The Puppeteer
Free Verse Poem61 total reviews
Comment from Frank Atwood
Very different, though I myself see no reason to give a warning of indecent material, it's quite interesting picture tied to words which are neither offensive or provocative. Maybe it's me. I liked this the uniqueness is well done. The truth you espound on is throughout this world we live and only the puppeteers, who think they are free, see not the strings attached to them, by the manipulator of this world who is also the greatest decieve of them all. Satan. Very very good and deep to those who aren't afraid to look deeper into the words you've chosen. God bless and great work.
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2012
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Very different, though I myself see no reason to give a warning of indecent material, it's quite interesting picture tied to words which are neither offensive or provocative. Maybe it's me. I liked this the uniqueness is well done. The truth you espound on is throughout this world we live and only the puppeteers, who think they are free, see not the strings attached to them, by the manipulator of this world who is also the greatest decieve of them all. Satan. Very very good and deep to those who aren't afraid to look deeper into the words you've chosen. God bless and great work.
Comment Written 24-Jun-2012
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2012
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I'm shallow. No need to look deep.
Thank you
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Comment from Meta~Mark
this was a very well written piece of work here..crafty, witty, artistic and just a delight!! Show sorrow for thy sins! LOVED THIS!
excellent work!
FYI: I don't think this needs a warning label because it is well within the guidelines without it..
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2012
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this was a very well written piece of work here..crafty, witty, artistic and just a delight!! Show sorrow for thy sins! LOVED THIS!
excellent work!
FYI: I don't think this needs a warning label because it is well within the guidelines without it..
Comment Written 24-Jun-2012
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2012
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BDSM is still a taboo subject. It is not karma sutra. Also, it allows for violence. There are many sex acts that fall into the category too. Thank you :)
Comment from Mrs Happy Poet
This my friend is very well written you have a strong piece of poetry here it reads very well and is enhanced by the art work regards Jill
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2012
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This my friend is very well written you have a strong piece of poetry here it reads very well and is enhanced by the art work regards Jill
Comment Written 24-Jun-2012
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2012
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Thank you :)
Comment from linsbm
This is a classic display of brilliant creative artistry from you, poet. Your wordings are perfect for the write and subject for writing the language. One needs to set her time to read and enjoy this amazing poetic chemistry. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2012
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This is a classic display of brilliant creative artistry from you, poet. Your wordings are perfect for the write and subject for writing the language. One needs to set her time to read and enjoy this amazing poetic chemistry. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 24-Jun-2012
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2012
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Thank you :)
Comment from dragonpoet
This poem is different. It could be of an abusive relationship in which the abused gets out and maybe
gets back at the abuser maybe in legal ways.
I like the use of mixed media as metaphor for different kinds of sorrow and ways of getting free of it.
Keep writing
dragonpoet
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2012
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This poem is different. It could be of an abusive relationship in which the abused gets out and maybe
gets back at the abuser maybe in legal ways.
I like the use of mixed media as metaphor for different kinds of sorrow and ways of getting free of it.
Keep writing
dragonpoet
Comment Written 24-Jun-2012
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2012
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I wrote completely focused from the happening in the Digital Painting. The puppet master is now the puppet, and the original puppet pulls the strings. I don't really promote the behavior, but it is in fun not real life.
Thank you
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Good response to the picture. I wrote a poem called 'Giant Steps' in response to a picture.
You're welcome.
dragonpoet
Comment from Margaret Snowdon
Sunni, what an interesting, unusual picture,
which your poem is obviously based on.
A good choice of words to create those
images. Personally, I don't feel there
was any need to give it an adults only warning.
Margaret
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2012
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Sunni, what an interesting, unusual picture,
which your poem is obviously based on.
A good choice of words to create those
images. Personally, I don't feel there
was any need to give it an adults only warning.
Margaret
Comment Written 24-Jun-2012
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2012
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It's on there from FS. I suppose Kama Sutra is mass market not BDSM due to the nature of the toys and acts involved. Thank you :)
Comment from Anisa-
Okay, that was interesting. I was wondering why the warnings were on while I read the first verse, but found out the reasoning shortly after. Lol. Good job with this. A caution ... Links aren't allowed on site for any reason. You'd be better off listing the explanations yourself. Wouldn't want to see you get a warning or anything.
Anisa
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2012
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Okay, that was interesting. I was wondering why the warnings were on while I read the first verse, but found out the reasoning shortly after. Lol. Good job with this. A caution ... Links aren't allowed on site for any reason. You'd be better off listing the explanations yourself. Wouldn't want to see you get a warning or anything.
Anisa
Comment Written 24-Jun-2012
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2012
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Thank you :)
Comment from micci
That is an interesting picture, it looks painful, your poem was creative and different it was an enjoyable read, I thought that it was great.
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2012
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That is an interesting picture, it looks painful, your poem was creative and different it was an enjoyable read, I thought that it was great.
Comment Written 24-Jun-2012
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2012
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Thank you :)
Comment from ephraim crud, COS.
i'd have to agree with Taurean Monkey, Wow!
very well thought, penned and presented,
sunni. not sure you need the warning, mind.
it may put some off from reading this
excellent piece. thanks for sharing.
warmly, eph.
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2012
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i'd have to agree with Taurean Monkey, Wow!
very well thought, penned and presented,
sunni. not sure you need the warning, mind.
it may put some off from reading this
excellent piece. thanks for sharing.
warmly, eph.
Comment Written 24-Jun-2012
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2012
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BDSM is still taboo because of the variety and types of sexual acts that fall into the category. Thank you.
:)
Comment from Taurean Monkey
Wow! This is an interesting image, control reversed between puppet and master, shades of light and dark, The chequered backdrop almost looks like the inside of a mask (visual association of Stanley Kubrick's Eyes Wide Shut) there's so much going on in this image. Then you wrap your words around the image. Safe sex with neoprene suits, S&M and I have Michael Hutchence & David Carradine spring to mind (although both of their erotic desires led to their deaths!). Extremely descriptive write, love the cirque do soleil reference. Excellent!
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2012
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Wow! This is an interesting image, control reversed between puppet and master, shades of light and dark, The chequered backdrop almost looks like the inside of a mask (visual association of Stanley Kubrick's Eyes Wide Shut) there's so much going on in this image. Then you wrap your words around the image. Safe sex with neoprene suits, S&M and I have Michael Hutchence & David Carradine spring to mind (although both of their erotic desires led to their deaths!). Extremely descriptive write, love the cirque do soleil reference. Excellent!
Comment Written 24-Jun-2012
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2012
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Hutchence & Carradine is something to research. Thank you for the review :)
