Gliding Wings
Designer or Shape Poem72 total reviews
Comment from sweetwoodjax
this is very well written, helvi, the look is just beautiful and the hard word you put into this made me give you a six, my second one today which is unheard of for me. great imagery and imagination. didn't you do one with a ballerina in the snow?
reply by the author on 20-May-2012
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this is very well written, helvi, the look is just beautiful and the hard word you put into this made me give you a six, my second one today which is unheard of for me. great imagery and imagination. didn't you do one with a ballerina in the snow?
Comment Written 20-May-2012
reply by the author on 20-May-2012
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Hi, You have a good memory My Friend ! I DID so a ballerina in the snow! It's very nice knowing someone remembered that. Thank you for the amazing six star rating, even more so because you rarely give two in one day. I am extremely honored! Thank YOU SO much! :o) Helvi
Comment from Solacium Mariae
That's a very good poem! Effective imagery, lovely design (how on earth did you enter it in the editor!?). Your meter and rhyme scheme work well also. Excellent job!
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reply by the author on 20-May-2012
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That's a very good poem! Effective imagery, lovely design (how on earth did you enter it in the editor!?). Your meter and rhyme scheme work well also. Excellent job!
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Comment Written 20-May-2012
reply by the author on 20-May-2012
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Guess I did something you didn't quite like to get four stars, but I'm glad you enjoyed the poem. I always write my poems in Wordsoft first and then copy then in "Evil Eddie" The editor here. THere's always something to fix, but I'm determined! Thanks for stopping by to review! :o) Helvi
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No, there wasn't something I didn't like. It was a very good poem! Four stars is good. To be honest, it was between a 4 and 5 for me. It was well done.
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Thanks for letting me know I really appreciate it! :o) Helvi
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So I've decided to go through and revisit all of my fours. My review was one that was quite praiseworthy without any other comments that could potentially make it better. So, having gone back again, I see what it was. It's difficult to read because it's all different lines, going left and right. There are also a lot of stars that you used to provide the image design, but with so many, it's distracting and difficult to read. Thanks for giving me another shot!
