Gliding Wings
Designer or Shape Poem72 total reviews
Comment from ShekinahGlory
Just love the beautiful shape art!
Love "birds gliding on a stream of air"!
Nice use of alliteration: "beauty, beyond...beautiful, below"!
Great rhyme and flow!
Beautiful imagery: "flared wings in a cobalt blue sky"!
Love the conclusion: "do so enchant the eye"!
Super poem and art!
reply by the author on 21-May-2012
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Just love the beautiful shape art!
Love "birds gliding on a stream of air"!
Nice use of alliteration: "beauty, beyond...beautiful, below"!
Great rhyme and flow!
Beautiful imagery: "flared wings in a cobalt blue sky"!
Love the conclusion: "do so enchant the eye"!
Super poem and art!
Comment Written 21-May-2012
reply by the author on 21-May-2012
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Hi ShekinahGlory, Compliments like this mean everything. Thank you for such an extrordinary review. I'm SO glad you ejoyed this and an thrilled by the six star rating. Bless You! :o) Helvi
Comment from Starlit Ink
How beautiful. That took a lot of work and creativity. I especially liked: flared wings set in a cobalt sky. The colors that you chose were great for the presentation.
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How beautiful. That took a lot of work and creativity. I especially liked: flared wings set in a cobalt sky. The colors that you chose were great for the presentation.
Comment Written 21-May-2012
Comment from Janice Canerdy
I have heard about Evil Eddie but never encountered him. Don't know if this indicates lack of creativity on my part . . . . This is delightful and skillfully-done--the design and the poem.
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I have heard about Evil Eddie but never encountered him. Don't know if this indicates lack of creativity on my part . . . . This is delightful and skillfully-done--the design and the poem.
Comment Written 21-May-2012
Comment from Gungalo
Beautiful Helvi and wow! I can see why you call them designer poems and they are wonderful. SO beautiful they are. The poem itself is gorgeous.
reply by the author on 21-May-2012
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Beautiful Helvi and wow! I can see why you call them designer poems and they are wonderful. SO beautiful they are. The poem itself is gorgeous.
Comment Written 21-May-2012
reply by the author on 21-May-2012
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Hi Gungalo, A review from like this from YOU is truly an honor to recieve! Thank You SO much for the compliments on the poem itself and the way I did it. I can't stop smiling from YOUR lovely review and the six star rating! Bless YOU! :o) Helvi
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From one artist to another ... it was fantastic!!
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I BOW before YOU and am thrilled YOU enjoyed my poem SO much! Can't STOP smiling! :o) Helvi
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LOL okay but stop bowing before me would ya! I'm just the same as you are. LOL.
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LOL I don't know about that, but but I promise to stop with the bowing for now! LOL Have a GREAT DAY!
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Sigh ...
Comment from uniqueauthor
I have only seen and read this form of poetry, but I have never reviewed it, but this time the poem actually makes sense. It's beautiful.
reply by the author on 21-May-2012
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I have only seen and read this form of poetry, but I have never reviewed it, but this time the poem actually makes sense. It's beautiful.
Comment Written 21-May-2012
reply by the author on 21-May-2012
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Hi uniqueauthor, Your review has to be the ultimate compliment. Thank You SO much for your wonderful review! :o) Helvi
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It is a compliment. Your shape poem actually made sense. You're welcome. Peace for today
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When I do one of these I definitely want the right image to match what I've written. Thanks again for the wonderful review!....and PEACE to YOU My Friend! :o) Helv
Comment from guinea
Very beautiful poem. I like the birds desidn you have made. It is good and different. I haven't seen one before. Good work my friend.
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Very beautiful poem. I like the birds desidn you have made. It is good and different. I haven't seen one before. Good work my friend.
Comment Written 21-May-2012
Comment from tinams
I have given this a six not just for the wonderfully creative presentation but because I thought the sentiment so beautifully expressed :) Tina
reply by the author on 21-May-2012
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I have given this a six not just for the wonderfully creative presentation but because I thought the sentiment so beautifully expressed :) Tina
Comment Written 21-May-2012
reply by the author on 21-May-2012
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Hi tinams, Both mean a LOT to me and I want to do a wonderful job with both! I'm thrilled you enjoyed both and am in awe of your wonderful six star rating! Thank you SO much! :o) Helvi
Comment from Gert sherwood
Smiles to you Helvi
so good to see you doing your graphic designed poems
I read you words and yes, I real like them especially--
this one about the beauty of birds.
Gert
reply by the author on 21-May-2012
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Smiles to you Helvi
so good to see you doing your graphic designed poems
I read you words and yes, I real like them especially--
this one about the beauty of birds.
Gert
Comment Written 21-May-2012
reply by the author on 21-May-2012
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Hi Gert! It's a lot of fun creating beauty on two fronts. THe poem and the adding an artistic touch to it! I'm SO glad you enjoyed both my friend. THanks for the wonderful review! :o) Helvi
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You are welcome Helvi
Gert
Comment from janalma
This is a very pretty poem, pleasing to the eye and ear. It flows so nicely and the image is pleasing to the minds eye also. This took time, I know, but it is lovely. Can imagine it in a book of poetry.
reply by the author on 22-May-2012
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This is a very pretty poem, pleasing to the eye and ear. It flows so nicely and the image is pleasing to the minds eye also. This took time, I know, but it is lovely. Can imagine it in a book of poetry.
Comment Written 21-May-2012
reply by the author on 22-May-2012
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Hi janalma, Thank you So much for the for the wonderful six star review. I'm SO glad you enjoyed this! :o) Helvi
Comment from Terry wrote
This is truly a 'designer poem' you've written! Such happiness shared, and cleverness witnessed. I don't think I could do it on a word processor, let alone in that little box we must enter our work in here. Wow! I would give you ten stars if I had them to give ... but ... I see you already have plenty!
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This is truly a 'designer poem' you've written! Such happiness shared, and cleverness witnessed. I don't think I could do it on a word processor, let alone in that little box we must enter our work in here. Wow! I would give you ten stars if I had them to give ... but ... I see you already have plenty!
Comment Written 21-May-2012
