Hollow House
Freestyle two true story poems15 total reviews
Comment from ScarletClearwater
Thank you for the author notes. They really give life to the piece and make it more sad. I really like the imagery here. Great job with this work.
reply by the author on 05-Jun-2012
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Thank you for the author notes. They really give life to the piece and make it more sad. I really like the imagery here. Great job with this work.
Comment Written 05-Jun-2012
reply by the author on 05-Jun-2012
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Thank you Scarlet for your kind comments and review.
Comment from Crackerberries
Oh man I wish I chose to skip this read. How sad. This could have been entered in that contest I think I saw about empathy... This was sad.
reply by the author on 05-Jun-2012
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Oh man I wish I chose to skip this read. How sad. This could have been entered in that contest I think I saw about empathy... This was sad.
Comment Written 05-Jun-2012
reply by the author on 05-Jun-2012
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Yes, it is a very sad story. Thank you for reviewing my work so favorably. I appreciate your input.
Comment from ernesto escarro
Hollow House
Your imagination did the right work for a
a friend whose house are surrounded with weeds.
Plenty of trashes to full
without companion to help.
You could imagine how failed this life is,
he is still young togo to the grave.
reply by the author on 05-Jun-2012
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Hollow House
Your imagination did the right work for a
a friend whose house are surrounded with weeds.
Plenty of trashes to full
without companion to help.
You could imagine how failed this life is,
he is still young togo to the grave.
Comment Written 05-Jun-2012
reply by the author on 05-Jun-2012
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Thank you Ernesto for the generous stars and review.
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Your worth. God bless.
Comment from dmt1967
I liked this poem it was very haunting and sad but I liked it I liked the picture to it complimented the poem very well thank you and well done
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reply by the author on 05-Jun-2012
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I liked this poem it was very haunting and sad but I liked it I liked the picture to it complimented the poem very well thank you and well done
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Comment Written 05-Jun-2012
reply by the author on 05-Jun-2012
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Thank you dmt for your kind review of my sad poems.
Comment from Janice Canerdy
I am always amazed at others' comments--and sometimes my own--when someone commits suicide and we try to FIGURE OUT what he/she must have been thinking! In most cases, we'll never know. House do have personalities, don't they? Good
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reply by the author on 05-Jun-2012
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I am always amazed at others' comments--and sometimes my own--when someone commits suicide and we try to FIGURE OUT what he/she must have been thinking! In most cases, we'll never know. House do have personalities, don't they? Good
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Comment Written 05-Jun-2012
reply by the author on 05-Jun-2012
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Thank you Janice for your comments and fine review of my work. Yes, my husband and I have experienced suicide way too much with my husbands' mother, cousin, our son, and now our neighbor and friend. You are right...there are no answers to the questions you want to ask.
