Comment from MizKat

Excellent

Mermaids - I really enjoyed reading your poem about Mr. Beautiful and Bigfoot. What a wonderful imagination you have. Great stuff. Kat

 Comment Written 04-Jul-2012

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reply by the author on 04-Jul-2012

Thanks for reading and enjoying this unusual poem. Elaine

Comment from kevinwells3

Excellent

Life is great and so is this poem. I found it both amusing and fun It flowed very well and the imagery was vivid . Keep writing

 Comment Written 04-Jul-2012

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reply by the author on 04-Jul-2012

Thanks for a great review. Elaine

Comment from WORDSOFTHEHEART

Excellent

Hello,

My first impression came with the awesome picture. Then the joy of your poem. I love birds and nature and even think Bigfoot is possible..So yes, life is great.
One typo error."unisom" should read unison. Fun, fun poem.
Best of luck, Cheryl

 Comment Written 02-Jun-2012

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reply by the author on 03-Jun-2012

Thanks for pointing out the spelling error. I am laughing because unisom is sleep medicine. THanks for a great review. Elaine

reply by WORDSOFTHEHEART on 03-Jun-2012

Ha ha.. I could use some.. Have a great evening. : ) Cheryl

Comment from Cindy Warren

Excellent

What fun! I can visualise the ape sitting on the log playing the ukulele with the bird on his head and the plovers dancing to the tune. Thanks for making me smile today.

 Comment Written 02-Jun-2012

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reply by the author on 03-Jun-2012

I glad my poem brought a smile to your day. Thanks for a great review. Elaine

Comment from adewpearl

Excellent

I love the alliteration in this poem :-)
What a wonderfully surreal scene you create of the ukulele-playing ape/Bigfoot with a bluebird on his head as he strums away : -) And love the added touch of the boogie-dancing plovers LOL Brooke :-)

 Comment Written 02-Jun-2012

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reply by the author on 03-Jun-2012

Thanks for a great review. I appreciate your encouraging comments. Elaine

Comment from Carolyn Hilliard

Excellent

bluebird is spelled wrong in this line:
the blubird and hairy
I'm sorry to see this is the last chapter. I've very much enjoyed your poems. This plover is beautiful

 Comment Written 30-May-2012

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reply by the author on 30-May-2012

Thanks for pointing out the spelling error. I appreciate your encouraging review. Elaine

Comment from Spitfire

Excellent

Wouldn't it be fun to have an artist paint this! What a delightful picture for a child's bedroom. Great use of alliteration with the "s" , "p" and "b" sounds. Love:
show stopping boogie routine.

 Comment Written 28-May-2012

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reply by the author on 30-May-2012

Thanks for a great review. Elaine

Comment from judiverse

Excellent

That's one beautiful bird! I like the description of the plovers doing a boogie routine. It's cute that they're dancing in unison. Their dance brings joy. You also have a good line in that the bird was doing what it does best, looking beautiful. You show such great admiration and knowledge of your furry friends. judi

 Comment Written 28-May-2012

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reply by the author on 30-May-2012

Thanks for such a thoughtful review. Elaine

reply by judiverse on 30-May-2012

You arre welcome, mermaids. judiverse

Comment from Stalking Wolf

Excellent

A total bit of nonsense to lighten an otherwise bad day. Light , whimsical, and easy-reading. It brings a smile on the readers face.

 Comment Written 28-May-2012

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reply by the author on 28-May-2012

You stated it correctly. Nonsense is often a welcomed relief. Thanks for your encouraging review. Elaine

Comment from Gert sherwood

Excellent

Mermaids so much fun to read will the musical ape and all his friends
Got a big kick out of the bluebird
Give us more.

Gert

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 Comment Written 28-May-2012

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reply by the author on 28-May-2012

MOre will be coming. THanks for a great review. Elaine

reply by Gert sherwood on 28-May-2012

good
Gert