posting. I loved true to life stories.
Comment from Janice Canerdy
Some say we need tighter gun control. I think so too, but we'll NEVER have security so tight that a lunatic can't act. Your poem is heart-wrenching and well-written.
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2012
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Some say we need tighter gun control. I think so too, but we'll NEVER have security so tight that a lunatic can't act. Your poem is heart-wrenching and well-written.
Comment Written 24-Jul-2012
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2012
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You are so right on everything you said!! Thank you so much for stopping by to read, review & rate my poem. I truly appreciate it....xoxo
Comment from zlp22
I feel so sorry, going to the movies will never be the same again. One person killed and injured so many, yet he is alive. You will be sure he will end up in Hell.
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2012
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I feel so sorry, going to the movies will never be the same again. One person killed and injured so many, yet he is alive. You will be sure he will end up in Hell.
Comment Written 23-Jul-2012
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2012
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Actually he killed 12 & wounded 71 more...thank you stopping by to read my poem. I truly appreciate it....xoxo
Comment from Stacia Ann
Thanks for sharing this, Heidi. Such a creative image and poem for such a painful topic.
Even the colors you've chosen for font and background are thoughtful.
One minor concern: Should the line read "Tear gas was thrown out (into) the darkness..."
I'm so sorry this was in your hometown--unfortunately, it could have been any of ours.
I think the question we need to start asking our leaders is why any civilian is allowed to have the capacity for mass destruction this person had.
You and the people of Aurora are in my prayers.
Stacia
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2012
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Thanks for sharing this, Heidi. Such a creative image and poem for such a painful topic.
Even the colors you've chosen for font and background are thoughtful.
One minor concern: Should the line read "Tear gas was thrown out (into) the darkness..."
I'm so sorry this was in your hometown--unfortunately, it could have been any of ours.
I think the question we need to start asking our leaders is why any civilian is allowed to have the capacity for mass destruction this person had.
You and the people of Aurora are in my prayers.
Stacia
Comment Written 23-Jul-2012
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2012
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Thank you so much my friend!! I really appreciate your kind words.....xoxo
Comment from Scarbrems
Thankyou for this piece of work that focuses on the tragedy, not the film. You write touchingly about those who died. Our thoughts are with their poor families
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2012
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Thankyou for this piece of work that focuses on the tragedy, not the film. You write touchingly about those who died. Our thoughts are with their poor families
Comment Written 23-Jul-2012
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2012
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Thank you so very much!! xoxo
