Paranoia
mental illness33 total reviews
Comment from mystery poet
Your sonnet is in nice form and I like the storyline.
Haven't read one quite like this though, I enjoyed
reading this unique piece. I wish you well in your
contest!
reply by the author on 04-Jul-2012
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Your sonnet is in nice form and I like the storyline.
Haven't read one quite like this though, I enjoyed
reading this unique piece. I wish you well in your
contest!
Comment Written 04-Jul-2012
reply by the author on 04-Jul-2012
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Yes, I wanted to do something different. Thanks for an excellent review.
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Nicely penned!
A pleasure to have reviewed.
Comment from Phyllis Stewart
This is a very well-written sonnet. The topic is unusual but something I believe all readers can relate to in some way. We all tend toward paranoia in some ways at times, not trusting, over-worrying.
reply by the author on 04-Jul-2012
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This is a very well-written sonnet. The topic is unusual but something I believe all readers can relate to in some way. We all tend toward paranoia in some ways at times, not trusting, over-worrying.
Comment Written 04-Jul-2012
reply by the author on 04-Jul-2012
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Thanks for an excellent review.
Comment from mumsyone
Interesting sonnet, Alvin, since I know it doesn't really pertain to you. It sounds like you've definitely picked up on someone else's thoughts. Good rhyme and meter and a good message. Good luck in the contest!
reply by the author on 04-Jul-2012
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Interesting sonnet, Alvin, since I know it doesn't really pertain to you. It sounds like you've definitely picked up on someone else's thoughts. Good rhyme and meter and a good message. Good luck in the contest!
Comment Written 04-Jul-2012
reply by the author on 04-Jul-2012
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Don't be so sure, Lois! There was a time in my life, long ago, that I came close to this. Thanks for an excellent review.
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Sorry to hear that. Sounds like you've come a long way since then.
Comment from MAMONIA
This is definitely a first! I have never
seen you write a "rhymed" poem before.
I thought you were Japanese!
This is really, really great. I definitely
enjoyed reading this and felt your anguish
deeply.
I hope you are receiving enough therapy to
get you through this excruciating time.
There, there, we'll help you overcome.
I hope they have a name for it.
Lots of luck in the contest.
Marie
P.S. I didn't realize that a sonnet could
be funny.
reply by the author on 04-Jul-2012
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This is definitely a first! I have never
seen you write a "rhymed" poem before.
I thought you were Japanese!
This is really, really great. I definitely
enjoyed reading this and felt your anguish
deeply.
I hope you are receiving enough therapy to
get you through this excruciating time.
There, there, we'll help you overcome.
I hope they have a name for it.
Lots of luck in the contest.
Marie
P.S. I didn't realize that a sonnet could
be funny.
Comment Written 04-Jul-2012
reply by the author on 04-Jul-2012
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Thanks for an excellent review.
Comment from Maustin
A good work you written. Nice rhythm and pace throughout. The impact of paranoia on the person and also love ones can be devastating. You illustrated well. Recommended read.
reply by the author on 04-Jul-2012
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A good work you written. Nice rhythm and pace throughout. The impact of paranoia on the person and also love ones can be devastating. You illustrated well. Recommended read.
Comment Written 04-Jul-2012
reply by the author on 04-Jul-2012
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Thanks for an excellent review.
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So very welcome...
Comment from Bryana
Well my dear friend, you've written such a beautiful sonnet, it's rather sad, but that's life, is not always happy.
I don't think it's biographycal, I hope not anyway.
Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 04-Jul-2012
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Well my dear friend, you've written such a beautiful sonnet, it's rather sad, but that's life, is not always happy.
I don't think it's biographycal, I hope not anyway.
Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 04-Jul-2012
reply by the author on 04-Jul-2012
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If it is biographical, it refers to a long time ago. I have missed you, but it's my own fault. I have been teaching four courses with no time for myself. I hope to have some time later this month. How are you? Thanks for the exceptional review; I was worried about this poem and you have reassured me.
Comment from Robert Lee Brown
You nailed it. Paranoia vs. Paranoid, it seems to me, although I haven't seen the Diagnostic Manual in the last twelve years. It's a good read. Good luck in the contest. Bob
reply by the author on 04-Jul-2012
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You nailed it. Paranoia vs. Paranoid, it seems to me, although I haven't seen the Diagnostic Manual in the last twelve years. It's a good read. Good luck in the contest. Bob
Comment Written 04-Jul-2012
reply by the author on 04-Jul-2012
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Thanks for an exceptional review; I was worried about this poem and you reassured me. I wonder when on earth DSM-V will be out...we've been waiting for it, like, forever!
I hope to see you in a class soon!
Comment from Shirley B
Dear Alvin, Excellent imagery here. The sonnet is well written. It follows all the rules. On a personal note I felt the emotion of your poem. Mental illness isn't is very sad. Great poem, Shirley
reply by the author on 04-Jul-2012
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Dear Alvin, Excellent imagery here. The sonnet is well written. It follows all the rules. On a personal note I felt the emotion of your poem. Mental illness isn't is very sad. Great poem, Shirley
Comment Written 04-Jul-2012
reply by the author on 04-Jul-2012
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Tahnks for an excellent review.
Comment from cheyennewy
Hi Al,
I hope this sonnet isn't biographical but if so, they (whoever they are) that if you think you've gone mad you are probably not. You have penned a fine sonnet for the contest. It goes without saying your iambic pentameter is spot on and the rhyming is effective. The melancholy flavor is intriguing and evocative. Well done and good luck in the contest. Hope you are well....chey
reply by the author on 04-Jul-2012
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Hi Al,
I hope this sonnet isn't biographical but if so, they (whoever they are) that if you think you've gone mad you are probably not. You have penned a fine sonnet for the contest. It goes without saying your iambic pentameter is spot on and the rhyming is effective. The melancholy flavor is intriguing and evocative. Well done and good luck in the contest. Hope you are well....chey
Comment Written 04-Jul-2012
reply by the author on 04-Jul-2012
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Thanks. Don't worry; this reflects a situation a long time ago and not my current situation. Thanks for an excellent review.
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Thank Heavens!
Comment from terry drake
I would not worry about your psyche you seem sound as sound can be. You have an uncanny grasp on your reality as each line describes your visibility.
reply by the author on 04-Jul-2012
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I would not worry about your psyche you seem sound as sound can be. You have an uncanny grasp on your reality as each line describes your visibility.
Comment Written 04-Jul-2012
reply by the author on 04-Jul-2012
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Thanks for an exceelt review and understanding this poem.
