Munching Maggot
A humorous haiku2 total reviews
Comment from Bobbi22
This is a funny, yet disgusting, 5-7-5 poem. Very creative thought in this very well written poem. Just keep the maggots away from me. Good luck in the contest.
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This is a funny, yet disgusting, 5-7-5 poem. Very creative thought in this very well written poem. Just keep the maggots away from me. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 18-May-2012
Comment from Solacium Mariae
That is a humorous haiku. I agree. A couple suggestions: don't capitalize when you don't need to, as in "my" and "him" and stick a comma in after "ear".
I like your title - that contributes greatly to the humor.
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That is a humorous haiku. I agree. A couple suggestions: don't capitalize when you don't need to, as in "my" and "him" and stick a comma in after "ear".
I like your title - that contributes greatly to the humor.
Comment Written 18-May-2012
