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Religion (Carpetbaggers)

An Acrostic

8 total reviews 
Comment from adewpearl
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A solid acrostic for Religion
in this strong social commentary on the worst aspects of religions, which sometimes seek to spread hate and division rather than love and unity. Brooke

 Comment Written 21-May-2012

reply by the author on 21-May-2012
    As always, you read my mind my friend, and as always, I remain grateful to you for your time and the insightful review, thank you very much.
Comment from mommerry
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Your poem says to me we do a lot of wrong things and still claim to have religion. You did a good job and I found nothing to correct of that I would know how to improve.

 Comment Written 21-May-2012

reply by the author on 21-May-2012
    Hello mommerry, my friend, I am glad you like the poem, appreciate your time and the wonderful review, thank you very much.
Comment from shonda1212
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Really nice job I really enjoyed this poem I don't know what else to say about this poem you have done such a good job and there is no errors good job keep up the good work

 Comment Written 21-May-2012

reply by the author on 21-May-2012
    Hello shonda, my friend, I appreciate your time and the wonderful review, thank you very much.
reply by shonda1212 on 21-May-2012
    oh you are so very welcome
Comment from Alexander E Poet
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brilliant job really enjoyed your poetic expression. so vividly done with great format that rolls right down the page, word for word. A little bit cryptic but well done Good amazing imagery Alexander QQ

 Comment Written 21-May-2012

reply by the author on 21-May-2012
    Q*Q my friend, I am pleased you like the write, thank you very much.
Comment from SaraSoda
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This is very succinct. It is straight forward and challenging. The part about inventing ways to cheat could be expanded upon perhaps with an exact example or inference. I like the format of an acrostic and it stays on topic nicely. Nasty numb elite, was a good line I thought.

 Comment Written 21-May-2012

reply by the author on 21-May-2012
    Hello SaraSoda, my friend, I am pleased you like the poem, thank you very much for your time and the wonderful review.
Comment from Kingsland
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You may ruffle a few feathers with this acrostic. I found this piece of poetic art to have a great depth to its thoughts. It was well written and has some heat in its poetic verve... John

 Comment Written 21-May-2012

reply by the author on 21-May-2012
    Hello John, my friend, I thank you for your time and the insightful review, take care.
Comment from Chris Tee
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Your poem "Religion (Carpetbaggers)" is an absolutely gorgeous acrostic poem. Well done indeed and good luck in the contest here.

 Comment Written 21-May-2012

reply by the author on 21-May-2012
    I thank you my friend, pleased you like the write, have a great week.
Comment from HalfHoff
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Of course, you couldn't see it, but I just gave you a standing "O"! Gutsy and true and right on the money in the collection plate. Keep em coming! Lea

 Comment Written 21-May-2012

reply by the author on 21-May-2012
    Hello Lea, my friend, I appreciate your visit and the wonderful review, so glad you like the write, thank you very much.