The scream
This poem describes the effect of a scream by a scared person on the traditional silence of a graveyard.3 total reviews
Comment from anydamaru
Hmm...now this could mean many things here, as I see it. From first view I pictured a young woman who lost her beloved in some kind of accident, but I`m sure that there may be some other interpretations. A picture would be nice). Alex
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Hmm...now this could mean many things here, as I see it. From first view I pictured a young woman who lost her beloved in some kind of accident, but I`m sure that there may be some other interpretations. A picture would be nice). Alex
Comment Written 31-May-2012
Comment from Mrs Happy Poet
This is very well written and a very creative 5/7/5 entry you have done really well good luck in the contest regards Fuller Jill
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This is very well written and a very creative 5/7/5 entry you have done really well good luck in the contest regards Fuller Jill
Comment Written 31-May-2012
Comment from adewpearl
Your poem is in good 5/7/5 format though I'm not a big fan of poetic lines that end with dangling words which actually belong at the beginning of the next line - the deafening silence that
excellent alliteration in Sarah's scream
strong verb choice in shattered
and you tell this Biblical story effectively even though you are severely restricted by word count :-) Brooke
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Your poem is in good 5/7/5 format though I'm not a big fan of poetic lines that end with dangling words which actually belong at the beginning of the next line - the deafening silence that
excellent alliteration in Sarah's scream
strong verb choice in shattered
and you tell this Biblical story effectively even though you are severely restricted by word count :-) Brooke
Comment Written 31-May-2012
