The Mole Catcher
This is a rhyme in Nonet form.13 total reviews
Comment from Blurch
This looks like you wrote it to match the picuture. I guess if you have moles you want to get rid of them but exterminator is a depressing job.
reply by the author on 20-May-2012
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This looks like you wrote it to match the picuture. I guess if you have moles you want to get rid of them but exterminator is a depressing job.
Comment Written 19-May-2012
reply by the author on 20-May-2012
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No, honestly, it was the other way round! Thank you for your brilliant review. I came a joint first in the competition so this morning, I am de-light-ed!!!!
Comment from whizpurr ^-^
Hi Writer,
So cute (both the poem and the mole). I enjoyed the read.
You followed the format well and this nonet had a nice flow to it. Best wishes for the contest, Warm regards, W ^-^
reply by the author on 20-May-2012
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Hi Writer,
So cute (both the poem and the mole). I enjoyed the read.
You followed the format well and this nonet had a nice flow to it. Best wishes for the contest, Warm regards, W ^-^
Comment Written 19-May-2012
reply by the author on 20-May-2012
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Thank you for your brilliant review. I came a joint first in the competition so this morning, I am de-light-ed!!!!
Comment from justchillin
Well someone has to do this job I guess. I know they are bad news, but such cuties at the same time. You have delivered a very clever poem here, with great choice of word description.
Enjoyed it, serious, but fun at the same time. Good luck x
reply by the author on 19-May-2012
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Well someone has to do this job I guess. I know they are bad news, but such cuties at the same time. You have delivered a very clever poem here, with great choice of word description.
Enjoyed it, serious, but fun at the same time. Good luck x
Comment Written 19-May-2012
reply by the author on 19-May-2012
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Thank you for this excellent review. Do you vote in these competitions? I would be extremely grateful to receive yours but whether I get it or not, it is still a great review, thanks again.
Comment from Carrie Carson
Great job with this, nonets are harder than they look...and this is entirely in rhyme. Remarkable.
No spag issues, good form.
I hope this does (did?) well in the contest. Thanks, I liked this. Carrie
reply by the author on 19-May-2012
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Great job with this, nonets are harder than they look...and this is entirely in rhyme. Remarkable.
No spag issues, good form.
I hope this does (did?) well in the contest. Thanks, I liked this. Carrie
Comment Written 19-May-2012
reply by the author on 19-May-2012
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The winner is decided by member votes and there is still time to cast yours and your "hope" for my success might be achieved! Whether you vote or not, Thank you for the excellent 5 stars.
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OK. I'll look in the voting booth, good to know.
Comment from ShekinahGlory
Superb use of the long o & l-controlled rime! Executed on every line!
Great job description & its challenges! Nice plot! "All in a day's work!'
Love the use of cajole! Also, personifies the mole!
Who knew one mole could require so much work?!
Great job with the Nonet!
reply by the author on 19-May-2012
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Superb use of the long o & l-controlled rime! Executed on every line!
Great job description & its challenges! Nice plot! "All in a day's work!'
Love the use of cajole! Also, personifies the mole!
Who knew one mole could require so much work?!
Great job with the Nonet!
Comment Written 19-May-2012
reply by the author on 19-May-2012
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Thank you for your five amazing stars! Voting is still open for this contest so I would be grateful if you would consider adding your comment to the voting booth. Artwork was my own compilation so again, thanks for the comment.
Comment from angel123
Your poem is interesting and well written. I enjoyed reading it and your artwork choice enhances your message. Your poem also flows and rhymes well.
Angel123
reply by the author on 19-May-2012
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Your poem is interesting and well written. I enjoyed reading it and your artwork choice enhances your message. Your poem also flows and rhymes well.
Angel123
Comment Written 19-May-2012
reply by the author on 19-May-2012
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Thank you for your five amazing stars! Voting is still open for this contest so I would be grateful if you would consider adding your comment to the voting booth. Artwork was my own compilation so again, thanks for the comment.
Comment from amused muse
Clever prompt (mole hole). I enjoyed the rhyming--adds another level. Anyone ever bothered with moles can relate. Also enjoyed the humor. Fun!
reply by the author on 19-May-2012
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Clever prompt (mole hole). I enjoyed the rhyming--adds another level. Anyone ever bothered with moles can relate. Also enjoyed the humor. Fun!
Comment Written 18-May-2012
reply by the author on 19-May-2012
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Thank you for the amazing five stars! Voting for the competition closes soon. Have you voted? I would be overjoyed if these five stars were reflected with your vote! Thank you again.
Comment from heyjude
mystery author, humorous nonet for the contest.
Great job with the monorrhyming on this one.
Spot on with the syllable count. Good luck in the
contest.
reply by the author on 19-May-2012
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mystery author, humorous nonet for the contest.
Great job with the monorrhyming on this one.
Spot on with the syllable count. Good luck in the
contest.
Comment Written 18-May-2012
reply by the author on 19-May-2012
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Thank you for the amazing five stars! Voting for the competition closes soon. Have you voted? I would be overjoyed if these five stars were reflected with your vote! Thank you again.
Comment from tinams
This is a very fine and humorous nonet, and a very worthy entry to the Nonet Poem Competition. Love the picture too. Good luck :) Tina
reply by the author on 19-May-2012
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This is a very fine and humorous nonet, and a very worthy entry to the Nonet Poem Competition. Love the picture too. Good luck :) Tina
Comment Written 18-May-2012
reply by the author on 19-May-2012
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Thank you for the amazing five stars! Voting for the competition closes soon. Have you voted? I would be overjoyed if these five stars were reflected with your vote! Thank you again.
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I certainly have :)
Comment from Barlock
I'll tell you what - you did very good. You managed to maintain a nonet structure, but I still felt it could be improved a bit. For example, while the number of syllables is correct (9-8-7-6-5-4-3-2-1) the actual poem lines do not perfectly line up to create a triangle. I know it's easily said than done, but that is why I hope the winner of this contest will be the one who will manage to line up them both - syllables and a shape of the poem.
Good luck, though.
JB
reply by the author on 19-May-2012
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I'll tell you what - you did very good. You managed to maintain a nonet structure, but I still felt it could be improved a bit. For example, while the number of syllables is correct (9-8-7-6-5-4-3-2-1) the actual poem lines do not perfectly line up to create a triangle. I know it's easily said than done, but that is why I hope the winner of this contest will be the one who will manage to line up them both - syllables and a shape of the poem.
Good luck, though.
JB
Comment Written 18-May-2012
reply by the author on 19-May-2012
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Thank you for the amazing five stars! I note what you say about the triangular form. I'm new to this and that never occurred to me before. I feel that, as this is a competition entry, I shouldn't edit it at this stage, but I will certainly bear it in mind for the future. Voting for the competition closes soon. I would be overjoyed if these five stars were reflected with your vote! Thank you again.
