THE GIFT
Tough Love33 total reviews
Comment from barbara.wilkey
I never know how to review script because I don't write it. This script was easy to read and I enjoyed reading. All I can think about the parents is that some parents just don't get it.
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2012
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I never know how to review script because I don't write it. This script was easy to read and I enjoyed reading. All I can think about the parents is that some parents just don't get it.
Comment Written 25-Jun-2012
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2012
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This was based on a real events, barbara. These people were not just ignorant, they were evil. Thank you reading outside your comfort zone. I really appreciate that you did that, offering such a generous review. Warm regards, Bev
Comment from ZephyrusW
Very intriguing start. I think you did a good job of give enough information to hook and audiance in without too much exposition.
One sentence read a little odd to me, maybe take another look at it. Quite seems out of place, but it could just be me.
What my wife is trying to say is that
your panic over our son's welfare is
quite inconsistent with your professional
reputation.
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2012
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Very intriguing start. I think you did a good job of give enough information to hook and audiance in without too much exposition.
One sentence read a little odd to me, maybe take another look at it. Quite seems out of place, but it could just be me.
What my wife is trying to say is that
your panic over our son's welfare is
quite inconsistent with your professional
reputation.
Comment Written 25-Jun-2012
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2012
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Yes, Zephyrus, you are right on with that. Doesn't sound like a working class person's way of speaking, does it! Thank you for your awesome review and insights. I so appreciate your generosity. Warm regards, Bev
Comment from Gungalo
Yikes! That is so cold. I caught the "Daniel" is our son bit. Ohhhh those parents should be under lock and key and never allwed to talk to their son again. LOL. You got me going, girlie.
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reply by the author on 25-Jun-2012
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Yikes! That is so cold. I caught the "Daniel" is our son bit. Ohhhh those parents should be under lock and key and never allwed to talk to their son again. LOL. You got me going, girlie.
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Comment Written 25-Jun-2012
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2012
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Thanks, Gungalo. This is based on true events, so that makes it even creepier for me. Thanks for the great review. This was supposed to have been for class viewing only and got kicked into general review. Our last assignment. Thanks again! Bev
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Oh well eh Bev. Hehee.
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Yes, have learned not to sweat the small stuff. G. Xxx Bev
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LOL.
