Senryu for fishing
I fish therefore I eat6 total reviews
Comment from babyross
I like this short. Fishing is such a relaxing sport, and it pays well for a good meal. I enjoyed this. The picture was perfect as well.
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I like this short. Fishing is such a relaxing sport, and it pays well for a good meal. I enjoyed this. The picture was perfect as well.
Comment Written 27-Jun-2012
Comment from mauial
Good write, short and to the point except I would eat it today not tomorrow :) Unless of course you meant you fish every day and if so I envy you.
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Good write, short and to the point except I would eat it today not tomorrow :) Unless of course you meant you fish every day and if so I envy you.
Comment Written 26-Jun-2012
Comment from darkmoonbaby
The color scheme of this poem fits the theme very well, as does the included image. I saw no errors or mistakes, nothing I would change. I wish you the best of luck in the contest.
DMB
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The color scheme of this poem fits the theme very well, as does the included image. I saw no errors or mistakes, nothing I would change. I wish you the best of luck in the contest.
DMB
Comment Written 26-Jun-2012
Comment from uniqueauthor
This is an excellent example of a senryu. The syllable count is right on and the statement is true.
I am fisherman
casting out my line today
I eat tomorrow.
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This is an excellent example of a senryu. The syllable count is right on and the statement is true.
I am fisherman
casting out my line today
I eat tomorrow.
Comment Written 26-Jun-2012
Comment from bonnie composanto
This is a very nicely written, clever senryu poem. "I fish therefore I eat". The picture is perfect for setting the image of the fish that is about to be caught for dinner.
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This is a very nicely written, clever senryu poem. "I fish therefore I eat". The picture is perfect for setting the image of the fish that is about to be caught for dinner.
Comment Written 26-Jun-2012
Comment from adewpearl
Your illustration and poem complement each other perfectly
a thoughtful response to the I am contest
I like the consonance of T sounds in casting/today/eat tomorrow
and I love the humor in the final line - glad to know he has something to fall back on once he gets home LOL Brooke :-)
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Your illustration and poem complement each other perfectly
a thoughtful response to the I am contest
I like the consonance of T sounds in casting/today/eat tomorrow
and I love the humor in the final line - glad to know he has something to fall back on once he gets home LOL Brooke :-)
Comment Written 26-Jun-2012
