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Life Is Just A Fantasy

Speculations of a dreamer

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Comment from pattipac
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Like the way you describe the soul as what makes life worth living. A soul radiates love, hope, forgiveness, and joy. The soul is tender of heart and reaches out to those in pain and sorrow. The soul is the part of us where our Creator resides. It is the bridge for God to humanity.

 Comment Written 12-May-2012


reply by the author on 17-Jun-2012
    Hi there! I send this belated thank you with apologies and a thousand thanks...I really appreciate this kind review! xoxo. Susan
Comment from sweetwoodjax
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this is very well written, susan, you did a great job writing this essay on what makes up the soul, you have presented a great thought process here. i enjoyed reading it, good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 12-May-2012


reply by the author on 17-Jun-2012
    Hi there! I send this belated thank you with apologies and a thousand thanks...I really appreciate this kind review! xoxo. Susan
Comment from Darla9
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our souls are songs of who we are

I love that. You've got my vote :) Beautiful piece of writing, and I love that photo, stunning!

 Comment Written 12-May-2012


reply by the author on 17-Jun-2012
    Hi there! I send this belated thank you with apologies and a thousand thanks...I really appreciate this kind review! xoxo. Susan
Comment from c_lucas
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This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for a very good read. There is very good imagery and descriptive scheme. Good luck in your contest.

 Comment Written 12-May-2012


reply by the author on 17-Jun-2012
    Hi there! I send this belated thank you with apologies and a thousand thanks...I really appreciate this kind review! xoxo. Susan
reply by c_lucas on 17-Jun-2012
    You're welcome, Susan. Charlie
Comment from Earl of Oxford
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Lovely ideas in this excellent entry, Realist. You also mention kittens, and why shouldn't they have souls too. I don't see why us pesky humans should have exclusivity. Mind you...now I'm wondering. What about flys and cockroaches etc. Hmm... ;-)

Good luck and best wishes, earl

 Comment Written 12-May-2012


reply by the author on 12-May-2012
    Now, Earl! Dang it. I have to wonder ... this is why I question the powers that be. It's just too much for my pea brain to comprehend! lol! Thank you for a fun and thoughtful/thought provoking review! Susan
reply by Earl of Oxford on 12-May-2012
    No probs, Susan. Eh...what about reviewers who give me 3 stars? Huh! - they've no chance. ;-) x
reply by the author on 12-May-2012
    Oh dear! I've had my share of those! lol! At least they reviewed for you...I'm so far behind it's pathetic...I'm cleaning my old house today, and contemplating bug bombing for spiders. NOW, I'm worried they may have a soul...What are we supposed to do? There are so many, there is NO way I can just capture them and take them outside! Darn you EARL!! Hug. S.
reply by Earl of Oxford on 12-May-2012
    You're CRAZY, Susan, but that's good! LOL x
reply by the author on 12-May-2012
    I have no retort...LOL! :) s.
Comment from forestport12
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Wonderful way of using the sun as a vehicle and symbol of light and the idea of transferance. Souls lost in the light are better than those lost in darkness. I'd rather be blinded by the light. As always very timely descriptive phrases. Stan

 Comment Written 12-May-2012


reply by the author on 11-Jun-2012
    Hi again Stan. I always love your notes...encouraging and kind. A real honor too. To know you like something of mine! Thank you so much!! :) Susan
Comment from robina1978
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It is not at all easy to make this into a very short poem. Think it might have been easier for a poem. But I liked it a lot. Loved how you also put in the kittens eyes-LOL. Best wishes for the prompt.

 Comment Written 12-May-2012


reply by the author on 17-Jun-2012
    Hi there! I send this belated thank you with apologies and a thousand thanks...I really appreciate this kind review! xoxo. Susan
reply by robina1978 on 18-Jun-2012
    very welcome, Ine
Comment from Gungalo
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Well said, except I don't believe the soul ever dies, girl. Maybe the rest of us but our soul live one forever and will be there when the next round starts .... whenever and wherever that may be.

 Comment Written 12-May-2012


reply by the author on 17-Jun-2012
    Hi there! I send this belated thank you with apologies and a thousand thanks...I really appreciate this kind review! xoxo. Susan
reply by Gungalo on 17-Jun-2012
    LO accepted. I love ya.
reply by the author on 17-Jun-2012
    HUG! S.
reply by Gungalo on 17-Jun-2012
    Hugs to you.
Comment from humpwhistle
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Really nice, Suse. Part poem, part prose, but
every bit the truth. Though I'm not sure life is a fantasy.
I think it's just complicated. A lot of your themes are wrapped up in this piece, Suse. I hope you are receiving your own message. Great work.

Peace, Lee

 Comment Written 12-May-2012


reply by the author on 17-Jun-2012
    Hi Lee! I'm cutting into the reviews! I am so sorry to be late, but I know you understand. Thank you for reading...and I'm glad you are here for me. :) Susan
Comment from wiljacro
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HI! Realist101.Your poetic description of "SOUL" is the nearest that I have ever read, to the perfect understanding of something that is so intangible, but which everyone possesses.I found this work, truly remarkable, and it really brightened my day,it is so encouraging. Thanks for sharing. wiljacro.

 Comment Written 12-May-2012


reply by the author on 17-Jun-2012
    Hi there! Wow! I apologize for this late reply...I read this and really appreciated it then, and now as well! Hugs and smiles. Thank you again!! :) Susan