The Phoenix and the Necromancer
is all life a tragedy of sorts?29 total reviews
Comment from Mrs Happy Poet
Yes I liked the creativity in this story poem you have done really very well very good descriptive work throughout and great presentation I wish I could write like this a story in any form is not my thing not at length any way regards Jill
reply by the author on 26-Jun-2012
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Yes I liked the creativity in this story poem you have done really very well very good descriptive work throughout and great presentation I wish I could write like this a story in any form is not my thing not at length any way regards Jill
Comment Written 26-Jun-2012
reply by the author on 26-Jun-2012
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Thank you, Jill! I'm so glad you enjoyed the tale :-).
Mike
Comment from Cindy Warren
I loved the read. The rhyme and rythm were excellent and I loved the story. It would seem that the kingdom has replaced one problem with a bigger one.
reply by the author on 26-Jun-2012
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I loved the read. The rhyme and rythm were excellent and I loved the story. It would seem that the kingdom has replaced one problem with a bigger one.
Comment Written 26-Jun-2012
reply by the author on 26-Jun-2012
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Thanks so much, Cindy :-). I'm thrilled you enjoyed my story so much. Indeed, one bad deed begets another!
Mike
Comment from LucyB
What wonderful imagery! You are terrific with words and your rhyming is great. Thanks for sharing such a good read. Well done and very imaginative!
reply by the author on 26-Jun-2012
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What wonderful imagery! You are terrific with words and your rhyming is great. Thanks for sharing such a good read. Well done and very imaginative!
Comment Written 26-Jun-2012
reply by the author on 26-Jun-2012
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Thanks so much, Lucy :-). I'm thrilled you enjoyed the read!
Mike
Comment from dmt1967
I liked this poem it is very well written and I liked the use of the English language it is very well composed and I like the picture thank you
reply by the author on 26-Jun-2012
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I liked this poem it is very well written and I liked the use of the English language it is very well composed and I like the picture thank you
Comment Written 26-Jun-2012
reply by the author on 26-Jun-2012
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Thank you, dmt - I'm glad you enjoyed the read :-).
Mike
Comment from terry drake
Fantastic myth with marvelous rhyme throughout.The story read so well that one forgot how long it was and wished to read on. Great job.
reply by the author on 26-Jun-2012
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Fantastic myth with marvelous rhyme throughout.The story read so well that one forgot how long it was and wished to read on. Great job.
Comment Written 26-Jun-2012
reply by the author on 26-Jun-2012
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Thanks very much, Terry! I'm thrilled you enjoyed the story so much :-).
Mike
Comment from ScarletClearwater
I thoroughly enjoyed this read. It was a long piece, so kudos about the flow and rhyme. You kept it going nicely. Awesome write. Made a good read.
reply by the author on 26-Jun-2012
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I thoroughly enjoyed this read. It was a long piece, so kudos about the flow and rhyme. You kept it going nicely. Awesome write. Made a good read.
Comment Written 26-Jun-2012
reply by the author on 26-Jun-2012
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Thank you, SC :-). I'm really glad I managed to keep it going so well - I was worried about the length.
Mike
Comment from Hanna Marie
Reading this has really shown some passion in your writing, so, definant are the thoughts thru out and a lesson learned ...well done. I feel this is a strong piece and should stand the test of time quite well. Thanks for sharing. Have a great day!
reply by the author on 26-Jun-2012
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Reading this has really shown some passion in your writing, so, definant are the thoughts thru out and a lesson learned ...well done. I feel this is a strong piece and should stand the test of time quite well. Thanks for sharing. Have a great day!
Comment Written 26-Jun-2012
reply by the author on 26-Jun-2012
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Thanks so much, Hanna - I'm so glad you enjoyed the read :-).
Mike
Comment from OLA THOMAS
A poetic story shared in an unusual manner. Full of lessons of life though depicted by fiery fire of a weird bird, tormenting lives of stronger species of mankind. What a great irony! A beautiful display of creativity, with wonderful rhymes. I like the ingenuity.
ola thomas
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reply by the author on 26-Jun-2012
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A poetic story shared in an unusual manner. Full of lessons of life though depicted by fiery fire of a weird bird, tormenting lives of stronger species of mankind. What a great irony! A beautiful display of creativity, with wonderful rhymes. I like the ingenuity.
ola thomas
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Comment Written 26-Jun-2012
reply by the author on 26-Jun-2012
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Thank you for the fantastic review, Ola - I'm thrilled you enjoyed the read :-).
Mike
Comment from mjordahl
All i can say is that I'm speachless.You are very talented. It is not easy to tell a story with a poem(in my opinion).You seem to do it effortlessly.I likedthe story along with the serenade.
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reply by the author on 26-Jun-2012
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All i can say is that I'm speachless.You are very talented. It is not easy to tell a story with a poem(in my opinion).You seem to do it effortlessly.I likedthe story along with the serenade.
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Comment Written 26-Jun-2012
reply by the author on 26-Jun-2012
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Wow - what a great review! I'm so glad you enjoyed the read :-).
Mike
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did you self publish your book yourself on amazon? if I can be so bold to ask do you make decent income from it?
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Hi! Yes, I did self publish, after getting nowhere with publishers and agents. Then I read several articles by author's who'd been successful with their self-published books, and been offered publishing deals as a result, so I thought it was worth trying.
At the price I charge, it doesn't make me any real money, but I'm hoping to get my name out there. Then perhaps I can charge more for my next novels!
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I was reading up on that also, and was curious.Good luck hope you make it to best sellers list....
