I'm So Bored
Sick at home with nothing to do200 total reviews
Comment from Capricorn30
This is very,very good--I love it!! I detected a splash of comedy. Bordeom and sickness blended together in this cute writing,with the bit of rhyming make for a fine,delightful read. Get well soon
reply by the author on 21-May-2012
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This is very,very good--I love it!! I detected a splash of comedy. Bordeom and sickness blended together in this cute writing,with the bit of rhyming make for a fine,delightful read. Get well soon
Comment Written 21-May-2012
reply by the author on 21-May-2012
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Thank You so very much. I am so glad you like it. And thank you for your kind words. Linda
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You're very welcome:)
Comment from percival86jack
Delightful my good friend!
"I'll take a nap later
What more is there to do
I'll post my poem on FanStory
And pass my misery to you"
And we all collectively thank you for being so considerate! LOL
Big huggeroonies, Jack xxxxxx
reply by the author on 21-May-2012
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Delightful my good friend!
"I'll take a nap later
What more is there to do
I'll post my poem on FanStory
And pass my misery to you"
And we all collectively thank you for being so considerate! LOL
Big huggeroonies, Jack xxxxxx
Comment Written 21-May-2012
reply by the author on 21-May-2012
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Hi Jack, LOL So happy you like it. I do like to share. After all the grandkids gave it to me. Did you ever go on your email and get something that says pass this to 8 other people? Well!!! LOL Thank you for the visit and huggies bach at ya Linda xxoo
Comment from joann r romei
i need to get sick alittle, maybe i'll get more writng done lol, this was very cute and done with an easy simple flow of words, feel better
reply by the author on 21-May-2012
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i need to get sick alittle, maybe i'll get more writng done lol, this was very cute and done with an easy simple flow of words, feel better
Comment Written 21-May-2012
reply by the author on 21-May-2012
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Hi Joann, LOL LOL I just had to do something. But please don't get sick. LOL Thank you for dropping by and for making me laugh. Linda hugs
Comment from wilburmillicent
Well done Linda. I think your poem will strike a chord with a lot of people. You know you are really sick, when staying in bed isn't a guilty pleasure.
Your poem is slightly tongue in cheek and this comes across well. You use the words sparingly and don't try to shoehorn anything extra to make the piece more 'poetic'. I don't think the poem needs the artwork, because the pink colour adds enough. Well done and thanks for sharing. Get better soon.
reply by the author on 21-May-2012
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Well done Linda. I think your poem will strike a chord with a lot of people. You know you are really sick, when staying in bed isn't a guilty pleasure.
Your poem is slightly tongue in cheek and this comes across well. You use the words sparingly and don't try to shoehorn anything extra to make the piece more 'poetic'. I don't think the poem needs the artwork, because the pink colour adds enough. Well done and thanks for sharing. Get better soon.
Comment Written 21-May-2012
reply by the author on 21-May-2012
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You are so welcome. And thank you for a great review and your kind words. Linda
Comment from Kingsland
Being sick with the flu is not like watching a parade down the avenue. It's more like having a bad day at work when things get worse. But at least you can go home and feel better. I enjoyed reading this well written verse. Get Well Soon... John
reply by the author on 21-May-2012
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Being sick with the flu is not like watching a parade down the avenue. It's more like having a bad day at work when things get worse. But at least you can go home and feel better. I enjoyed reading this well written verse. Get Well Soon... John
Comment Written 21-May-2012
reply by the author on 21-May-2012
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Hi ya John, thank You so very much for your sweet thoughts and your kind words. linda hugs
Comment from Lise Deangelo
I hope you are feeling better soon. Luckily you have FanStory to share with. I enjoyed reading this poem very much. The artwork and presentation is wonderful too. Thanks so much for sharing :) Lise
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I hope you are feeling better soon. Luckily you have FanStory to share with. I enjoyed reading this poem very much. The artwork and presentation is wonderful too. Thanks so much for sharing :) Lise
Comment Written 21-May-2012
reply by the author on 21-May-2012
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Hi Lise, Thank You so very much. I was very happy to be able to share my misery with all my fs friends. LOL LOl I am so glad you like this. Thank you so much for the wonderful six. Made me feel better. Linda hugs
Comment from Auroraboreal800
I can understand you l.raven, because I hate to be sick too. I liked your poem. Your descriptions were wonderful, and it flows well. I hope you're feeling much better today.
GREAT JOB!!
:)
reply by the author on 21-May-2012
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I can understand you l.raven, because I hate to be sick too. I liked your poem. Your descriptions were wonderful, and it flows well. I hope you're feeling much better today.
GREAT JOB!!
:)
Comment Written 21-May-2012
reply by the author on 21-May-2012
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Thank you so much Aurora. I am so glad you like it. Linda
Comment from fairydancer
Sorry to hear you're ill, Linda. Hope you start to feel better soon. Glad to see your keeping your spirits up with a little writing, though. Your energy might have deserted you, but at least your muse hasn't! ;)
Good quatrain form, rhymes and flow. Great read, thanks - Cally
reply by the author on 21-May-2012
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Sorry to hear you're ill, Linda. Hope you start to feel better soon. Glad to see your keeping your spirits up with a little writing, though. Your energy might have deserted you, but at least your muse hasn't! ;)
Good quatrain form, rhymes and flow. Great read, thanks - Cally
Comment Written 21-May-2012
reply by the author on 21-May-2012
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Hi Cally, Thank You so much. And thank you for your kind words and a wonderful review. Linda hugs
Comment from LilHippie
So sorry, bronchitis sucks. It hurts so bad. I love the way you wrote this as if you are just hanging out with me and telling me why your day is sucky. It's horrible to be so bored that when it's close to lunchtime, you are super excited not even to eat, but to have something to do. Very amusing, but sad also. Hey, there is a word game that used to be in the newspaper. Take a word about eight or ten letters long, Time yourself too. See how many words there are inside that long word, jot them down underneath. NO USING THE COMPUTER! The words must be at least four letters each, and not because an "s" was added. Tip: Make sure you choose a word that has an "e" in it, or it's a pain. Have fun!!!
reply by the author on 21-May-2012
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So sorry, bronchitis sucks. It hurts so bad. I love the way you wrote this as if you are just hanging out with me and telling me why your day is sucky. It's horrible to be so bored that when it's close to lunchtime, you are super excited not even to eat, but to have something to do. Very amusing, but sad also. Hey, there is a word game that used to be in the newspaper. Take a word about eight or ten letters long, Time yourself too. See how many words there are inside that long word, jot them down underneath. NO USING THE COMPUTER! The words must be at least four letters each, and not because an "s" was added. Tip: Make sure you choose a word that has an "e" in it, or it's a pain. Have fun!!!
Comment Written 21-May-2012
reply by the author on 21-May-2012
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LOL Thank you so much for all your caring. I have a crossword book.LOL This is a wonderful review. Thank so much. Linda hugs
Comment from G.B. Smith
Hey there Linda
I am sorry to hear you have bronchitis; I am just getting over pneumonia, I hope you get better soon and I really appreciated your little moan.
Bear
reply by the author on 21-May-2012
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Hey there Linda
I am sorry to hear you have bronchitis; I am just getting over pneumonia, I hope you get better soon and I really appreciated your little moan.
Bear
Comment Written 21-May-2012
reply by the author on 21-May-2012
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Hi ya Bear, LOL I hope you are feeling better. Yours is worse than mine. Thank you so much for your kind words. Take care!! Linda xxoo hugs
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Hey Linda, I am 99% today. Get well kid
Bear
