The Puppeteer
Free Verse Poem61 total reviews
Comment from Gungalo
I see absolutely no need for your warning girl. Your write is straight up and lends itself to self absorption. Worry not, it is not offensive at all.
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2012
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I see absolutely no need for your warning girl. Your write is straight up and lends itself to self absorption. Worry not, it is not offensive at all.
Comment Written 24-Jun-2012
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2012
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THank you
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Sigh.
Comment from RaymondJohn
The puppeteer is lead--this literally means made of lead. You want "led."
The first stanza is really outstanding. Had I felt you had sustained it through the entire poem it would be worth a six. The images don't seem as clear in the second and third stanzas. Still a fine poem. Ray
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2012
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The puppeteer is lead--this literally means made of lead. You want "led."
The first stanza is really outstanding. Had I felt you had sustained it through the entire poem it would be worth a six. The images don't seem as clear in the second and third stanzas. Still a fine poem. Ray
Comment Written 24-Jun-2012
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2012
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Wow, you caught lead. I appreciate it. Thank you.
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Comment from ennahanid
This is a stunning write and the art work chosen is a touch of brilliance. I do not understand why the warning though. A very intriguing and thought-provoking work here and I give you a standing ovation for this optical illusion from your pen...Dinah
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2012
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This is a stunning write and the art work chosen is a touch of brilliance. I do not understand why the warning though. A very intriguing and thought-provoking work here and I give you a standing ovation for this optical illusion from your pen...Dinah
Comment Written 24-Jun-2012
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2012
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BDSM is still a taboo subject. It is not karma sutra. Also, it allows for violence. There are many sex acts that fall into the category too. Thank you :)
Comment from Alexander E Poet
I thought this was not overly sexualized I thought it was at the and colorful look great tone and rhythm subtle and very well done There were no errors. No typo's and nothing to change as far as i can see. Alexander QQ
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2012
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I thought this was not overly sexualized I thought it was at the and colorful look great tone and rhythm subtle and very well done There were no errors. No typo's and nothing to change as far as i can see. Alexander QQ
Comment Written 24-Jun-2012
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2012
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Thank you
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Comment from FREE-ONE
Visually stunning artwork that serves for the back-drop for your poetic words...I enjoyed the intensity that the artist endures to create work within your write...You will lose reviews because of the explicit tag, in which I do not feel you need, I have seen much worse and you are not even tapping the surface with this one (LOL)...I love it...Very creative and stylish with a great deal of sophistication pushing it off the page....until we meet again...FREE-ONE
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Visually stunning artwork that serves for the back-drop for your poetic words...I enjoyed the intensity that the artist endures to create work within your write...You will lose reviews because of the explicit tag, in which I do not feel you need, I have seen much worse and you are not even tapping the surface with this one (LOL)...I love it...Very creative and stylish with a great deal of sophistication pushing it off the page....until we meet again...FREE-ONE
Comment Written 24-Jun-2012
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2012
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BDSM is still a taboo subject. It is not karma sutra. Also, it allows for violence. There are many sex acts that fall into the category too. Thank you :)
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I totally understood but it is for the reader to explore the extra..underlying info...I again believe as written it serves as a doorway to.exploration and this to me is what moves the average to extra ordinary.....FREE-OBRa
Comment from Patty Mazzurco
Very unique poem with a subject that seems to be getting more and more attention these days. Vivid imagery and a smooth flow throughout. Nice work!
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2012
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Very unique poem with a subject that seems to be getting more and more attention these days. Vivid imagery and a smooth flow throughout. Nice work!
Comment Written 24-Jun-2012
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2012
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THank you :)
Comment from Terra Dane
Disturbing art work. Interesting to blend art and BDSM, but I suppose being an artist is somewhat like bondage on occasion and what we do to ourselves in the process of understanding and creating our art can be an a journey into surrender, service, self-sacrifice, a test and or examination of all things about ourselves. Hmmm. Is there a safe word to get the art to stop for a minute?
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2012
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Disturbing art work. Interesting to blend art and BDSM, but I suppose being an artist is somewhat like bondage on occasion and what we do to ourselves in the process of understanding and creating our art can be an a journey into surrender, service, self-sacrifice, a test and or examination of all things about ourselves. Hmmm. Is there a safe word to get the art to stop for a minute?
Comment Written 24-Jun-2012
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2012
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Art is the beauty supplier.
Thank you
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Comment from Janet Foor
I enjoyed reading your poem, "The Puppeteer". Very creative. I love optical illusions. Really make you think about the object. This picture was perfect for your work. Very well written.
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2012
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I enjoyed reading your poem, "The Puppeteer". Very creative. I love optical illusions. Really make you think about the object. This picture was perfect for your work. Very well written.
Comment Written 24-Jun-2012
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2012
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THank you
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Comment from Linda England Bonam
You did an awesome job of writing this. It was very clever how it all came together. I thought this was a free verse contest entry, but now see that it isn't. Nice writing!
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2012
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You did an awesome job of writing this. It was very clever how it all came together. I thought this was a free verse contest entry, but now see that it isn't. Nice writing!
Comment Written 24-Jun-2012
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2012
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THank you
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Comment from squid152
Very interesting write! The illusion of abstract, curvation, depth and emotion is bending my mind. The wetsuits, bondage and disipline are taking to a place... Well the stimulation and agony of it all was well worth it!-Squid
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2012
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Very interesting write! The illusion of abstract, curvation, depth and emotion is bending my mind. The wetsuits, bondage and disipline are taking to a place... Well the stimulation and agony of it all was well worth it!-Squid
Comment Written 24-Jun-2012
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2012
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Thank you
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