The Puppeteer
Free Verse Poem61 total reviews
Comment from rjuselius
this is an interesting topic and piece of poetic art! i love the way the roles switch, how the puppeteer becomes the puppet.
thank you for sharing!
rebekka x
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2012
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this is an interesting topic and piece of poetic art! i love the way the roles switch, how the puppeteer becomes the puppet.
thank you for sharing!
rebekka x
Comment Written 24-Jun-2012
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2012
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Thank you
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Comment from Lady Valor
Very nice. I was almost expecting it to me more graphic than it was with the label, but it read just fine to me. The images you created through your choice of words is great. I also love the flow of this piece.
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2012
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Very nice. I was almost expecting it to me more graphic than it was with the label, but it read just fine to me. The images you created through your choice of words is great. I also love the flow of this piece.
Comment Written 24-Jun-2012
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2012
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Thank you :)
Comment from turtledove
sunnilicious, interesting approach. Thank-you for the references. Versatility in this poem is evident...thank-you for the read, turtledove.
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2012
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sunnilicious, interesting approach. Thank-you for the references. Versatility in this poem is evident...thank-you for the read, turtledove.
Comment Written 24-Jun-2012
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2012
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The poetic approach is based upon the artwork. Thank you for the review.
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You're Welcome! Looking forward to reading more, thks td.
Comment from Phyllis Stewart
This is really an intriguing interpretation (I think) of this strange image. Yes, it brings to mind perversions of all sorts. You went with it and scored a home run! But remove it from adults only... it is nowhere near what it needs to be placed there. I've read graphic sex scenes that weren't in adults only. So set it free! :)
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2012
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This is really an intriguing interpretation (I think) of this strange image. Yes, it brings to mind perversions of all sorts. You went with it and scored a home run! But remove it from adults only... it is nowhere near what it needs to be placed there. I've read graphic sex scenes that weren't in adults only. So set it free! :)
Comment Written 24-Jun-2012
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2012
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Maybe I will. Thank you.
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That sounds like a great idea! Would sound even better if you removed the "maybe" in front of I WILL! You know I'm right. Join a stop smoking support group... they say it really does help! And you will meet nice people who will CARE about you.. win-win!
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OOPS! THat reply was not meant for you...sorry..wrong window! Ignore it. :)
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OOPS! THat reply was not meant for you...sorry..wrong window! Ignore it. :)
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I removed it, but FS still disclaimered it. BDSM is a taboo. But I blame the artist. If he didn't paint it, I would of never used it for poetry. Thank you again.
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That is really weird! Try it again... are you sure you saved it? I often do an edit and forget to save...oops. If you can't fix it, ask Tom what to do.
Comment from Titanx9
You are a versatile writer. I wish I had another six stars, because this one is certainly worthy of one. You've stretched way out and have gone a bit gothic. This piece talks about the excesses of sex and perversions that can be manipulated and distorted at will. It is well structured, thematic and has excellent word choice. The artwork is perfect for the message.
reply by the author on 23-Jun-2012
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You are a versatile writer. I wish I had another six stars, because this one is certainly worthy of one. You've stretched way out and have gone a bit gothic. This piece talks about the excesses of sex and perversions that can be manipulated and distorted at will. It is well structured, thematic and has excellent word choice. The artwork is perfect for the message.
Comment Written 23-Jun-2012
reply by the author on 23-Jun-2012
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Thank you :)
Comment from dyannkuevas
Excellent work of art! I really think the picture you have is perfect for the poem. I like a lot the descriptions and the emotions involved! I would like to read more poems of yours! You're a very good writer! Glad to rate this poem :D
reply by the author on 23-Jun-2012
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Excellent work of art! I really think the picture you have is perfect for the poem. I like a lot the descriptions and the emotions involved! I would like to read more poems of yours! You're a very good writer! Glad to rate this poem :D
Comment Written 23-Jun-2012
reply by the author on 23-Jun-2012
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THank you :)
Comment from Lobengula
Oh, my love, this is a departure for you! Excellent it was, as well. "Distortion means abstract and curvation." That's a clever line. And why not twist and turn in the real thing? If it turns you on, then go for it! Very well done, love. Mike
reply by the author on 23-Jun-2012
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Oh, my love, this is a departure for you! Excellent it was, as well. "Distortion means abstract and curvation." That's a clever line. And why not twist and turn in the real thing? If it turns you on, then go for it! Very well done, love. Mike
Comment Written 23-Jun-2012
reply by the author on 23-Jun-2012
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Distortion is a created effect, but it's not a full description. That digital painting moved me. You're great. THank you. :)
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And your poem was great! Love Mike
Comment from Axiom Gray
Nice poem. I was a little underwhelmed in regards to the sex and nudity. There was this whole barrier that made me have to click on a button stating I was old enough to view the material. The censorship is a little crazy on this site.
reply by the author on 23-Jun-2012
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Nice poem. I was a little underwhelmed in regards to the sex and nudity. There was this whole barrier that made me have to click on a button stating I was old enough to view the material. The censorship is a little crazy on this site.
Comment Written 23-Jun-2012
reply by the author on 23-Jun-2012
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Thank you :)
Comment from darkmoonbaby
This is well written with no errors or mistakes. Nothing I would change. Looks good. The color scheme and image fit well.
DMB
reply by the author on 23-Jun-2012
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This is well written with no errors or mistakes. Nothing I would change. Looks good. The color scheme and image fit well.
DMB
Comment Written 23-Jun-2012
reply by the author on 23-Jun-2012
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Thank you :)
Comment from cvcopac
I see, you're inspired by the photo and responding to the image. And it is the puppeteer who is caught in the reverse role. Are you administering a sermon to aid the lesson?
Good descriptive narrative and commentary.
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reply by the author on 23-Jun-2012
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I see, you're inspired by the photo and responding to the image. And it is the puppeteer who is caught in the reverse role. Are you administering a sermon to aid the lesson?
Good descriptive narrative and commentary.
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 23-Jun-2012
reply by the author on 23-Jun-2012
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I think BDSM players speak that way. It's a form of gothic. I dunno why. THank you for the review :)
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I plead ignorance. what is a BDSM player?
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bondage, discipline, dominance, submission, sadism, masochism (BDSM) :)
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Oh boy.
