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Palindrome

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Comment from Bina1
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The palindrome looks so difficult, you did a fine job. Thank you for sharing, good luck in the contest! A very lovely, but lonely looking art selection to enhance your theme.

 Comment Written 04-Jul-2012


reply by the author on 05-Jul-2012
    Thanks so much for taking the time to read and review my words. Wasn't I lucky to find that photo?
Comment from Maria C.
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Such a good palindrome. First stating and then questioning being alone. I especially like the way the opening few lines reversed. You selected a perfect picture too...a lone island with one lone tree.
Good luck.

Maria C.

 Comment Written 03-Jul-2012


reply by the author on 03-Jul-2012
    Thank you for reading and reviewing my words. I was fascinated when I read the format. Had to do it--not without a lot of false starts and a bit of drat, darn and oops now and then. I felt really lucky to have found that picture.
reply by Maria C. on 03-Jul-2012
    I know what you mean. I had to try it too for the same reason. I had afew 'darn its' in my writing too.
Comment from Carrie Carson
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Great job with this interesting format. The thoughts expressed worked well in both "stanzas."

No spag issues, good form.

Enjoyable, thanks. Good luck in the contest. :) Carrie



 Comment Written 03-Jul-2012


reply by the author on 03-Jul-2012
    Thank you for reading and reviewing my words. I was fascinated when I read the format. Had to do it--not without a lot of false starts and a bit of drat, darn and oops now and then.
reply by Carrie Carson on 03-Jul-2012
    You're welcome. I can see how this would be tough, I didn't even try one. It would have caused my word choice to go further than drat and darn, for sure.
Comment from terry drake
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a palindrome poem is not easy to write and harder to convey a common thought in both sections. You did a marvelous job with your entry.

 Comment Written 03-Jul-2012


reply by the author on 03-Jul-2012
    Thank you for taking the time to read and review my piece. I loved the challenge when I read it and appreciate your recognizing that this was not written without a lot of drat's darn's and oops coming from me.