Lonely Hearts Meet
Viewing comments for Chapter 70 "part one, Chapter 21"Anna and her son escape from a man-made Hell.
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Comment from Patrick G Cox
Hi barbara,
Its been a busy week so far and getting worse. This is a good winding up to her memories returning. At least she is seeing the dots, even if they aren't connecting yet.
As ever, nicely written, the story is coming together well.
Patrick
reply by the author on 13-Jun-2012
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Hi barbara,
Its been a busy week so far and getting worse. This is a good winding up to her memories returning. At least she is seeing the dots, even if they aren't connecting yet.
As ever, nicely written, the story is coming together well.
Patrick
Comment Written 13-Jun-2012
reply by the author on 13-Jun-2012
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I hope your life calms down, some.
Comment from missy98writer
Barbara,
Part one chapter twenty-one is wondrtfully written with vivid imagery painted in this readers head as I read Anna leaving the hospital, but insisting to stop at the scene of the crime before going to Troy's parents home to recoup from her dead exes near fatal beating. This chapter was a nail bitter up until the cliff hanger ending where Anna remembered after passing out into Troy's arms. I loved your latest chapter.
Melissa.
reply by the author on 13-Jun-2012
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Barbara,
Part one chapter twenty-one is wondrtfully written with vivid imagery painted in this readers head as I read Anna leaving the hospital, but insisting to stop at the scene of the crime before going to Troy's parents home to recoup from her dead exes near fatal beating. This chapter was a nail bitter up until the cliff hanger ending where Anna remembered after passing out into Troy's arms. I loved your latest chapter.
Melissa.
Comment Written 13-Jun-2012
reply by the author on 13-Jun-2012
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Thank you for the kind review. How are you doing??????
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My doctor had me catheter until I get rid of my severe bladder infection. I got to where I wasn't peeing or popping well because I was backed up. I'm feeling much better, but I'm catharized and it affects my movement in bed. I'm taking a heavy duty antibodic. I had such a high fever on the weekend I was lathargic. I love your concern, my Texas friend.
Melissa.
Comment from jaeladarling
Wow, what an ending! Has she remembered? Get the next installment out! This was a tense, exciting read. I can't wait to see what happens next!
reply by the author on 13-Jun-2012
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Wow, what an ending! Has she remembered? Get the next installment out! This was a tense, exciting read. I can't wait to see what happens next!
Comment Written 13-Jun-2012
reply by the author on 13-Jun-2012
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Roberta Joan Jensen
and a cast on my arm.
Troy walked around to the other side, sat beside Anna, and touched her hand.
With her free hand, Anna wiped her eyes. --- Clarification.
"with her free hand" When I first read that, I thought troy had taken her other hand. I went back to check when I reached the part about her arm being in a cast. He simply touched her hand.
So, does "with her free hand" mean the one not in a cast?
I'd have to go back to previous chapters, but which arm is in a cast?
With it being in a cast, wouldn't it be in a sling? This is a little confusing to me.
Having an experience like that is terribly difficult to deal with, but to forget it and then have it slammed home to you like that must be an even worse experience. Poor Anna.
Roberta
reply by the author on 13-Jun-2012
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and a cast on my arm.
Troy walked around to the other side, sat beside Anna, and touched her hand.
With her free hand, Anna wiped her eyes. --- Clarification.
"with her free hand" When I first read that, I thought troy had taken her other hand. I went back to check when I reached the part about her arm being in a cast. He simply touched her hand.
So, does "with her free hand" mean the one not in a cast?
I'd have to go back to previous chapters, but which arm is in a cast?
With it being in a cast, wouldn't it be in a sling? This is a little confusing to me.
Having an experience like that is terribly difficult to deal with, but to forget it and then have it slammed home to you like that must be an even worse experience. Poor Anna.
Roberta
Comment Written 13-Jun-2012
reply by the author on 13-Jun-2012
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Thank you for the kind review. I will check out those areas.
Comment from MizKat
Barbara - This is a very good chapter. It held my interest all the way through. Your books are always so good. Bravo!! Kat
reply by the author on 13-Jun-2012
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Barbara - This is a very good chapter. It held my interest all the way through. Your books are always so good. Bravo!! Kat
Comment Written 13-Jun-2012
reply by the author on 13-Jun-2012
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from rheabug
You keep on doing a wonderful job with this story. It would be difficult to handle Anna's situation and I am not sure I ever would be strong enough. Blessings, Linda
reply by the author on 12-Jun-2012
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You keep on doing a wonderful job with this story. It would be difficult to handle Anna's situation and I am not sure I ever would be strong enough. Blessings, Linda
Comment Written 12-Jun-2012
reply by the author on 12-Jun-2012
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Thank you for the kind review and support.
Comment from WLHall
Oh, poor Anna! But brave for coming back to her apartment. You described the scene so well, felt like I was there. Great job with the emotions, especially when Anna couldn't remember the code and then couldn't remember what had happened exactly at the apartment. The writing was tight and your dialogue parts were natural. Great job!
Wanda
reply by the author on 12-Jun-2012
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Oh, poor Anna! But brave for coming back to her apartment. You described the scene so well, felt like I was there. Great job with the emotions, especially when Anna couldn't remember the code and then couldn't remember what had happened exactly at the apartment. The writing was tight and your dialogue parts were natural. Great job!
Wanda
Comment Written 12-Jun-2012
reply by the author on 12-Jun-2012
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from guinea
well written part of the story. I have been following this story and have enjoyed it very much. My heart goes out to Anna. Look forward to more.
reply by the author on 12-Jun-2012
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well written part of the story. I have been following this story and have enjoyed it very much. My heart goes out to Anna. Look forward to more.
Comment Written 12-Jun-2012
reply by the author on 12-Jun-2012
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from dejohnsrld (Debbie)
Excellent chapter-I could feel the fear. After my last surgery, I couldn't remember where I lived for a couple of days. What a frightening experience~Debbie
reply by the author on 12-Jun-2012
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Excellent chapter-I could feel the fear. After my last surgery, I couldn't remember where I lived for a couple of days. What a frightening experience~Debbie
Comment Written 12-Jun-2012
reply by the author on 12-Jun-2012
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Thank you for your insight. I appreciate your kind review.
Comment from N.K. Wagner
Another great installment, Barbara. One spot sounded a little stilted:
"I'm sensing fear -I'm afraid (?)
Just a thought. :) Nancy
reply by the author on 12-Jun-2012
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Another great installment, Barbara. One spot sounded a little stilted:
"I'm sensing fear -I'm afraid (?)
Just a thought. :) Nancy
Comment Written 12-Jun-2012
reply by the author on 12-Jun-2012
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I appreciate your suggestion. Thank you for the kind review.
