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A Hard Day's Night

A kitten plays hard

37 total reviews 
Comment from Meta~Mark
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wow..talk about guilt trip and playing dead..A fat, black fantail the people called Trish, floated on top of the water, one bulbous eye frozen in death. Chester the cat..what a good time story this is..LOL..HA HA ..funny and witty

 Comment Written 03-Jun-2012


reply by the author on 06-Jun-2012
    Hi there! I know, Chester is onery! BUT lovable...I had several cats like this. One named Tao that actually knocked pictures down and leapt up making the ones on hangers be crooked. I had to put him in a spare room for a while when I had to be gone. Anyway, Thank you for this great review...what a joy! HUG! Susan
Comment from N.K. Wagner
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Suse, this was funny until I looked at the picture. Then it became hysterical! Poor Chester. He's all done in! LOL! Oh, I think you misspelled "imperturbable". :) Nancy

 Comment Written 03-Jun-2012


reply by the author on 04-Jun-2012
    Hi Nancy! I know, this cat was so tired. BUT, I wonder, as I kinda know cats...if he wasn't in a normal position and the owner sort of gently laid him out, snapped this photo and he probably rolled right back up? I dont' know. SO cute...and oh, I looked up that word and it's online as such? I'll try again tho. I send a huge hug for your enthusiastic review. This made me laugh...and that's hard to do. hugs! Susan
Comment from Joy Graham
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Oh that picture is to die for!!! I love it :) Your story is very cute about a mischievous cat. I have had many cats over the years and they all had their own personalities. They sure charmed their way into my heart.

 Comment Written 03-Jun-2012


reply by the author on 06-Jun-2012
    I know! I thought that too, Joy! HOW cute...wouldn't you love to just pick him up and love on him??? Oh. I'm glad you like and have had cats. There are too many tho....and get mistreated. I hate that. But, well...thank you dear. Your kind note is wonderful. xoxo. Susan
Comment from Dutchie
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O yes, Susan, when I look at the picture it's been a hard days night.LOL. I love this little story and can relate it. My daughter has three cats and yes cats are hunters, nothing is safe for them... They catch birds, fish and nibble on houseplants... they are very busy with it, and so is my daughter.... I love the picture and the story. Great job writing this. Fia

 Comment Written 03-Jun-2012


reply by the author on 06-Jun-2012
    HI Fia! How neat! Thank you for sharing this with me! I just dont' have house plants anymore...and my cat is declawed so I never let her out. She is the light of my life...she is my little darling. And the one who NEVER hurts me. Ever. Thank you so much for enjoying this Fia...xoxo. Susan
Comment from Sasha
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I used up my monthly allotment of 6's so you'll have to settle for a 5, sorry. What a delightful and clever story about an energetic and determined cat. Marvelous photo that also made me laugh.

 Comment Written 03-Jun-2012


reply by the author on 06-Jun-2012
    Oh Miss Smurph! Never fear...your kind thoughts are worth a million to me. Always. Just so you enjoy, that is all that matters. I just loved this photo and had to put words to it. SO cute! We need cuteness in our lives. And each other. LOVE you!! Suse
Comment from Gungalo
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How unique your story is girl and how you ended it. Just so fine a piece of story telling. I love the picture of that kitten.

 Comment Written 03-Jun-2012


reply by the author on 06-Jun-2012
    Hey there! Thank you so very much! I'm so happy you liked this! I had fun, and just had to put a few words to the sleepy baby! What a doll!! Thank you Miss C! xoxo. Susan
reply by Gungalo on 06-Jun-2012
    Sigh ....
reply by the author on 06-Jun-2012
    I see I'm not the only night owl this evening! :)
reply by Gungalo on 06-Jun-2012
    You see true. LOL.
Comment from Margaret Snowdon
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Ha ha... a great little piece, and
he doesn't look that sorry lying there
in that position.

canid? canine?


Most enjoyable, Susan.

Margaret

 Comment Written 03-Jun-2012


reply by the author on 06-Jun-2012
    Hi Margaret...Thank you so much. Yes, this little guy just had to have a story! LOL! He looks like me, only cuter. SO tired...I'm just delighted you enjoyed this Margaret. And I sure hope you are doing well. Love!! Susan
Comment from Spiritual Echo
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fantastic picture, cute little story. I can see ehy you were inspired

should be canine not candid

Hugs. ingrid

here'some extra stars to satisfy FD word requirement,

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 Comment Written 03-Jun-2012


reply by the author on 06-Jun-2012
    Hi Ingrid! HOW did you get the stars to go up and down?? HOW neat. Different. I always appreciate your reviews. AND need to catch up to you too. SO sorry. Thank you again...I'm so glad you liked little Chester! He's so TIRED...like me. xoxo. Susan
Comment from Phyllis Stewart
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LOL! This was a lot of fun and very clever. I just wonder why he'd wait till "the fish tank had a lid." How will he get to the fish if they put a lid on it? You might want to reword that... very confusing. Love the new curtains, tho. :)

 Comment Written 03-Jun-2012


reply by the author on 06-Jun-2012
    Hi Phyllis! I tried to say they bought a lid after this rampage? LOL! I did rework one sentence. I think it was that one. I had a cat years ago that would climb curtains. She was a doll too. But had to go to the barn. I love them all. This pix just had to have a short story! And I'm glad you enjoyed it my friend. :) Susan
Comment from LancsLass
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LOL what a delightful story. I love the idea of Chester working himself to a cat-frazzle, really made me smile.

'The others stayed well hidden amongst the sunken treasure chest(,) and bright green plastic kelp.'
I'm no authority, but I think this comma is unnecessary.

'Soon the house would come back to life with the hustle and bustle of the people who lived inside (the walls,)'
I had to read the sentence twice to understand it, as crawly things live inside walls. May just be me, but think your meaning is more clear without it.

Thanks for a very entertaining read this Sunday morning. Anna

 Comment Written 03-Jun-2012


reply by the author on 06-Jun-2012
    Hi Anna! I reworked that sentence..you are right. It sounded off. Thank you! I'm just delighted when you like my stories! Wow!! HUGS you! Susan