Comment from ernesto escarro

Excellent

Time For Tea

The story to listen is for the children's comfort.
Scotland's historical myth serves lesson of knowing
who the people's favorite at that time.
Robin Hood robbed the rich to help the good and poor.
Life of pirate of the ship was imitated.

Such a lesson of bad deed when use in for good remains
a good lesson for the children during tea period.

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 Comment Written 17-Jul-2012

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reply by the author on 20-Jul-2012

Thank you for the nice review.
Steve

reply by ernesto escarro on 20-Jul-2012

Thank you.

Comment from Jendowoz

Excellent

This is so musical when you read it out aloud. Love the rhythm and beat in the stanzas. This structure works well and would take some thinking. Well done. What a great imagination you must have.

regards, Jen

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 Comment Written 17-Jul-2012

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reply by the author on 20-Jul-2012

Jen, thank you for the nice review.
Steve