I'm So Bored
Sick at home with nothing to do200 total reviews
Comment from mermaids
Writing is good medicine when we do not feel good. Sorry you are feeling miserable but your poem came out great. Your lines capture how you feel and what you are going through.
reply by the author on 20-May-2012
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Writing is good medicine when we do not feel good. Sorry you are feeling miserable but your poem came out great. Your lines capture how you feel and what you are going through.
Comment Written 20-May-2012
reply by the author on 20-May-2012
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Hi Elaine, Thank You so very much. I'm really not a good one foe being sick. Thank you for a great review. Linda hugs
Comment from justchillin
Your poem was a pleasure to read, nice and easy, good rhyming and flow. You describe this so well, and so easily, somewhere we have all been for sure. Hope you get well soon. Fanstory is my saving grace too, well done x
reply by the author on 20-May-2012
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Your poem was a pleasure to read, nice and easy, good rhyming and flow. You describe this so well, and so easily, somewhere we have all been for sure. Hope you get well soon. Fanstory is my saving grace too, well done x
Comment Written 20-May-2012
reply by the author on 20-May-2012
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Thank You so much. The people on here have been great. It is wonderful to have friends like these. I am so glad you like it. And thank you for your kind words. Linda hugs
Comment from dejohnsrld (Debbie)
I could agree with everything here. I have literally been sick for 6 months and although I don't like to complain, It is getting really, really old. FS helps so much though. Thanks to all of those who put up with me. Cleverly written poem!!! Debbie
reply by the author on 20-May-2012
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I could agree with everything here. I have literally been sick for 6 months and although I don't like to complain, It is getting really, really old. FS helps so much though. Thanks to all of those who put up with me. Cleverly written poem!!! Debbie
Comment Written 20-May-2012
reply by the author on 20-May-2012
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Hi Debbie, I am so sorry you are so sick. I know how awful that can be. I had the flu before this, and then this kicked in. it's been about five weeks. But nothing like what you are dealing with. I hope you are ok. Take care of yourself. And if I van help let me know. God Bless Deb Thank You for droping by. Linda hugs xxoo
Comment from WilliamDeen
Your poem, I'm So Bored, is pitiful. I do hope you get to feeling better soon. Your poem has a very nice rhyming scheme and the cadence is smooth. One correction: I'm trying not to do to much . the second to should be too.
reply by the author on 20-May-2012
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Your poem, I'm So Bored, is pitiful. I do hope you get to feeling better soon. Your poem has a very nice rhyming scheme and the cadence is smooth. One correction: I'm trying not to do to much . the second to should be too.
Comment Written 20-May-2012
reply by the author on 20-May-2012
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Thank you for your help. I did change it. Someone told me this morning but I forgot and took a nap. LOL Thank You so much for your kind words. They really do help. Linda hugs
Comment from snowflakes77
Awwww.....Linda this is such a great poem. I loved it a lot! I hope you get better soon! This is very catchy...pardon the pun lol. :) Very well written with nice alliteration, meter, and rhyme. Thank you for sharing....just the poem :) Randa
reply by the author on 20-May-2012
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Awwww.....Linda this is such a great poem. I loved it a lot! I hope you get better soon! This is very catchy...pardon the pun lol. :) Very well written with nice alliteration, meter, and rhyme. Thank you for sharing....just the poem :) Randa
Comment Written 20-May-2012
reply by the author on 20-May-2012
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Hi Randa, thank you so much for dropping by. And thank you for your kind words. hope to feel better soon. Linda hugs
Comment from Adam J Santos
Linda, I dislike everything about being sick as well. I enjoyed how creative you were at conveying and presenting this message. For right now you should rest and hydrate my friend. I hope you feel like yourself again soon. Take care Adam:)
reply by the author on 20-May-2012
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Linda, I dislike everything about being sick as well. I enjoyed how creative you were at conveying and presenting this message. For right now you should rest and hydrate my friend. I hope you feel like yourself again soon. Take care Adam:)
Comment Written 20-May-2012
reply by the author on 20-May-2012
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Hi Adam, Where have you been? Was missing you. Hope you are ok. I am doing what the doctor told me for change. LOL Thank You for your thoughtful and kind words. Linda hugs
Comment from linsbm
You did the right thing and the result is therapeutic. Your poem appears to be simple yet it gives plenty of reasons for your voice, warm and sincere. I enjoyed the read. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 21-May-2012
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You did the right thing and the result is therapeutic. Your poem appears to be simple yet it gives plenty of reasons for your voice, warm and sincere. I enjoyed the read. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 20-May-2012
reply by the author on 21-May-2012
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Thank you so much. I am so glad you like it.. Linda
Comment from Tonulak
Thank you for sharing, as if my own misery was not sufficient:)
I liked the simple everyday tone of this; like William Carlos Williams. Great job--Ted
reply by the author on 20-May-2012
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Thank you for sharing, as if my own misery was not sufficient:)
I liked the simple everyday tone of this; like William Carlos Williams. Great job--Ted
Comment Written 20-May-2012
reply by the author on 20-May-2012
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Hi ya Ted, WOW!! Thank You so much. And thanks for dropping by. Linda hugs
Comment from Frank Atwood
As long as you can write you're not so sick that you should ever be depressed or bored. Writing wakes my mind up. It doesn't put it to sleep.
Your poem is very good. I can see you weren't sleeping during putting it together you did quite a good job. I give you six stars because sometimes, when we seem to be at our worst that is when we do our best. God bless and keep up the good writing.
reply by the author on 20-May-2012
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As long as you can write you're not so sick that you should ever be depressed or bored. Writing wakes my mind up. It doesn't put it to sleep.
Your poem is very good. I can see you weren't sleeping during putting it together you did quite a good job. I give you six stars because sometimes, when we seem to be at our worst that is when we do our best. God bless and keep up the good writing.
Comment Written 20-May-2012
reply by the author on 20-May-2012
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Hi Frank, I had the flu before this. It has been five weeks. I know i had to do eomething. And what can you do laying on the couch. I guess just write. And use a pencil, because ink flows down the wrong way when your trying to stay laid down. LOL thank you Frank for the wonderful six. Did make me feel better. And thank you for your kind words. Linda
Comment from Sefiros
This is certainly one of the most inventive poems I've heard in a long time. The verses are simple and can serve as a foundation for more complex poems down the line. Try challenging yourself. Good luck with future projects.
reply by the author on 21-May-2012
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This is certainly one of the most inventive poems I've heard in a long time. The verses are simple and can serve as a foundation for more complex poems down the line. Try challenging yourself. Good luck with future projects.
Comment Written 20-May-2012
reply by the author on 21-May-2012
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Oh I have written alot of different kind of poems. thank you so glad you like it. Linda
