First Day
A baby's first sight.3 total reviews
Comment from Cat Lover
Too true, but is that first cry a speech. Probably more like, "I'm damn cold, put me back in."
Good little poem, easy to understand and read.
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Too true, but is that first cry a speech. Probably more like, "I'm damn cold, put me back in."
Good little poem, easy to understand and read.
Comment Written 19-Jun-2012
Comment from DBastian
Great thoughts! You summed up birth so well - an emotional birth or awarenss, as well as a baby's birth. With your title, I think baby. If you titled it something else, I would think emotional (like getting out of prison, or arriving at a city, or something like that). I could go on and on. Great thoughts and great seeds to other thoughts!
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Great thoughts! You summed up birth so well - an emotional birth or awarenss, as well as a baby's birth. With your title, I think baby. If you titled it something else, I would think emotional (like getting out of prison, or arriving at a city, or something like that). I could go on and on. Great thoughts and great seeds to other thoughts!
Comment Written 19-Jun-2012
Comment from Phyllis Stewart
Very imaginative... unless you are speaking from memory...LOL! Seriously, this may be very close to the truth. How shocking and scary that cool air and bright light must be to a newborn!
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Very imaginative... unless you are speaking from memory...LOL! Seriously, this may be very close to the truth. How shocking and scary that cool air and bright light must be to a newborn!
Comment Written 19-Jun-2012
