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Mime Rhyme

A silly little rhyme

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Comment from Phyllis Stewart
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A mime make a rhyme << MAKE doesn't work here. Try either MAKES or MADE.
Sure a mime can make a rhyme
But who would hear it? << Very clever!

 Comment Written 27-May-2012

Comment from Just2Write
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LOL - now that's a cute poem. Witty and full with wisdom too. This is a great submission into the contest. Best of luck.

 Comment Written 27-May-2012