Poetry, Dreams In Motion.
Viewing comments for Chapter 15 "Skeletons"A collection of poetry.
6 total reviews
Comment from Nescher Pyscher
I think I might be a lazy reviewer, Rci.
I liked this. It was tight, clean and well constrcuted, but I wanted some kind of backstory to mount your premise on. (Too lazy to assume you're speaking to the reader in general, or to look for meaning myself, I guess.)
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I think I might be a lazy reviewer, Rci.
I liked this. It was tight, clean and well constrcuted, but I wanted some kind of backstory to mount your premise on. (Too lazy to assume you're speaking to the reader in general, or to look for meaning myself, I guess.)
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Comment Written 27-Feb-2005
Comment from StormyGale
You Blow Me Away!
I could not have written this one better. I am so glad someone else thinks about the consequences of dirty deeds to others and writes about that.
You need to write a book, my friend.
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You Blow Me Away!
I could not have written this one better. I am so glad someone else thinks about the consequences of dirty deeds to others and writes about that.
You need to write a book, my friend.
Comment Written 26-Feb-2005
Comment from driven
Outstanding effort. Now that I've written that, it's off to the closet I go . . .
Very deep theme, and one I'm sure, that each of us who read this can relate to in some degree, some perhaps more than others. NIce work.
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Outstanding effort. Now that I've written that, it's off to the closet I go . . .
Very deep theme, and one I'm sure, that each of us who read this can relate to in some degree, some perhaps more than others. NIce work.
Comment Written 26-Feb-2005
Comment from CarolinasAngel
Very nicely done, Ricouard. I enjoyed this a lot. The touch is a little off, but that is an easy fix with syllables and word choice. Good work though.
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Very nicely done, Ricouard. I enjoyed this a lot. The touch is a little off, but that is an easy fix with syllables and word choice. Good work though.
Comment Written 26-Feb-2005
Comment from Kingsland
excellent poetic form
i loved everything about this one
it was a very smooth read for me
and your rhyming was right on
.....John Allen Kingsland
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excellent poetic form
i loved everything about this one
it was a very smooth read for me
and your rhyming was right on
.....John Allen Kingsland
Comment Written 26-Feb-2005
Comment from greywlf
Excellent poem, it really opens ones mind to relate to their hidden skeletons
and in what closets they may hide. The poem reads very well, great flow, very good choice of language. Thank You for the great read, Greywlf
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Excellent poem, it really opens ones mind to relate to their hidden skeletons
and in what closets they may hide. The poem reads very well, great flow, very good choice of language. Thank You for the great read, Greywlf
Comment Written 26-Feb-2005
