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Human cannonball

Epitaph on a shooting star

21 total reviews 
Comment from humpwhistle
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Oh, Steve, you nailed this one. So glad I didn't enter.
Not only did you pick the perfect deceased,
You gave him one blast of a send off.
Off the record, Steve, do the words 'Human Cannonball'
appear anywhere on your resume?
Just curious.

Peace, Lee

 Comment Written 13-Jul-2012

reply by the author on 13-Jul-2012
    Wrecking Ball, perhaps. I am about to do a job on Robert Frost's 'Stopping By Woods...'
    Thanks for the review.
    Steve
Comment from Belinda
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Hi, Steve, congratulations on your win. I wonder why I missed it in the first place. This is witty, though a bit scary to imagine how his life expired! But of course this is fiction...:)

 Comment Written 12-Jul-2012

reply by the author on 13-Jul-2012
    About as scary bas some of these mad motorbike riders doing tricks as they fly through the air...
    Thanks for the review.
    Steve
Comment from amada
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Congratulations in winning the contest. Very well deserved! After reading your fast furious words for sure I was exhausted! What a trip. What a life! Well done.

 Comment Written 12-Jul-2012

reply by the author on 13-Jul-2012
    Thank you for the review.
    Steve
Comment from kra-z-ka-z
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NOW THIS IS CUTE! By far the best one I've read yet! Let me read the rest and then I'll decided which on has my vote. Up till now you're the winner hands down!

 Comment Written 12-Jul-2012

reply by the author on 12-Jul-2012
    Thank you - I guess you must be one of the late voters who swung this my way, so thanks for that too.
    Steve
Comment from Bina1
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Too funny, a very clever write. A great presentation of your work, a fine entry for the contest you offer here. Good Luck!

 Comment Written 11-Jul-2012

reply by the author on 12-Jul-2012
    Thank you!
Comment from Mrs Happy Poet
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Oh yes this made me laugh you have done very well with this piece it reads very well and presented well too good luck regards Jill

 Comment Written 11-Jul-2012

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    Thank you!
Comment from HeartsDesire2012
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This came right on time for me. My afternoon lacked humor. Poor Bullet Ben Bacall...The artwork selection is a perfect compliment to this poem. Good luck in the contest. Thanks for sharing.

 Comment Written 11-Jul-2012

reply by the author on 12-Jul-2012
    Thank you!
Comment from gramalot8
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You have a very cute fun witty epitaph. Great picture for your poem also. I can totally picture everything with your words of description. Good job and good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 11-Jul-2012

reply by the author on 12-Jul-2012
    Thank you!
Comment from DaisyDee
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Very witty use of nickname 'Bullet' for Ben, the human Cannonball
I like the double meaning of 'fired' too.
Hope you do well in the contest.

 Comment Written 11-Jul-2012

reply by the author on 12-Jul-2012
    Thank you!
Comment from Janice Canerdy
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This is very well-written and funny--using alliteration, rhyme (including internal rhyme), and a set meter. I like rhymed, metered poems--especially when they're this good.

 Comment Written 11-Jul-2012

reply by the author on 12-Jul-2012
    Thank you very much, Janice