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The Puppeteer

Free Verse Poem

61 total reviews 
Comment from Maureen's Pen
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This was well penned and had great metaphors and strong lines. I didn't see he need for adult warnings but that's just me.

Otherwise a poem that really pulls the reader into contemplation.

Well done and thanks for sharing.
Maureen

 Comment Written 24-Jun-2012

reply by the author on 24-Jun-2012
    Thank you
    :)
Comment from Crackerberries
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Hello Sunnilicious, your poem The Puppeteer, was very well done with just a hint of erotica and adult content, but not so much that it needed such a warning (you may want to change that as more people may read). Very well done with the role playing switched. Silly Slaphappy Puppet!

 Comment Written 24-Jun-2012

reply by the author on 24-Jun-2012
    THank you
    :)
Comment from koolaid228
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Very well done in free verse I enjoyed reading this very much,I think that free verse lets you explore your inner most self when it comes to poetry.Thankyou for sharing. koolaid

 Comment Written 24-Jun-2012

reply by the author on 24-Jun-2012
    My innerself is shallow. I just interpeted the digital painting to words.
    Thank you
    :)
Comment from cheyennewy
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Hi sunnilicious,

I saw nothing in this poem that needs to warn people before they read it. It is straight forward and evocative. You have chosen superb words to express yourself and even though sensual it is written with grace. Well done....blessings, chey

 Comment Written 24-Jun-2012

reply by the author on 24-Jun-2012
    Thank you
    :)
Comment from Darakhshan17
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Very well described. Emotional and elaborate. The imagery is also very nice. I liked the poem and the flow very much. Thanks for sharing.

 Comment Written 24-Jun-2012

reply by the author on 24-Jun-2012
    THank you
    :)
Comment from Oatmeal
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sunnilicious,

Chosen explanations are made very clear and descriptive. Exceptional. Emotional reflections are insightful and impressive.

I saw no SPAG and no typos. Everything looked in place.

I look forward to seeing you again.

Love you,

Oatmeal

 Comment Written 24-Jun-2012

reply by the author on 24-Jun-2012
    You're so kind. Thank you.
    :)
Comment from sweetwoodjax
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this is very well written, sunnilicious, you did a great job writing this free verse poem about the puppeteer who has the tables turned on him and is caught in his own ropes

 Comment Written 24-Jun-2012

reply by the author on 24-Jun-2012
    THank you
    :)
Comment from Just2Write
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There is something of the puppeteer, and the puppet in each of us. Saddism & Masochism - perhaps. I found this poem to be well structured and loaded with lots of rich wording. Rose.

 Comment Written 24-Jun-2012

reply by the author on 24-Jun-2012
    THank you
    :)
Comment from Kingsland
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I liked your puppets being a metaphor for life. We all have a little bit of puppet in us. Whether we want to admit it or not. It is all part and partial of what society dictates. I found this poem to be well written with an excellent message... John

 Comment Written 24-Jun-2012

reply by the author on 24-Jun-2012
    THank you :)
Comment from Gert sherwood
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Hello sunnilicious
You indeed have a poem that should be read several times to get the meaning of what you are saying in your very original poem? I must say you have very powerful us of the English language
Gert

 Comment Written 24-Jun-2012

reply by the author on 24-Jun-2012
    I use to play with the dictionary and thesaurus as a child. What to say?! Thank you :)
    :)
reply by Gert sherwood on 24-Jun-2012
    smiles you are so welcome
    See you later
    Gert