Lonely Hearts Meet
Viewing comments for Chapter 68 "part four, Chapter 20"Anna and her son escape from a man-made Hell.
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Comment from NaughtieScribe
This was realistic yet not entirely unexpected. More hoped for than anything else. I want Anna physically well and ready to be with her son and genuinely start her life over. But I'm still worried about her psyche. And as much as I want her and Troy together, Anna is definitely going to need some me time before committing to a relationship.
reply by the author on 05-Aug-2012
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This was realistic yet not entirely unexpected. More hoped for than anything else. I want Anna physically well and ready to be with her son and genuinely start her life over. But I'm still worried about her psyche. And as much as I want her and Troy together, Anna is definitely going to need some me time before committing to a relationship.
Comment Written 04-Aug-2012
reply by the author on 05-Aug-2012
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Thank you for your kind review.
Comment from CALLAHANMR
Hi Barbara:)
I'm a little late with this review. I was busy with my 'Technological Kitten'.
It is good that Anna is awake and knows Troy and appreciates the Indian Blankets. Although a bit of retrograde amnesia oten follows a brain trauma, Troy should not worry about providing some information to Anna. After te tests are completed, she will probably already remember Bobby's terrible attack. Of course she won't remember what happened at the end. She was likely unconscious, before Bobby was dead.
I'm ready for her complete recovery with the full knowledge that she is safe at last.
Now let the romance bloom,
Love and Irish Hugs,
Roger
reply by the author on 03-Jun-2012
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Hi Barbara:)
I'm a little late with this review. I was busy with my 'Technological Kitten'.
It is good that Anna is awake and knows Troy and appreciates the Indian Blankets. Although a bit of retrograde amnesia oten follows a brain trauma, Troy should not worry about providing some information to Anna. After te tests are completed, she will probably already remember Bobby's terrible attack. Of course she won't remember what happened at the end. She was likely unconscious, before Bobby was dead.
I'm ready for her complete recovery with the full knowledge that she is safe at last.
Now let the romance bloom,
Love and Irish Hugs,
Roger
Comment Written 03-Jun-2012
reply by the author on 03-Jun-2012
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Thank you for the kind review and your continued support.
Comment from Patrick G Cox
Hi Barbara,
So Anna is back in the land of the wakeful, but may not remember everything - or anything.
As ever this is well put together and reads believably.
Patrick
reply by the author on 01-Jun-2012
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Hi Barbara,
So Anna is back in the land of the wakeful, but may not remember everything - or anything.
As ever this is well put together and reads believably.
Patrick
Comment Written 01-Jun-2012
reply by the author on 01-Jun-2012
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from RebelRose
I hope I'm wrong but I have an uncomfortable feeling about them saying she would be having tests for hours and sending Troy home. Another mysterious and interesting chapter.
reply by the author on 01-Jun-2012
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I hope I'm wrong but I have an uncomfortable feeling about them saying she would be having tests for hours and sending Troy home. Another mysterious and interesting chapter.
Comment Written 01-Jun-2012
reply by the author on 01-Jun-2012
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from olliebuster
Forgive me, I am joining for the first time. This sounds like a true story.Judging from the information above, this sounds as a case of violent abuse. The story is well detailed and easy to follow. Anna asked a crucial question at the end."Why am I here?" Seems like the physical harm will be overshadowed by the mental state. Personally, I feel that Troy should be a bit stronger in character. He sleeps and asks his Dad for answers. An interesting read. Looking forward to the continuation. Olliebuster.
reply by the author on 01-Jun-2012
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Forgive me, I am joining for the first time. This sounds like a true story.Judging from the information above, this sounds as a case of violent abuse. The story is well detailed and easy to follow. Anna asked a crucial question at the end."Why am I here?" Seems like the physical harm will be overshadowed by the mental state. Personally, I feel that Troy should be a bit stronger in character. He sleeps and asks his Dad for answers. An interesting read. Looking forward to the continuation. Olliebuster.
Comment Written 01-Jun-2012
reply by the author on 01-Jun-2012
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Thank you for the kind review.
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You are very welcome. Olliebuster
Comment from Auroraboreal800
I'm so glad Anna is back to normal, in the other hand, I think this is just wonderful to know how deep is Troy's love for her... Those are the things that make the story so realistic. Your husband's picture is just BEAUTIFUL!
GREAT JOB Barbara!!
reply by the author on 01-Jun-2012
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I'm so glad Anna is back to normal, in the other hand, I think this is just wonderful to know how deep is Troy's love for her... Those are the things that make the story so realistic. Your husband's picture is just BEAUTIFUL!
GREAT JOB Barbara!!
Comment Written 01-Jun-2012
reply by the author on 01-Jun-2012
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from dbmccarter
I love the touch about the Indian Blankets. Very touching. So Anna doesn't remember what happened. It will be interesting to know how that is handled. Hope your kitties are doing better too.
reply by the author on 01-Jun-2012
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I love the touch about the Indian Blankets. Very touching. So Anna doesn't remember what happened. It will be interesting to know how that is handled. Hope your kitties are doing better too.
Comment Written 01-Jun-2012
reply by the author on 01-Jun-2012
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from WLHall
Great part of this chapter, Barbara. You were able to show the great love Troy has for Anna. And show how it really is like to wake up after being unconscious like that-needing a drink of water. These little things make the story very realistic and you pulled it off well. I'm glad Anna will recover physically, but her emotions must be frazzled. Great dialogue throughout.
Wanda
reply by the author on 01-Jun-2012
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Great part of this chapter, Barbara. You were able to show the great love Troy has for Anna. And show how it really is like to wake up after being unconscious like that-needing a drink of water. These little things make the story very realistic and you pulled it off well. I'm glad Anna will recover physically, but her emotions must be frazzled. Great dialogue throughout.
Wanda
Comment Written 01-Jun-2012
reply by the author on 01-Jun-2012
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Flamingbush
I think what really makes this work is your way of saying so much with so few words. You have an action, a statement, a thought. The questions flow together almost rhythmically. There aren't any wasted moments in this at all. It's an easy read, it flows well, and there's just enough suspense to keep you wondering what happens next.
reply by the author on 01-Jun-2012
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I think what really makes this work is your way of saying so much with so few words. You have an action, a statement, a thought. The questions flow together almost rhythmically. There aren't any wasted moments in this at all. It's an easy read, it flows well, and there's just enough suspense to keep you wondering what happens next.
Comment Written 31-May-2012
reply by the author on 01-Jun-2012
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from whispering fox
i thoroughly adored this chapter because the flow of love between anna and troy was wonderful.unfortunatelly we don't experience that much love anymore as young married couples go!the flow of the story itself along with its contents were very good as well.
reply by the author on 01-Jun-2012
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i thoroughly adored this chapter because the flow of love between anna and troy was wonderful.unfortunatelly we don't experience that much love anymore as young married couples go!the flow of the story itself along with its contents were very good as well.
Comment Written 31-May-2012
reply by the author on 01-Jun-2012
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Thank you for the kind review.
