Steve's Story-Poems
Viewing comments for Chapter 10 "Something there is..."A collection of my poems
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Comment from Sally Carter
Very nicely done! I enjoyed this a lot, Kiwisteveh. A dark twist, skilfully woven into the beautiful lines. I have never read much about Frost's character, but I reckon he would have approved of the delicate touch you have applied to his lines to turn them into something entirely your own.
Great job!
Best wishes
Sally
reply by the author on 21-Jul-2012
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Very nicely done! I enjoyed this a lot, Kiwisteveh. A dark twist, skilfully woven into the beautiful lines. I have never read much about Frost's character, but I reckon he would have approved of the delicate touch you have applied to his lines to turn them into something entirely your own.
Great job!
Best wishes
Sally
Comment Written 13-Jul-2012
reply by the author on 21-Jul-2012
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Thanks, Sally. I enjoyed my spot of subversion - what classic ico shall I ruin next?
Steve
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I once had a lot of fun with The Raven!
Comment from ShekinahGlory
Love the mystique this poem exudes.
Excellent job with mood and tone.
Impressed with how the setting develops the poem.
Great job with rhyme scheme and rhythm.
Nice personification...the woods...snow...
Suspenseful, vengeance, haunting!
Nice imagery, too.
reply by the author on 21-Jul-2012
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Love the mystique this poem exudes.
Excellent job with mood and tone.
Impressed with how the setting develops the poem.
Great job with rhyme scheme and rhythm.
Nice personification...the woods...snow...
Suspenseful, vengeance, haunting!
Nice imagery, too.
Comment Written 13-Jul-2012
reply by the author on 21-Jul-2012
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Thank you, Shekinah. Glad you enjoyed my piece of subversion.
Steve
Comment from c_lucas
In Arizona, we have woods, caves and abandon mines. The later is the best. Thia is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for a very good read.
reply by the author on 21-Jul-2012
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In Arizona, we have woods, caves and abandon mines. The later is the best. Thia is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for a very good read.
Comment Written 13-Jul-2012
reply by the author on 21-Jul-2012
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Spoke like a true corpse-disposer...
Thanks for the review.
Steve
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You're wecome.
Comment from Mrs Happy Poet
Yes this is well written the descriptions are very good it unfolds well through the work to the dark ending well done I enjoyed regards Jill
reply by the author on 21-Jul-2012
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Yes this is well written the descriptions are very good it unfolds well through the work to the dark ending well done I enjoyed regards Jill
Comment Written 13-Jul-2012
reply by the author on 21-Jul-2012
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Thanks, Jill.
Steve
Comment from harmony13
A well written poem. The poem flowed and connected well.
The artwork enhanced the read! This poem was extremely thought provoking poem. Thank you, harmony13
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reply by the author on 21-Jul-2012
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A well written poem. The poem flowed and connected well.
The artwork enhanced the read! This poem was extremely thought provoking poem. Thank you, harmony13
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Comment Written 13-Jul-2012
reply by the author on 21-Jul-2012
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Thank you.
Steve
