Life Is Just A Fantasy
Speculations of a dreamer37 total reviews
Comment from Mastery
Outstanding, Suze. I agree with your last Para in particular:
"And though the devil tries to sway all the good away--souls are strong, they rise above, to reach the moon and stars. And souls will cry before they die, but shouldn't be afraid. A soul connects the heart and mind, and gives the sun it's shine."
Great job, and Happy Mother's Day to you.
Incidentally, I haven't gotten a review in quite a few chapters and realize we are all busy...but I really would appreciate your input like I used to get. :) Bob
reply by the author on 13-May-2012
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Outstanding, Suze. I agree with your last Para in particular:
"And though the devil tries to sway all the good away--souls are strong, they rise above, to reach the moon and stars. And souls will cry before they die, but shouldn't be afraid. A soul connects the heart and mind, and gives the sun it's shine."
Great job, and Happy Mother's Day to you.
Incidentally, I haven't gotten a review in quite a few chapters and realize we are all busy...but I really would appreciate your input like I used to get. :) Bob
Comment Written 13-May-2012
reply by the author on 13-May-2012
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Hi there Bob! Thanks for this kind review! I do send apologies, I have been unable to sit and review lately because I've had several health issues. My back is giving out on me. Literally. I've picked up one too many heavy boxes. Please forgive me, I can write these tiny stories in minutes...it takes hours to read and review. I am thinking of getting a laptop so I can sit and not be in pain. Congratulations too on Book Of The Month! I did see where Joey is growing up. Nice work Bob!! Take care of your back...it's the key to all else...hugs and smiles...Susan
Comment from Sherry Asbury
Love this. Your imagery sends the minds whirling and the poetry grabs at the soul and teaches us what that amorphous state stands for. Very good write and I enjoyed it very much.
reply by the author on 11-Jun-2012
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Love this. Your imagery sends the minds whirling and the poetry grabs at the soul and teaches us what that amorphous state stands for. Very good write and I enjoyed it very much.
Comment Written 13-May-2012
reply by the author on 11-Jun-2012
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Hi and I send best wishes to you for a great week! I sure appreciate this review and also that you took a minute for me. I am sorry too, for another late thanks. NOT good. I'm trying! Love and smiles! Susan
Comment from Skyangel02
Interesting definition of a soul. Life is indeed a fantasy to many. It's a shame the fantasy is not the happy ever after kind in spite of the hopes and dreams that it end that way.
reply by the author on 13-May-2012
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Interesting definition of a soul. Life is indeed a fantasy to many. It's a shame the fantasy is not the happy ever after kind in spite of the hopes and dreams that it end that way.
Comment Written 13-May-2012
reply by the author on 13-May-2012
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Hi Sky! Thank you so much! I feel this way...like my life is a bad dream and maybe, just maybe I'll wake up soon! LOL! I wish. But I have to keep trying. I"m so glad you liked this...it's how I really feel. Now, that by no means I'm right!! :)) xoxo! Susan
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Waking up from a bad dream is not easy when you are in a deep sleep and warmly snuggled up in a comfortable bed. Very few want to get out of their comfort zone. Most don't even want to open their eyes because they find the light too blinding. They prefer to hide from it. That's how I feel and I know I am right.
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I agree. I'm really not the sunny person at all. Not right now anyway. I go to sleep and sometimes hope I don't wake up. I guess that's hiding too. Yet...I cannot sleep over 7 hours if that! It's awful!! Sleep tight! :) Suse
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Only the dead rest in peace Suse. The living all go through hell before they get to rest in peace.
Such is life.
Comment from Vladilynn
You really used your poetic way in this prose! We really need to Live, love and play. Very magical if we can always used these three, it may cure the illness of stress and loneliness as well. Happy healthy us, body, heart and soul.
Thank you for sharing and good luck for the contest.
Love much,
Lynn:0)
reply by the author on 17-Jun-2012
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You really used your poetic way in this prose! We really need to Live, love and play. Very magical if we can always used these three, it may cure the illness of stress and loneliness as well. Happy healthy us, body, heart and soul.
Thank you for sharing and good luck for the contest.
Love much,
Lynn:0)
Comment Written 13-May-2012
reply by the author on 17-Jun-2012
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Hi Lynn! Thank you so much. I'm glad you liked this, and I also apologize for another late thank you! I always appreciate you. xoxo too! Susan
Comment from CHarte
This is a wonderful portrayal of the human soul. It makes us who we and it is ours to love and cherish. Well written.
Good luck in the contest.
Collette
reply by the author on 17-Jun-2012
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This is a wonderful portrayal of the human soul. It makes us who we and it is ours to love and cherish. Well written.
Good luck in the contest.
Collette
Comment Written 12-May-2012
reply by the author on 17-Jun-2012
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Hi there! I send this belated thank you with apologies and a thousand thanks...I really appreciate this kind review! xoxo. Susan
Comment from Ted T
Hi Susan :)
Now you're on the right track with this one, finally a bright spot.
You get a gold "Twelver" to go with the "Sixer"... well done and uplifting.
Ted
reply by the author on 11-Jun-2012
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Hi Susan :)
Now you're on the right track with this one, finally a bright spot.
You get a gold "Twelver" to go with the "Sixer"... well done and uplifting.
Ted
Comment Written 12-May-2012
reply by the author on 11-Jun-2012
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hey Ted! I send extra hugs for extra stars, and more, for the great encouraging thoughts. Nice! Thank you very much! Susan
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Thanks for the hugs.
We'll be off and running on your two-book project soon.
Let's keep all that contact through e-mail, not here. I await your response on the project.
Ted
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:) s. I'm off to dream a little dream...
Comment from Permelia
This poem speaks to the heart- and it carries a powerful message I don't know when I have read anything that describes a soul better.
reply by the author on 11-Jun-2012
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This poem speaks to the heart- and it carries a powerful message I don't know when I have read anything that describes a soul better.
Comment Written 12-May-2012
reply by the author on 11-Jun-2012
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Hi Permelia! Thank you so much! What a kind and gracious note...I'm very happy you like this. It just is how I feel. An easy write. A big smile and a hug for the extra star too! xoxo. Susan
Comment from MumEsGirl
I liked this novel approach to theis contest prompt. I remember as a child trying to figure where my soul was located. The nuns led us to believe that it moved around.
More poetry than prose here, but a great work
hugs
kate
reply by the author on 17-Jun-2012
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I liked this novel approach to theis contest prompt. I remember as a child trying to figure where my soul was located. The nuns led us to believe that it moved around.
More poetry than prose here, but a great work
hugs
kate
Comment Written 12-May-2012
reply by the author on 17-Jun-2012
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Hi there! I send this belated thank you with apologies and a thousand thanks...I really appreciate this kind review! xoxo. Susan
Comment from cheyennewy
Hi Susan,
I enjoyed reading this and if I didn't know better I would have thought it a piece of poetic prose. I wonder if all livings have a soul. You have used poetic license an you know how much I like that! Well done and good luck in the contest....blessings, chey
reply by the author on 11-Jun-2012
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Hi Susan,
I enjoyed reading this and if I didn't know better I would have thought it a piece of poetic prose. I wonder if all livings have a soul. You have used poetic license an you know how much I like that! Well done and good luck in the contest....blessings, chey
Comment Written 12-May-2012
reply by the author on 11-Jun-2012
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HI Chey! I hoped you would! I almost sent this to you first! But, I'm always so close to the deadline! I'm so happy you approved. Honored too. I think this won? I can't remember. Sad. SEE? I'm a month behind on thank you's. I'm awful ... xoxo. Susan
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Silly girl...you are not awful! I too am behind and determined to catch up...I hope, xo chey
Comment from Spiritual Echo
Well I'll be damned, really quit astonishing. The prompt requests either poetry or story, but while I read yours I truly thought I was reading poetry, postured by paragraphs.
Either way, it was a wonderful insightful piece of literature.
reply by the author on 11-Jun-2012
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Well I'll be damned, really quit astonishing. The prompt requests either poetry or story, but while I read yours I truly thought I was reading poetry, postured by paragraphs.
Either way, it was a wonderful insightful piece of literature.
Comment Written 12-May-2012
reply by the author on 11-Jun-2012
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HI again Ingrid! i just did this without one thought. That's usually the best way for me. Odd. I like this one too. And that's rare. I thank you very much Ingrid! LOVE, susan
