Life Is Just A Fantasy
Speculations of a dreamer37 total reviews
Comment from misscookie
This is a very deep and lovely poem.
I love how your poem flows I'm sure the readers can relate. I know thaI can. you captured my attention all the way. Good luck.
reply by the author on 17-Jun-2012
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This is a very deep and lovely poem.
I love how your poem flows I'm sure the readers can relate. I know thaI can. you captured my attention all the way. Good luck.
Comment Written 12-May-2012
reply by the author on 17-Jun-2012
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Thank you for this wonderful review...I haven't forgotten you! :) xoxo. Susan
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Your very welcome, I known my friend, I know.
Comment from barbara.wilkey
Your contest entry is very creative and well written. This is the first entry for this contest I have read. I am sure you will have a strong entry.
reply by the author on 17-Jun-2012
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Your contest entry is very creative and well written. This is the first entry for this contest I have read. I am sure you will have a strong entry.
Comment Written 12-May-2012
reply by the author on 17-Jun-2012
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Thank you for this wonderful review...I haven't forgotten you! :) xoxo. Susan
Comment from Mrs Happy Poet
Yes this is very well written and reads very well ,very descriptive about the soul I love your closing line well done good luck regards Fuller Jill
reply by the author on 17-Jun-2012
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Yes this is very well written and reads very well ,very descriptive about the soul I love your closing line well done good luck regards Fuller Jill
Comment Written 12-May-2012
reply by the author on 17-Jun-2012
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Thank you for this wonderful review...I haven't forgotten you! :) xoxo. Susan
Comment from gazzagodbod
souls will cry before they die wow love that little line and the piece in its entirety is fab thank you so much gazzagodbod
reply by the author on 17-Jun-2012
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souls will cry before they die wow love that little line and the piece in its entirety is fab thank you so much gazzagodbod
Comment Written 12-May-2012
reply by the author on 17-Jun-2012
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Thank you for this wonderful review...I haven't forgotten you! :) xoxo. Susan
Comment from Val Crisson
"Our souls are songs of who we are" - what a beautiful line. This a very lovely depiction of the soul, and I relly like that you discuss human and animal souls. I have one thought, the first sentence - 'round. I think I know what you mean by that, but it broke the flow for me and some might not even get it.
reply by the author on 17-Jun-2012
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"Our souls are songs of who we are" - what a beautiful line. This a very lovely depiction of the soul, and I relly like that you discuss human and animal souls. I have one thought, the first sentence - 'round. I think I know what you mean by that, but it broke the flow for me and some might not even get it.
Comment Written 12-May-2012
reply by the author on 17-Jun-2012
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Thank you for this wonderful review...I haven't forgotten you! :) xoxo. Susan
Comment from bulbul
An excellent definition of 'soul' in a very poetic way. Loved the depth of thoughts in it and the comprehensive view of what soul is. Especially liked: 'souls are strong...to reach the moon and stars. Wonderful writing.
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reply by the author on 17-Jun-2012
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An excellent definition of 'soul' in a very poetic way. Loved the depth of thoughts in it and the comprehensive view of what soul is. Especially liked: 'souls are strong...to reach the moon and stars. Wonderful writing.
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Comment Written 12-May-2012
reply by the author on 17-Jun-2012
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Thank you for this wonderful review...I haven't forgotten you! :) xoxo. Susan
Comment from BrookeClara
This is a lovely prose poem with great bimages and internal rhyme. This ending is lovely:A soul connects the heart and mind, and gives the sun it's shine. I'll be thinking about it today. Brooke
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reply by the author on 17-Jun-2012
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This is a lovely prose poem with great bimages and internal rhyme. This ending is lovely:A soul connects the heart and mind, and gives the sun it's shine. I'll be thinking about it today. Brooke
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Comment Written 12-May-2012
reply by the author on 17-Jun-2012
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Thank you for this wonderful review...I haven't forgotten you! :) xoxo. Susan
