I'm So Bored
Sick at home with nothing to do200 total reviews
Comment from Robert Lee Brown
I like that when you have nothing to do, you write and post on FanStory. Having just recovered from an episode of congestive heart failure, I know how you feel or felt and you expressed it beautifully in your poem. Thank you for writing and sharing.
reply by the author on 22-May-2012
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I like that when you have nothing to do, you write and post on FanStory. Having just recovered from an episode of congestive heart failure, I know how you feel or felt and you expressed it beautifully in your poem. Thank you for writing and sharing.
Comment Written 22-May-2012
reply by the author on 22-May-2012
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Hi Robert, I am so sorry. I hope you are doing better. It does feel awful. You take care and go easy. Thank you so much for your visit and your wonderful review. Linda God Bless
Comment from szavoda
This is the most fun poem I've read in a while. I don't really like poetry, but I still make myself read it now and again. Your honesty in it is what strikes me the most. I love it.
I completely understand your predicament, and think that if my three year old special needs daughter could talk, this is what she would say exactly about all the medicine and tv she has to endure.
Nice Job!!!
reply by the author on 22-May-2012
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This is the most fun poem I've read in a while. I don't really like poetry, but I still make myself read it now and again. Your honesty in it is what strikes me the most. I love it.
I completely understand your predicament, and think that if my three year old special needs daughter could talk, this is what she would say exactly about all the medicine and tv she has to endure.
Nice Job!!!
Comment Written 22-May-2012
reply by the author on 22-May-2012
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I am so glad you like my poem. Thank you so much for a great review. And I so understand how your daughter would feel. Linda
Comment from fictionwriter
I'm fifty something and I still play too, so I can't fault you for that. And I watch Harry Potter, so what's wrong with some people. Hope you get better soon. Writing and watching tv, what a life, although being sick isn't any fun. Great job.
reply by the author on 22-May-2012
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I'm fifty something and I still play too, so I can't fault you for that. And I watch Harry Potter, so what's wrong with some people. Hope you get better soon. Writing and watching tv, what a life, although being sick isn't any fun. Great job.
Comment Written 22-May-2012
reply by the author on 22-May-2012
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The being sick is the bad part. But it does feel better today. Thank you so much foe a great review. Linda hugs
Comment from moosegal
I'm so sorry you are (were?) sick and not able to do much. That feeling of "ug, I don't like this" came through very well. I was not at all confused by the wanting to play and having a daughter-in-law. Made sense to me. However, you do pose two questions that don't have question marks. And I'm really curious about the phrasing on "my daughter-in-law she.." (Why not drop the "she"?) Other than that, it was a good sad/sweet poem. Hope you are as good as new by now!
reply by the author on 22-May-2012
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I'm so sorry you are (were?) sick and not able to do much. That feeling of "ug, I don't like this" came through very well. I was not at all confused by the wanting to play and having a daughter-in-law. Made sense to me. However, you do pose two questions that don't have question marks. And I'm really curious about the phrasing on "my daughter-in-law she.." (Why not drop the "she"?) Other than that, it was a good sad/sweet poem. Hope you are as good as new by now!
Comment Written 22-May-2012
reply by the author on 22-May-2012
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I will check it out. You may be right. Thank you so much. I am so glad you weren't confused. And thank you for your kind words. Linda hugs
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Thank you so much for your thoughts. I did change it.
Comment from Lastamen
Interesting author notes, I could see clearly the marvelous message of this stifling afternoon of boredom and loneliness. There is nothing worse than being sick and confined and then pouring your heart out in verse only to have it also twisted and contorted! Hope you feel better soon and can be back out there and play.
Till the last amen
reply by the author on 22-May-2012
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Interesting author notes, I could see clearly the marvelous message of this stifling afternoon of boredom and loneliness. There is nothing worse than being sick and confined and then pouring your heart out in verse only to have it also twisted and contorted! Hope you feel better soon and can be back out there and play.
Till the last amen
Comment Written 22-May-2012
reply by the author on 22-May-2012
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Amen!!! Thank You so very much for your kind words. And thank for dropping by. Linda hugs
Comment from kiwisteveh
Yes, the first stanza confused a little, but it is soon cleared up, so no problem there. Great sympathies for you during this down time - hope the nasty ol' bronchitis has started to clear now.
Your poem shares the frustration and boredom of enforced idleness.
reply by the author on 22-May-2012
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Yes, the first stanza confused a little, but it is soon cleared up, so no problem there. Great sympathies for you during this down time - hope the nasty ol' bronchitis has started to clear now.
Your poem shares the frustration and boredom of enforced idleness.
Comment Written 22-May-2012
reply by the author on 22-May-2012
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It does feel better today. Thank You !! And thank you for a great review. Linda
Comment from babyross
This was a good way to get over the blues on a sick boaring day. Nothing like voicing a poem to make one feel better! Glad you had the strength to make it through! Well done.
reply by the author on 22-May-2012
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This was a good way to get over the blues on a sick boaring day. Nothing like voicing a poem to make one feel better! Glad you had the strength to make it through! Well done.
Comment Written 22-May-2012
reply by the author on 22-May-2012
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Hi Baby, I had fun writing it. thank You so much for dropping by and for a great review. Linda
Comment from Jim Lorson Sr
Lora, I am 63 and never understood why people feel at a certain age for them, that the word "play" must go away. Play has gotten me through some real tough times and continues.
I really enjoyed reading and reviewing this poem. With every verse, I could feel your wanton need to get out and play.
Exceptional piece of writing,,,,,,Jim
reply by the author on 22-May-2012
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Lora, I am 63 and never understood why people feel at a certain age for them, that the word "play" must go away. Play has gotten me through some real tough times and continues.
I really enjoyed reading and reviewing this poem. With every verse, I could feel your wanton need to get out and play.
Exceptional piece of writing,,,,,,Jim
Comment Written 22-May-2012
reply by the author on 22-May-2012
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Hi Jim, I sooooooooo know what you are saying. I am right there with you. Thank You so much for a wonderful review and for the wonderful stars. Linda hugs to ya
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sorry for calling you lora. i had just spoken with her. please accept my apology,,,,,,jim
Comment from Oatmeal
I.raven,
Your thoughts are well described. Perfectly arranged & formatted. Good flowing. Understandable. The flow was smooth.
Very well reflected thoughts and opinions, expressiveness is working well.
There was no SPAG.
I look forward to seeing you again.
Love you,
Oatmeal
reply by the author on 22-May-2012
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I.raven,
Your thoughts are well described. Perfectly arranged & formatted. Good flowing. Understandable. The flow was smooth.
Very well reflected thoughts and opinions, expressiveness is working well.
There was no SPAG.
I look forward to seeing you again.
Love you,
Oatmeal
Comment Written 22-May-2012
reply by the author on 22-May-2012
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Hi Oatmeal, Thank you so very much for a great review. So glad you like it. Will drop in your way soon. Linda hugs
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raven,
It is good seeing you again.
Love you,
Camille
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You too. I will be by soon. to visit you. Luff Linda xxoo
Comment from Wendystreet
Very fun, honest, not pretentious poem. I enjoyed it. Extremely appropriate for your audience. : ) If you are still sick, I hope you get better soon.
reply by the author on 22-May-2012
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Very fun, honest, not pretentious poem. I enjoyed it. Extremely appropriate for your audience. : ) If you are still sick, I hope you get better soon.
Comment Written 22-May-2012
reply by the author on 22-May-2012
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Hi Wendy, Thank You so much for your kind words. Linda xxoo hugs
