Comment from Rdfrdmom2

Excellent

Gayle:

Poor Amy, she knew the pack smell the very first time she
met Darius. I suspect it will be just that scent which
will allow Amy to lead Tony and the "boys" to find the
sisters when they go missing. Can't wait until I see how
all this plays out.

thanks for sharing
love,
jan

 Comment Written 22-Jun-2012

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reply by the author on 23-Jun-2012

lol, isn't she so bad. I love the interaction between Jim and Amy, it's been there since Secret Lives! Ah, I'm having too much fun. Yes, it's going to be fun seeing where this goes. I'm just typing. Terry's bot the bit between here teeth - for now.

Thanks and big hugs,
Gayle

Comment from bookishfabler

Excellent

It was well after eight when they decided to head back to the Retreat. Amy slunk out from under the table, head down, pressing against Ella's thigh.
Jim opened the back door of the van and ordered the dogs inside. As Amy jumped up, he grabbed her by the neck and turned her around. (so far I have nothing to nag about, so I thought I'd point out your friend, EE is back)

and the ? again at the very end. He does notlike you. Like him, they would pursue normal lives during the day, but in the first waxing of the moon, following their instincts for the full cycle, they would hunt together, bringing in more potential members for the pack.

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 Comment Written 12-Jun-2012

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reply by the author on 13-Jun-2012

Hey Heidi,

EE is my enemy again. There for a while we were doing fine, but all of a sudden it's the ????s again.

Thanks for the comments and stars! I so appreciate you!

Hugs,
Gayle

reply by bookishfabler on 14-Jun-2012

Always. As long as I come in abnd check in time before it is lost from my box. Which has happened many times. Not enough time for everything. Love where the book is going
hugs heidi

Comment from barbara.wilkey

Excellent

I can understand his anger at the poor dog. I would be upset too, but I am often reminded they are just animals. I enjoyed reading your post.

 Comment Written 11-Jun-2012

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reply by the author on 12-Jun-2012

Hey Barbara,

I really hesitated to put that in on FS because so many of my readers have no idea of the background of the dogs unless they're fans. Thus far, except for Ella's surprise, Amy's really just acting like a well behaved, friendly dog. Only, she isn't! She's a guard dog! lol, I can see Jim's point. And of course, from the first book, she and Jim have had their issues, lol.

Thanks so much for the great review and comments!

Hugs,
Gayle

Comment from rwilliam

Excellent

OHHHHH, chills at the ending. Very good chapter!

You have a very intriguing story going here. I'm entreated!!

Keep up the good work.

 Comment Written 11-Jun-2012

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reply by the author on 12-Jun-2012

I'm hoping to give a good ending with each chapter, but because I can't put 3/4K words on at a time, I have to break the FS chapters in odd places. But thankfully, I got a good break here. I have only a rough sketch of where we're going with this book. Like always, I'm the typist and the characters are writing the story!

Big thanks and hugs,
Gayle

Comment from WORDSOFTHEHEART

Excellent

You had me at "Face the color of an old beet" LOL
Truly this is a great read. I am intrigued by the Bayou and the mysteries of the locals and their folk lore.
I love your descriptive way of writing,(the first waxing of the moon ) wonderful. Best of luck and I will continue to follow this great story.
Heart.

 Comment Written 11-Jun-2012

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reply by the author on 11-Jun-2012

Hi Heart and thank you for the supportive and encouraging words. I really appreciate them and hope to see you again soon.

Hugs,
Gayle

Comment from lynnhartz

Excellent

This is a creepy, scary story, but very well written. You are maintaining your place on fanstory,for sure! I am new here and have posted several things already. I look forward to reading more of yours!

 Comment Written 11-Jun-2012

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reply by the author on 11-Jun-2012

Hi Lynn,

Thanks so much for the great review. I hope you can read the earlier chapters and read along.

Thanks again,
Gayle

Comment from nor84

Excellent

The show ended on a flamb© note.>>>Evil Eddie's messing with you.

Please, sit; eat, and yes>>>semicolon doesn't belong there, just a comma.


His birthday's next week ... the big six zero and mom's (Mom's)got a

Taking another man's wife didn't bother Darius per se>>>better without 'per se'

A man thinking in terms like 'exquisite?' But it's your story and I'll keep quiet.

 Comment Written 10-Jun-2012

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reply by the author on 11-Jun-2012

Hey Sis, I knew it wouldn't be long! That damned EE. Let me attend to the comma and cap. How did I manage that?

Anyhoo, just wondering if you can tell me how I transpose the loup prologue into this book. Do you know how?

Hey, make it a pm, could ya? I'll be in editing!

Hugs and thanks,
Gayle

Comment from tinams

Excellent

This is my first foray into your story so I am at a slight disadvantage, but I found it very interesting, if a little weird. I will try to read more in the future :) Tina

 Comment Written 10-Jun-2012

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reply by the author on 11-Jun-2012

Hey Tina, weird, I guess. If you get the chance, just skin through the earlier chapters, no need to review, just get up to speed. If you'd like!

Thank you so much for the great review,

Gayle

Comment from Patty Mazzurco

Exceptional

This just keeps getting better and better. The ending with Darius so casually planning gave me the creeps! lol Very well written, great details and dialogue and I am TOTALLY HOOKED now...lol


(one tiny suggestion)
Like him, they would pursue normal lives during the day, but in the first waxing of the moon, following their instincts for the full cycle, (semi-colon)

 Comment Written 10-Jun-2012

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reply by the author on 11-Jun-2012

Oh my, Patty, that's sure a lovely bouquet! Thank you so much for the great review and your support. I'm just so thrilled, I can't thank you enough.

Let me get in there and see about that semicolon!

Big thanks and hugs,
Gayle

Comment from fictionwriter

Excellent

Oh, such dasterdly plans. What a great story. I can't wait to read more. You've executed this without any missteps or glitches. Well done.

 Comment Written 10-Jun-2012

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reply by the author on 11-Jun-2012

Well thank you so much for the high praise. This is just a bit outside my usual parameters, but I'm having fun with it, that's for sure.

Thank you so much and hope to see you again soon,

Hugs,
Gayle