Autumn
The dreary days of Autumn illuminate the beautiful15 total reviews
Comment from ennahanid
Your Autumn Haiku I enjoyed reading today. I think you rose to the challenge very well, and I wish you luck in the contest. Love the words and the picture Thank you - Dinah
reply by the author on 21-May-2012
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Your Autumn Haiku I enjoyed reading today. I think you rose to the challenge very well, and I wish you luck in the contest. Love the words and the picture Thank you - Dinah
Comment Written 20-May-2012
reply by the author on 21-May-2012
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Thank you for your kind review.
Comment from tinams
Excellent, now it's perfect. Good luck :) Tina
This poem paints a very beautiful picture indeed, but unfortunately your second line is only 5 syllables so you haven.t adhered to the brief of the Haiku Writing Prompt Competition. If you could amend this I would be happy to review again :) Tina
reply by the author on 20-May-2012
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Excellent, now it's perfect. Good luck :) Tina
This poem paints a very beautiful picture indeed, but unfortunately your second line is only 5 syllables so you haven.t adhered to the brief of the Haiku Writing Prompt Competition. If you could amend this I would be happy to review again :) Tina
Comment Written 20-May-2012
reply by the author on 20-May-2012
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Thank you I will look at it.
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Don't know how that happened. I have added the two syllables, thanks. I would love to hear your opinion since the review.
Comment from poems4u
Well written about autumn. In fact, I was writing a Haiku about autumn leaves as well.
I am not sure if the second line is 7 syllable-or is it only 5?
reply by the author on 20-May-2012
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Well written about autumn. In fact, I was writing a Haiku about autumn leaves as well.
I am not sure if the second line is 7 syllable-or is it only 5?
Comment Written 20-May-2012
reply by the author on 20-May-2012
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Thank you I will look at it.
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Don't know how that happened. I have added the two syllables, thanks. I would love to hear your opinion since the review.
Comment from Pearl Edwards
I don't normally do reviews on Haiku as I find it hard what to say, but the artwork you have chosen is so beautiful and you Haiku only adds to it. A lovely read, I'm glad I stopped by.
reply by the author on 20-May-2012
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I don't normally do reviews on Haiku as I find it hard what to say, but the artwork you have chosen is so beautiful and you Haiku only adds to it. A lovely read, I'm glad I stopped by.
Comment Written 20-May-2012
reply by the author on 20-May-2012
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Thank you so much for enjoying my photo and poem.
Comment from Phyllis Stewart
Fiery autumn leaves
Brighten up dull days
Lighting up the soul.
Each line contains a word of "light" and that holds this together beautifully: Fiery, brighten, and Lighting. What a good contrast for "dull days"... even tho autumn leads into drab winter, the season goes out with brilliance, like a promise that the trees will return! Love fall. Love spring. Not a fan of summer and winter tho. :)
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reply by the author on 20-May-2012
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Fiery autumn leaves
Brighten up dull days
Lighting up the soul.
Each line contains a word of "light" and that holds this together beautifully: Fiery, brighten, and Lighting. What a good contrast for "dull days"... even tho autumn leads into drab winter, the season goes out with brilliance, like a promise that the trees will return! Love fall. Love spring. Not a fan of summer and winter tho. :)
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The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 20-May-2012
reply by the author on 20-May-2012
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Thank you for enjoying the poem and photo.
